I got this PM so... Lets do what this person says (even though i cant understand half of it XD)
The writing quality is fine, but this story breaks the part of the Content Guidelines due to using reviews to guide the story:
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
Here are three solutions to make this a rule-complaint story:
1. Please make sure you accept requests via PM only.
2. You can create a forum where you place the requests and people can submit and continue to interact as the story evolves.
3. Please delete and repost while utilizing either Solutions #1 or #2. This is to remove the 'evidence' of your story being interactive to the admins. However, the more reviews you already have, the more reluctant you will be to do this. So do not push this one.
Extra note: Just be aware that most reviewers are unaware, so chances are a bunch will still review with requests despite the way you get submissions. You might need to be advised of this.
From: catspats31, Member of EliminaTors