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The scene shows the fox girl, walking around a town which is crowded with people going on their daily basis.
She was walking with her body bents a little, her tails were flail down as so were her ears," Uwahh! " she screamed to the sky, she stops walking, stood still and hold her head with both arms.
"Why did I lost track off them in the village?! I was right on their backs a second ago.. " she said as she bents back body and starts walking again.
You should've keep track off them everytime Onu Nikxof, " the man besides her said, he was wearing a butler costume and has teal green hair and eyes.
"Yeah, yeah, whatever Raus, besides, " she turned around to him, "Don't give me orders. " she said, with a threatening voice and face, but he didn't even flinced.
"That's not going to work on me, you know that well. " he said, sending his own death glare, as she shivers to her knees.
"Sumimase... " she apologized, bowed slightly.
After a few minutes...
Onu sighed in disappointment, with Raus having a stressed look on his face.
"Why couldn't we find him...? " she said, a little bit sad as Raus puts his finger on his chin.
"Perhaps they may have gone on another place to find a "Fury" I heard. " he guessed.
"Is that so... then where are they heading anyway? "
"..."
The duo fell in despair, as everything was about to losing hope Raus bumped into somebody.
"Oh sorry. " he apologized as he raised his hand to the person.
He look at the fallen person and stares at her, she is 12 and half year old girl with bright blue eyes and medium-long, pale blonde colored hair with wave nearing the bottom. She wears a blue bow tied onto a headband, matching her frilly blue and white dress. At the neck and on each side of the skirt rests dull red bows with gold broaches in the middle with a heart etched on them. She also wears red chunky shoes with red bows at the tongue of each, white pantyhose, and a single brown bracelet. On her back Lola carries a huge red coin purse.
She took his and Raus apologized, she flared up a little at the sight of the butler, " Hi, my name is Lola, are you interested in finding some information? " she said in a cute tone as Onu had a light bulb on her head.
"Aha! Hey Lola could you tell us about a guy named Fang passing by~? " she said as Lola smiles widen.
"I did- "
"Yes! " she fist-pumped on her side.
"But it will cost you a lot of money~ " she said, freezing Onu in shocked.
"W-W-W-Well- " Onu was about to speak until Raus interrupted her.
"How much? " she jaw drops as Lola whispers the amount of money and he pays it, with cash coming out of his pocket.
"W-Wh-Wh-Where did you get all that!? " she shrieked.
"By doing some jobs I found two hours ago. " she sweat drops.
"Well, we payed for it, now Lola, " she turned her gaze at Lola, " The Info. " she glare daggers at her with a menacing face.
"Sure~ you see, Fang and Eryn met me just about a few minutes ago- "
"What!? " Onu shouted as Lola clears her throat.
"They're heading to Sol Plain to find a Fury there! " she chirped as Raus took Onu's hand and started running in a speed of light.
"See you guys again~! " she said as the duo disappeared in blink of a star.
Sol Plains...
"So this is the Sol Plains... " Eryn said, looking around to see a grassy field and some giant mechanical parts everywhere, " Wow, this place is enormous. " she said with a surprised expression.
Fang catches up to her, "...Hey, why don't we set up a camp here and call it quits for the today? " he asked, in a tired tone.
"It's too early to feel tired! " she scowled at Fang, " C'mon let's go! " she said, running ahead.
"Fine, fine. " Fang replied, following her lead.
After a long walking and fighting, they've reached their goals.
"Ah, is that it? " Eryn asked, seeing a sword stabbed to the ground, " That thing lodged over there. That has to be the Fury. " she said to Fang who was beside her.
"Jeez, you're working me to the bone. Let's just hurry up and pull it out so we can get outta here already. " Fang said moving ahead.
"Wait, hold on... * sniff, sniff* Something smells yummy! " Fang said as he headed to the source of smell, leaving the Fury behind.
He then saw a table, filled with food, " Oh, that looks tasty! " he said with an excited face.
""Hey, Fang! What about the Fury!? The Fury! " Eryn scowled him, but he ignores her.
