A/N: This is going way better than I thought it would. Some of you may find Illya's servant to be, well any one but the Assassin Emiya but I do have a reason. I re read the story and it seem I was not clear enough for that I apologize. After Illya was save she panic about dropping it, what she meant here was the catalyst for summoning Berserker Heracles. I believed that the von Einsbern use a catalyst to summon Heracles a stone or something i'm not clear whether that was canon or fanon but in this it is canon. And as for the other servants, Archer Emiya or CG Emiya could be summon but due to her not liking him currently he was out. For Mordred, as Shirou like in most other would summon Saber, and that would be epic, Illya vs Shirou, Saber vs Berserker Mordred but as you all know, Illya is the daughter of Kiritsugu Emiya and has his blood flow through her and as blood can be use as a catalyst, the Holy Grail call forth a Kiritsugu Emiya, even if he is not her father, he still is Kiritsugu Emiya and thus he was summon. I hope you all understand my reasoning. P.S. Since I already change the servants some of the others will also be different so watch out for some curve.
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Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters, or the franchise in which they belong.
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Illya's POV
Well this could not get any better, here I'm sitting in a plane that will take me take to the battle field for the Holy Grail war, Fuyuki city with a Servant version of the father that abandon me and let my mother, his wife die, this is just great. I could still here the talk I had with my grandfather, he was not please but we could no longer do anything, but that does not mean I have to like it come on how would you feel if your father who abandon you look alike was your partner, by the root this is mess up.
"So, how are we going to do this master" asked my Servant, through our mental bond.
"We already have a base, a mansion that we Einzbern usually use during the war. With Sella and Leysritt to help defend me while you go do your thing and kill the other master and servant, though it is not ideal we can still win this", I answered back.
The original plan was for me to summon a Berserker and use him or her to attack the enemy while I stay protected by either the two most powerful Homunculus we have and my own prodigious magecraft and mystic code created through alchemy, but that can no longer be the case as I summon an Assassin. Due to this Assassin thinking and working in the same manner as my father, grandfather believed that having him do his thing would be for the best. Though grandfather was not please he was appease by the thought that he will be under a command seal and thus can not betray us in such a way.
"Finally", I thought, "Finally, after all this year, after all the training, will shall meet soon, my onii-san", I thought as I plan my revenge and if anyone were able to see my face they would probably see my blood thirsty smile that would probably have them call security, though I would just hypnotize them perks of being a magus.
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Assassin's POV
"My what a scary master I have", I thought as wave upon wave of malevolent aura and killing intent flow out of my little master. Though I was a little surprise at seeing my master was a little girl, it was nothing compare to the look she gave me like she receive what she wanted the most along with her most hated, it was quite a complicated expression. That is without mentioning the von Eizbern lord who look second away from either attacking me or dying. It seems from their reaction that they know of me or my more famous or infamous title as magus killer but with how familiar they act I'm starting to suspect it is something more, but that is not my business nor my problem. The Holy Grail an artifact that is said to be able to grant any wish, that is why I answer the call, for a miracle and I will let nothing get in my way to finally having what I want.
"I have nothing to lose anymore, I will win at any cost" I promise myself.
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Sakura Matou's POV
'Gehhehe, it is finally time, soon I will have the Holy grail' said a elderly man of questionable mental and physical health. This being was my adopted grandfather. Ever since my adoption into the Matou family my life has been a living hell with night spend in the worm pit. I am broken, filthy and disgusting and the only light in my life is my senpai, my kind and gentle senpai that make my life bearable and I will always love him for it.
'Well Sakura start the summoning, and show us your worth'; said the vile worm, breaking my thought out my beloved senpai.
I started the summoning but my thought were only on my senpai, my hero and as the summoning continue I felt a pull on my prana and the glow intensify. Then a brilliant azure glow appear from the circle blinding us momentarily, and from that light appear a beautiful woman.
'By your summon I have appear, I asked of you are you my master' she speak with a clear and melodious voice.
'Yes, I am your master' I answered
'And by this our contract is complete, let us fight with all our love, Master' she answered
'Well it seems you did not mess this up, yet' said Zouken with sadistic glee, 'Let's hope you can actually win this war, eh Sakura'
"Senpai wait for me" I thought.
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Normal POV
On a hill over looking the city of Fuyuki, there lay a church. Two figure approaching it, both of them moving with grace and speed that's far more than what human could reach and step that had little to no sound, they reach the front of the church where they were let in by the father that was in charge of the Church.
'Thanks for your time Father Kotomine' the one who spoke was a young women wearing a suit with pixie cut purple hair (A/N I forgot the appearance of certain character and due to my Pc being unable to enter a wikia I'm kind of guessing).
