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EmeraldGreen4Life: Hey, thanks for the review! I was thinking that my story probably wouldn't get any reviews, but thanks for proving me wrong. And thanks for spotting that, my friend, also a really helpful beta-reader's computer died, so I edited it myself. Considering that I can't spot mistakes for nuts, I'm surprised I got it polished this well.
Again, thanks for the review! I might rethink and rewrite this in the future and put it up.
Cheers, Schizo