Then he saw a fair-skinned teenage 18-year-old girl with pink eyes and long, flowing white hair worn with a black frilled headband that has a bow on each side of the head, where big pink gems sit. Her outfit consists of a short black and white frilly dress with black frilled cuffs on each wrist, along with black shoes that have white markings. Her stockings are white, with the right one having a garter on the top. Around her neck is a black ribbon with a pink gem, and on her left foot is a silver charm with a pink gem in the middle, holding a tea cup with both hands.
On the table is a puppy with long bushy ears matching it's tail. On each ear is a big circle with a line, along with a few parts of hair at the top of the head. It's eyes are dark red, and at it's neck they wears a dark colored bow with thin white lines on each part, and a bright pink gem in the middle.
"Weary traveler, you must be exhausted. I have just brewed some chamomile tea. You are welcome to partake of it with me. " the girl said in a polite tone.
"Sweet! That's awful kind of you. " Fang praised her, as she smirks in the shadows.
"W-Wait a minute, Fang. Anyone can see this is clearly suspicious. " Eryn said, with worried eyes.
As Fang drink it, he suddenly fell to the ground.
"Ugh, m-my body... I can't move... " he said, lying on the ground.
"Was that paralytic tea!? Jeez Fang, you moron. I told you this was suspicious. " she scowled at the idiot Fang.
"Who... the hell are you? " Fang asked, struggling while looking at the manipulative stranger.
"Oh my. Not a word of gratitude after I served you some delicious tea? How rude. " she said, standing up from her seat, "Well, it matters not. My name is Tiara, and this is my fairy partner Cui. " she introduced herself and her partner/fairy.
"Cui! Cui! " the puppy chirped looking at Fang with a bright smile.
"You still have much to learn about being a Fencer if you fell for such a cliche trick. " Tiara said, staring down at him.
At the background...
Onu and Raus has reached Sol Plains and have tracked Fang and Eryn, only to watch the scene unfold.
"How dare she do that to the cute guy. " Onu said, looking at Tiara with gritted teeth and slight anger on her face.
"Calm down, Onu. We watch how this goes first... " Raus said, holding her down as she flinched and roll her eyes.
"You have learned a valuable lesson, yes? As a token of gratitude, I shall accept this Fury on your behalf. " Tiara said, heading towards the sword.
"H-Hold on! That's just downright dirty... " Fang said, struggling to get up.
"Sure you jest, for am I squeaky clean. Now then, drink. " she said, shoving a cup into Fang's mouth.
"Wh-What the heck is this? More poison? " he said, closing his mouth.
"No, it's an antidote. I cannot bear the thought of leaving you in this state. " she said as she forcefully tries to enter the antidote inside Fang's mouth, "If you consume this, you'll be able to move in roughly five minutes. During those five minutes, I shall take my leave of you. " she said, harshly.
"Ngh, I thought you were being kind for a second, but you're really just a lowdown, dirty trickster. " he said, looking at her, while gritting his teeth.
"The only dirty here is your face. Your fairy friend has quite a shameful face, too. Hm, I suppose you two are meant to be. " she said.
The duo behind the background gasped as Eryn fumes in anger, " WH-WHAT DID YOU SAY!? " she scowled.
"Tell me about it. She got a really foul mouth, too. " Fang said, a little bit scathed by Tiara's word.
"Oh my. It seems we're getting along rather swimmingly. " she said, in a calm and excited tone.
"Now's not the time for you two to get along! " Eryn scowled, her veins are throbbing.
"Y-You're right. Hey, you stuck-up bitch! You've got a really crappy attitude! You better watch your back from now on! " he said, insulting Tiara.
"H-How can you say something so dreadful!? " she then starts sparkling in excitement, " Ah, oh... but... For some reason, I am getting... rather excited. " she said as Onu vomits in the background as Raus pats her back.
"What's wrong with this chick...? " Eryn said with a disgusted look.
"I hate masochist... " Onu said as she continues to vomit again.
Tiara pulled out the Fury, "Now that I have the item I was after, I shall take my leave of you. Good day. " she said as she walks away.
"Ah, h-hey! Wait! Hold on!Damn it! " she said/thought, "Fang, get it together! We need to go after her! " Eryn scowled at the poor Fang.
