OMG u guys are amazing and I got 164 reads o.o holy snap! oh and no one told me the third maids name! :o but I remembered LUCY lol I love all your helpful reviews:

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Guest: lol yaya maxerica! and yea I am trying to upload fast its just cuz of school and all .-. sowwie. and yea am going for twice a week. And I will not ever forget the story ;) lol

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OK now on to the story? ( so I decided to start over but from America's pov and continue from there) see u guys at the bottom ;)

America's pov

I wake to the sound of the radio on my pretty tiny alarm its 6:50 am, am still early but I still get up anyways. I walk out of my room to the only bathroom in the house which is down a narrow hallway with an old carpet on the floor. I walk into the bathroom and look at myself in the small oval-shaped mirror, ugh my hair is messy. I decide to take a shower since I have lots of time left.

I take my quick shower (mostly because the hot water was running out quick) and I wrap my towel around myself. I blow dry my hair for like 5 minutes and let it dry by itself. I take another look in the mirror my dull blue eyes need some eyeliner and mascara. I take another 5 minutes finding my eyeliner and mascara and putting it on. To be honest the only reason it took me a while to find it is because I only use it on special occasions so when I sing at parties and stuff like that. Yea I know you'd think a singer would have all the money in the world but am not like Beyoncé am just me America Singer a middle class girl who is a pretty good singer and sings at parties to make her own money to help support her family, am nothing special. I go back to my room and I see the door open to my parents room and no one is there so that means they are making breakfast. Wow my last breakfast in my home, well for like the next few months. Oh yea I forgot to mention I applied for the music scholarship at Carolina Boarding High ( sounds to fancy for my liking but my mother forced me to. Ugh!) and I got accepted after they went to one of my school concerts and I was singing, I was embarrassed because they stood up and clapped! For me! I was happy but that meant leaving home, and Aspen, but he broke up with me when I told him that I was leaving home and going to that boarding school. I really am heartbroken, I truly am I don't think I can love another guy as much as I loved Aspen. we would meet up in the tree house in the backyard of my house. Oh how I will miss those beautiful nights with just me and him up there! But I promised not to cry over some guy... even though it hurts so much! nope no tears America! I look at my bed and there lays my dress that I would be wearing today to see Mr. Shreave , who is the principal of Carolina Boarding High, he told me that his son will be showing me around. His name is Maxon... I bet he is just some stuck up, spoiled, snotty, brat and most likely a player I've seen him before from the website of the school they show Mr. Clarkson's family, Maxon is his only son and his wife is beyond beautiful! The best part is that she is the music teacher! I've only heard great things about her! I pick up my dress its a simple blue day dress that goes right above my knees. Am ready. I take one last look at my room, which is practically bare, all I see is my twin sized bed, empty closet ( everything is in my luggage), a desk that my father made for me a while back, double windows, and a flat plain carpet.

I take my luggage and walk out of my room and close the door. I walk with my luggage wheeling behind me. I walk into the living room and walk up to the door and place my luggage there and walk into the kitchen where I see my mother, my dear father, my sweet little sister May who is 7, and my adorable 4-year-old brother Gerad. I will miss them so much! "America!" Says May running up to me with her arms wide open and I pick her up " Good morning May" I say back laughing " America am so happy for you! Your going to see Maxon! " says May I forgot she was looking at the website with me and she practically feel in love with the snobby daddy's boy " Oh yea he is going to be giving me the tour of the campus, isn't he?" I ask almost forgetting " OMG America how could you forget!" she says practically scolding me! " Jeez kiddo I just forgot haha no biggy" I say laughing at her and I put her down and I spot Gerad " hey lil boy don't I get a goodbye hug?" I ask and he rushes up to me and I pick him up. He whispers in my ear " I love you sissy" I hug him tighter " I love you to Gerad but you'll see me soon I promise" and I set him back down and turn to my parents who finished setting the table " Oh daddy! I will miss you so much!" I choke on my word by my tears but I force them back in so I don't ruin my makeup " Dont worry sweetheart you'll be fine. Am proud of you. " he says while caressing my hair I kiss his cheek " Thank you daddy." And I turn to my mother who isn't really showing any emotions! " Goodbye mother, I would stay for breakfast but I better get going before my ride gets here" I give my mother a hug and step away when I see through the window a black car and a driver coming out of the car and to our door. " I guess that's my ride guys" I say. " Goodbye dear" says my mother and so I walk out of the kitchen and go to the door when there is a knock at the door and I open it and there us the driver who looks like he is in his mid thirty's " Ms. America Singer?" he asks " Yes that us me" he smiles at me" ah well if you don't mind I will take you luggage for you." he takes my small luggage " um is that all?" he asks me, he probably thinks I have more " No,that is all but thank you very much I will follow you out now." I say and I turn back to my family" Bye guys" I say trying not to spill the tears that are threating to come out. " Goodbye America" they all say and I walk out the door.