'Think nothing of it, I'm more than happy to help an old friend' answered Father Kotomine, who appear to be a man of tall stature with brown hair and eyes, with his broad shoulder and muscular form, he can instantly be seen as a powerful combatant.
"So this is the man you were talking about, the old friend from work, eh Master" inquired the other one a tall muscular man who appear to wear no shirt at all through the Master-Servant link, which shows that he was one of the powerful entities know as Servants.
"Yes, Kotomine was a powerful ally and a friend during his time working with us" answered the female of the group.
'As you may already know, I am Kotomine Kirei, current overseer of the Holy Grail war', introduced the Father.
'I'am Bazett Fraga McRemitts and this my Servant Saber, it is nice to meet you again' said the now named Bazett.
'We are here to register for the Holy Grail War, Kotomine' said Bazett
'Of course follow me' instructed Kirei, as they walk deeper into the church, 'You are the first master who came to see me', he said
"Master I've got a real bad feeling about this" warn the Saber class servant.
"What do you mean?, there is nothing to worry about" Bazett answered back through their mindlink and brush away her Servant warning but deep down she was also on edge as she too felt something wrong.
As they walk deeper into the church in silence, Kirei suddenly hold a number of Black keys, armaments of the church and attack Bazett and attempting to cut off her arm, the arm that contain the Command Seal for Saber.
'Watch out' screamed the Servant as he pull his master away from harm.
'What is the meaning of this Kotomine?' scream Bazett, 'Why have you attack me!' demand Bazett as she and her Servant get ready to defend themselves.
'Why is it not obvious, that I too wish to partake in this war' Father Kotomine answered calmly, "Tch, I wanted to sever her arm with that attack, o how she would have look marvelous, the look of shock slowly turning into pain and then betrayal, the humiliation and anguish she would have felt, it would have been glorious but that blasted Servant had to get in the way", thought Kotomine in angered as not fulfilling his desire for pain.
'The overseer of the Holy Grail war is suppose to be a neutral party and not interfere, to attack one of the participants, tell me why Kotomine' demand Bazett in rage and confusion. She thought Kotomine was an ally and had nothing to fear in the church as it was neutral ground but it seems she was wrong.
'Master be careful' said the Servant, 'Something is here' he warned her feeling tense and uneasy
'Hahahhaha, priest it seems you have failed in your attempt at assassination has failed' came an arrogant but regal voice, and in a ripple of gold he suddenly appear. The being contain tremendous power, his golden lock of hair and ruby red eyes gave him the look of a divine adonis, he has an air of an apex predator, with his lazy but regal bearing to his sharp and prideful smirk on his lips, he gave of the impression of arrogance, believing himself to be untouchable.
'A Servant' gasp Bazett in surprise, as she look at the being in front of her, 'Impossible, a Servant here but your not a master Kotomine so how, don't tell me you team up with a master' Bazett asked with well hidden fear. "If the overseer of the war himself start to pick side there is no telling what could happen" thought Bazett.
Though she hid her fear well, to the people around her, it was easy to pick up on. Her Servant start to inch in front of her to try to protect her, while Kotomine just stand there looking with no emotion what so ever. Though from the looks of it the other Servant was quite amuse with what was happening.
"Master we must flee, we are not going to win this" thought Saber through their link. Bazett who was looking at the pair in front of them, subtly nod.
As the pair got ready to flee from their, golden ripple started to appear behind the golden Servant with weapons poking out off them ready to fire, 'Well what do you think you're doing, who gave you permission to ignore me and attempt to leave. To ignore a king such as I is a crime worthy of death, so prepare to die' declare the gold Servant, voice filled with arrogance and rage opening more gold ripple with more weapon.
At the sight of so many weapon, the duo curse their luck and prepare themselves the best they could eve if they were barely halting their own fear. Then the weapons fire with the speed of sound and impact the ground around them.
BOOM!, the earth started quaking and smoke begin to rise into the night sky, as golden light flashes in the night, people look toward the church to try to see what happen but only smoke and fire was seen.
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A/N: Well that is chapter two, if you have any complain do post it in the review and I will try my best to answer them. An one of the changes I made was that Sakura will not transfer her Servant to Shinji and of course Bazett survive Kotomine ambush to try to get her Command Seal. Well, enjoy.
P.S. This is a re-write version as the other one was not that great, so I hope this is better then the last one. As I post in the first chapter, I can not do emotion, I write great essay yes but novels or stories forget it. All the characters I write always have this mechanical robotic way of speaking and most of my writing are too formal. This is why I choose to do this, to learn how to write characters that can portrait emotion and give a sense of feeling to my stories, that is the main reason. in the net all you people can read it and easily criticize it through the review, allowing me to improve. That you people may et higher quality stories to enjoy is probably a bonus. So read, review, criticize and don't forget to enjoy.