He tries to move, "My body's still paralyzed. I can't move... " he said, still struggling to moves.
After 5 minutes, Fang recovered, and start chasing after Tiara and Cui, Onu and Raus, who were sneaking from behind, silently follows them while helping under the shadows.
Tiara was walking through the field as suddenly a man, with a sword on his neck appears.
"Oh my. Who are you? " she asked, in a rather calm voice.
"Heh heh heh, I'm a low-level hoodlum. It's customary to encounter someone like me at this point. " the guy said while smirking, " Now shut up and hand over that Fury. " he demanded, pointing his sword at Tiara.
"How drool, I have nothing to give to someone as boring and uninspired as you. " she insulted him.
"Tch, then I guess I gotta use force to claim my prize. I might as well snag you will I'm at it, too. " he said, standing in a battle stance," Heh heh, I can't wait to see that cute face of yours after it's soaked with tears. " he said as he was about to move until.
"I wanna see that too. " a voice inquired.
Both of them turned around to see Fang and Eryn standing in a heroic style.
"Huh!? Who the hell are you guys!? " the Hoodlum Fencer said.
"Oh my. So you decide to pursue me. Fang... was it?" Tiara said as he- " I understand, you've come to shower me with love. Hmhmhm, you certainly are an adorable boy. " she said, sparkling.
"That's not why! " Fang inquired.
"You! Are you this woman's ally!? " the bandit said pointing at Tiara with his blade.
Fang instantly said, "Nope. "
Tiara interrupt, " Yes, that is correct. This is my loyal servant. " she said as she goes behind Fang, " Oh Fang! This bothersome rogue is attempting to force himself upon me. Could you be a dear and assist me? " Tiara acted as Raus looks with a nod.
"That girl is pretty good. " he praised Tiara.
"Don't give her compliment! " Onu said at him while pulling him back to their hiding spot.
"Who the heck is gonna help you...? " Eryn said, disgusted at her acting.
"Heh, so you're also a Fencer, huh? Good timing. Hand over your Fury, too. " he demanded.
"Aw crap... " Eryn said as the bandit comes closer.
"...Damn, I guess I've no choice now. " Fang said as Eryn enters Fang's Fury and he stood in a battle stance.
After the battle...
Fang defeated the bandit, as he runs away from them.
"Good work, Fang. You are quite strong. " Tiara praised her as Eryn exited Fang's Fury.
Fang and Eryn looks bewildered.
"Oh my. Is there something wrong? " she asked.
"Nah, I'm just surprised. I totally pegged you for someone who'd run away while we were fighting. " he explained.
"I completely agree. " Eryn joins in.
" There is no way I would do something so uncouth. " Tiara said, with a bit of angry tone in it," At any rate, I have an idea that will make you both exceedingly happy. " she said while smiling.
"...An idea? " Eryn said, unsure about the idea.
"I shall let both of you become my servants. How does that sounds? Isn't this wonderful? This makes you happy, right? " she said/asked, while sparkling with excitement.
"Huuuh...? " Eryn said, confused.
"I feel much safer travelling with skilled individuals like yourselves. " she said, somehow tries to confused them, " When a helpless, beautiful maiden such as myself travels alone, I am often accosted by all sorts of brigands. " she said while making a helpless face.
"Yeah yeah. " Fang said, ignoring her acting and look at Cui.
"Why you selfish little... Why should *we* teamed up with *you* in the first place!? " she said, pointing at Fang and herself, then at Tiara.
She raises an eyebrow, " Oh my. This would be beneficial for you as well. Having more party during combat is advantageous, right? " she pinpointed out one reason, " Additionally, a relative of mine manages a nearby inn, so I could also provide you a place to rest for the night. " she spoke up as the duo were speechless.
Eryn spoke up," Gimme a break! Why should we travel with an underhanded,conniving,two-faced- - "
"Does that inn have tasty food? " Fang asked, almost sounded like a child.
"Certainly. I heard that they acquired a chef from 5-star restaurant. " she said as Fang lightens up.
"All right, let's team up! " Fang proposed.