The chauffeur opens my door and I get in and he closes the sleek black door. once am properly seated on the black leather cushions the man gets in and I put my seatbelt on. " How are you feeling Lady America?" Lady!? whoa um am not royalty! " I am fine...?" I say showing him to tell me his name " Ah yes my apologize Lady America my name is Joseph " he says smiling and he starts the car " Well pleased to meet you Joseph" I say " Ah the pleasure is all mine Lady America" he says giggling with me " Lady America? Really?" I ask " Yes. Mr. Shreave has made all his workers call the ladies attending CBH Lady and whatever their name is" he says and starts to laugh " It is quiet silly to be honest Lady -" I cut him off " Call me America please. And yes it is very silly" And I giggle " So is it true that Mr. Shreave also works for the government of Illea?" I ask curiously " Yes it is. And can I tell you something... America?" he asks " Of course" I say " You'll love CBH." he says " huh?" I say " you seem a bit... nervous about all this but don't worry America it'll all be fine" I think he is right I felt better " Thank you Joseph. And your right I shouldn't be so nervous" I laugh again " yes, you shouldn't " and he laughs with me again. And the rest of the ride is peaceful.

We get to CBH and Joseph was right its beautiful and humongous ( A/N ill describe it later in the next chapter) " Don't worry about you bags America you maids will place everything. ( A/N uh you know how I said that Maxon's maids were Lucy, Mary, and Anne they will be America's maids instead so uh Maxon's maids are Sarah, Samantha, and Britney sorry) Maids!? " Uh maids? what do you mean Joseph?" I ask " He means your personal maid Lady America" a voice behind me says and I freeze up and turn around but only to face my principal Mr. Shreave " Hello Mr. Shreave. I did not know that we were getting our own personal maids?" I say more like a question and I see Joseph behind him a bit and he mouths " Curtsy" and he shows me and I quickly follow... why is this so palace like?! We are not royalty... well at least am not! " Yes Lady America you and your roommate will have three maids" he says his voice is so thunderous " each?" I ask letting my curiosity show " No. Just three" he says " Shall we go to my office?" he asks and I nod my head. " Oh and not to worry about your bags the maids will get them" he says normally. What the fuck! Maids? this place is like a flipping palace and he acts so normal about it! I feel like this, all this is some weird other dimension! Its cray! But I put on a "normal" face on and follow him into the school or what I will call the palace. (A/N once again ill describe everything later ;) to tired) we walk into the office after a couple of turns we make it into his huge office with paintings around the wall and a red wood desk that is probably 3x bigger then mine! He takes a seat at his desk in a big leather black seat. " Ok America my son should be here soon to show you around campus but here is your schedule" he says and I take it from his hand and I look at it:

1st period : Science

2nd period: Math

3rd period: History

4th period: Free period

Lunch

5th period: Music

6th period: Spanish

7th period: Art

8th period: Free period

Wow two free periods so I can explore this beautiful place! " Thank you Mr. Shreave" I say. And thats when I hear the door open and that only means... Maxon. UGH this is what I dread the most a spoiled brat! And he walks in and I turn around " America this is Maxon he will be showing you around campus today." Says Mr. Shreave. "Hello Maxon" I say as politely as I can and I extend my hand out and he shakes it. I bet he will hand sanitize it later. " Hello. Shall we get started?" He says and he looks at his father uh i mean Mr. Shreave for approval and that's when I notice am still holding his hand and he notices to and we quickly pull away " Yes now run along. Remember classes start in two days so Wednesday since today is monday and we want everyone moved in and comfortable. Good day America" says his father " Thank you very much Mr. Shreave. Good day to you to." She says with a quick nod of her head. I wont last a second with him! Kill me now please!

Ok my fingers hurt... Lol no they dont this was fun! Haha how was it? Horrible? Amazing? Eh? Ok so comment what you want to happen in the next chapter and REMEMBER guys there are no bad ideas ;) oh and i wont be writing during the weekend espacially saturday shopping spree with just me and my sis :D OH and wanna do a question and answer thing? I think ill be fun so ask your questions and ill answer one or two each update ;) byee