2. One hell of a response
Harry Potter looked into a room with complete and utter horror. He didn't plan to be put into a situation where he found his girlfriend fucking her own brother but he found himself there none-the-less, and hyphenatedly so. He looked towards many sources as to the possible reason for the predicament and found only one reason. YOU. You, my gentle reader where the reason for this and no one else.
Harry Potter prayed for another solution to this but found no other reason except that the gentle reader of this story found it to be rather like a train on the tracks that had come to a point that would go no further.
He reached up from the pits that he found his rather lacking Gryffindor courage to be a whimpered rather weakly. 'Why?' He thought and then before answering his own questions sat and stewed. He had no direction, nor encouragement towards which way the passer-by wanted him to go. He didn't look towards praise or atta-boys I can't wish to see what you do next.
Harry just simply wanted it to end. But for some unknown reason he knew that there were UNKNOWN people whom tended to rate what was happening without so much as a word to the kind and gentle narrator
So this is where we found our story, sitting in limbo. The story wanted to be told but the readers didn't really care one way or another because their rather full tube of tissue was sitting there unused, unwanted but mostly because they didn't find a description that declared a Harry/Draco ship and that it wasn't a poofy challenge to get them all pointing north.
In fact, Dorothy approached this journal and found that not only were the entries not friendly whatsoever, but that the rainbows weren't imprinted upon a bumper sticker with friend catch phrases leading the reader towards orange as the new pink.
If you're reading this, in fact then color me disappointed that you didn't invest enough of an opinion to say that it sucked the first go around, and if there is the glint of hope that you liked the hack job I did, well, too little too late.