Eryn eyes widen, "You're just saying that for the food, aren't you!? " she scowled at him.
"No, that's not the only reason. She's right. Battles will be very easier if there's three of us. " he said.
"It'll be easier to collect the Furies, too. " he added.
"... You better not make her collect the Furies while you slack off. " she scowled at Fang.
Fang ignores her, "Anyway, take me to that inn of yours. I wanna know what 5-star food taste like. " he said as Tiara giggles.
"Yes. Please follow me. " she said as she leads the way, Fang followed her from behind.
"Hey, wait a sec! " Eryn said, the one who's falling back behind, "...HEEEEY! " she shouted.
The hiding duo came out as they saw Eryn running after them.
"So, that girl are gonna be in your way, right? " Raus said to Onu as she sigh.
"You're right... I can't do anything about it as well. " she said, sighed in disappointment.
Meanwhile...
A desert with some giant mechanical parts can be seen an old man with a small little girl is being robbed by three Hoodlum Fencer with each different clothing.
"I-I don't care what happens to me. Just spare my grandchild's life, please... " the old man traveller begged at the bandit as they smirks evilly.
"Grandpa! " the little girl said.
"Shut up! If you keep blabbing, I'll kill you with one blow! " the first bandit said, label as Bandit A.
"If you wanna save yourselves, hurry up and folk over all your stuff! " the second bandit said, in a threatening tone, he's Bandit B.
"Leave that kid with us, too. Don't worry, we're not gonna kill her. " the last bandit said, acting the leader and label-ed as Bandit C, " We'll make sure we make a good price for her.. after we had some fun with her first. " he said while laughing to the air.
"E-Eek! " the old man panicked, worried about his grandchild.
"Nooooo! " the girl traveller shrieked, as she were being pulled away.
Suddenly a sandstorm appears.
"Whoa! What the heck...!? " Bandit A says, while blocking the sands from entering his eyes.
"Ah crap, a sandstorm!? " Bandit B cursed.
"Pardon me. You seem to be in some trouble. " a man said, as the sandstorm dies down.
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"H-Huh...? Y-You're... " the old man pointed at the man.
"Wh-Who the hell are you? " Bandit A said as he pointed his sword at the man.
"Where'd you come from? " Bandit B said, showing a little fear.
"Why are you here!? " Bandit C asked.
"What would you like to know about me? " the man asked, cooly, " My name? My way of life? Or perhaps... my prowess with a sword? " he said.
And then, in a flash, two slashes of light can be seen.
"Gah! " Bandit A cried out, being hit back to the ground.
"Aghhhh! " Bandit B shrieked.
"Eeeek! " Bandit C shouted.
The three bandits stumble to the ground, dead...
"My name is Sherman... Not that it matters to the matters to the dead. " he coldy says as he stares at the bodies, while smiling innocently.
"[Sherman, enemy forces has received additional reinforcement.] " a high-tech robot said, appearing out of nowhere.
Suddenly, a new bandit appears.
"Wh-What's going on here!? My loyal minions! They're... Why you! I won't forgive this...! " the Bandit Boss said.
"I see... you wish to follow them into the afterlife. This will not be pleasant for you. " Sherman said, in a rather calm tone, " Ryushin, release your full power and prepare for assembly. " he ordered.
"[Negative. Enemy strength inadequate to warrant assembly. Probability of victory at your current power is 100%.]
"I would prefer to hold back nothing back when facing my enemies, but in this case, I'll make an exception. " he said while staring at the robot.
"Y-You bastard! I dunno what the hell you're talking about, but no one makes a fool outta me! I'll cut you too pieces! " the bandit said, running to the duo as suddenly, two slashes can be seen.
"Gyaaaaah! " he said, before died while looking at the sky.
"Your prognosis were correct, Ryushin. " Sherman praised his partner, " Now then... are you injured, sir? " he asked, looking at the shocked old man and his grandchild.
As the old man and the little girl gave thanks to Sherman and Ryushin, they left, leaving as some flowers grow nearby, making a beautiful scenery one can imagine before walking away...
THE END OF THIS CHAPTER
