Well, what a start for the first chapter. I hope you enjoyed it.
I'm not going to a lot more of those Ed POVs because I had to put Ed being totally stupid, but it's hard to think about what's going on in Ed's brain so I had to put a bunch of random stuff to make it look like he was dumb.
All I know is that the others shouldn't be that hard to do POVs of, but if they are, I'll just do this without POVs.
Anyways, enjoy this next chapter.
Eddy's POV
Lemon Brook Highway, I thought. A bunch of mascot-hating, lemon-sucking losers. I can't believe THEY have their own highway, and we don't. The lucky ones.
"Eddy, please tell me we're going the right way. I'm starting to feel very exhausted and my sweat glands are acting up. Why does it have to be so hot today?" he said.
"Can it, Sock Ed. We're going the right way, I can feel it." I said. I was actually lying because I have no idea where this place is. I don't care. I just want to be rich in this circus.
"Ed, are you sure they have a circus near Lemon Brook highway? It seems like a circus would be demented in a place like that." Double D asked Ed.
"CIRCUS, DOUBLE D, CIRCUS!" Ed shouted out loud. Sometimes I wonder what screwed up his brain when he was born.
"Eddy, look! It's a road that leads to Lemon Brook highway!" Double D told me.
"How can you be so sure? This place is demented, just like you said." I said.
"Well, according to my calculations, this road crosses between the factors that lead to that highway over there. Apparently, my estimations say that if we go right we can cross between the damages of the road and succeed at getting to the circus." Double D said. Ed and I were just walking to the left. I don't know how he does, but whenever Sock Ed talks, I just feel like doing the opposite of what he says.
"Hey, where are you going?!" Double D called out.
"We're going to the circus, duh." I said.
"Yeah Double D, duh." Ed said.
"But the circus is this way!" Double D said, pointing right.
"EDDY!" Ed said jumping on top of me. What the heck was he doing?
"Get off me Monobrow!" I said kicking Ed off.
"Look! It's a tent!" Ed said making me look at a gigantic tent. It was colored red and white, like a Big Top. It was the circus. For one of the rarest chances at life, Double D was actually wrong, and we were right!
Double D caught up to us and his mouth hit the ground. "I don't believe it." Double D said.
"Believe it Sock Ed! We were right and you wrong. Money and cash here I come!" I said rushing towards the circus.
"Don't you mean money and fame?" Double D asked.
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. We're going to be rich boys." I said. I couldn't wait.
"I'M GOING TO BE A LION!" Ed shouted and we ran all the way to the circus.
I know what some of you are thinking right now. "We've waited almost a month for this?!"
Well, I totally lost track of time and couldn't' write because of school and stuff, so I didn't want to leave you hanging, so I just decided to write a short chapter, but I have a new idea.
To help me write faster and post chapters more frequently, I'll give you a choice of what I could do for future chapters. This doesn't mean you're giving me 'What If…' Ideas, you can still post those, but try to answer the question if you want. If I get no replies, then making these chapters will be harder for me.
This chapter's question is: What should the Eds' talent for the circus be?
It's a pretty simple question with no right or wrong answers. Anyways, let's move to the reviews.
DoOmeDZoMb1E- Hmm, Eddy's brother helping him and the Eds sounds like a good idea. It doesn't seem stupid at all. I'll have to wait some time though because it's going to be chapters until the end. Good idea. Thanks for the idea and review.
Coraircate- Well, I'm not sure. The kids would've caught up if they didn't have all those obstacles such as the Kankers, Kevin's bent wheel on his bike, Rolf needs to find Wilfred and if Jonny wasn't such an idiot. I might allow them to catch up. Good idea! Thanks for the idea and review!
supersexyghotmew95- Ed was pretty upset when there was no Santa, but he snaps out of things easily, or sometimes easily. Thanks for review! (I think?)
OmegaDelta- I hope this will be good, but it depends on all of you. Thanks for the review.
Matfix- Yeah, they'll catch up, but if Kevin suspects they're going to Eddy's brother's place, he's probably got another thing coming. Thanks for review!
D-U- Good idea. Maybe I can think about that and put it into the story. But if the kids caught up to the Eds while they're naked, that would be pretty, weird I guess. Thanks for idea and review.
Thanks for your reviews and I promise that making another chapter won't take this long again. But remember to answer the question or submit a 'What If….' Idea.
