I will be doing review answers on here, too.
Q & A:
Q: When will I be updating?
A: Whenever I can, because this is the second chapter in this story, and i just started this story today, so i don't have a scheduled time.
Q: Will my chapters be longer?
A: Yeah, they will be but i don't want them to be too long, but the last chapter was WAY to short. sorry about that.
Okay, here's chapter 2!
Chapter 2
Jaypaws POV
Jaypaw yelped in surprise when a paw prodded into his side.
"Get up, its Whitepaw's and Featherpaw's warrior ceremony!"
"So? all they did today was pass their assessment and make fun of me because I didn't pass mine. They don't deserve my
respect!" Jaypaw snapped. "Sorry Thorntail, but they don't."
"Jaypaw, wouldn't you want them to be at your warrior ceremony? C'mon, it wouldn't be fair to them." Thorntail meowed
encouragingly.
"I don't think they want a failure at their ceremony, that wouldn't be fair to them."
"JUST GET UP, JAYPAW!" Thorntail yowled, frustrated that the tom wouldn't just listen. He is always so difficult, Thorntail thought.
A simple "No" was all Jaypaw replied, and Thorntail stormed out of the den, unable to control his anger. Great StarClan, he needs
help, Jaypaw sighed.
"JAYPAW!"
Oh, what now? Its so stupid how they think they can control me. I should hide, but where? he thought.
"Over here!"
"What? Who was that?" Whispered Jaypaw, confused, but curious.
"Its Stormkit, over here, there's a hole in the den that you can probably fit through," said the little she-kit.
Jaypaw spotted the hole and padded toward it. "I don't think I can fit through it."
" Just try, Jaypaw, there's a trail back here and I want to follow it because I think it leads to the dirt-place tunnel."
"Okay, I'll try it, then I can go for a walk and miss the ceremony." He whispered. He slunk through the hole only to find
Thorntail with Stormkit dangling from his jaws, her ears back and her eyes said, 'I'm so sorry.'
Thorntail was smirking, and he dropped the kit in Jaypaw's paws.
"You can carry her over to Graypelt, she was looking for her and i don't think she will be happy that you took her." Thorntail
smiled slightly and padded out in front of the apprentices den. Stormkit looked up at Jaypaw with wide eyes.
" I'm sorry," she whispered and looked away shyly.
"Its not your fault. I should have just gone out in the first place." Jaypaw mewed, looking at the kit.
Stormkits POV
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!" Sunstar yowled.
"I guess we should go." Stormkit said before she bounded out to her mother. I hope she's not mad, I just don't like when she
yells!
"Stormkit, where were you?" Graypelt mewed worriedly.
"Oh, you know, around."
"Shh! Its starting!" Mewed Lilystream.
" Featherpaw, Whitepaw,do you promise to uphold the warrior code, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do." Whitepaw and Featherpaw both said at once. They looked at each other, surprised and wide-eyed, then looked
back at the leader.
"Then by the powers of StarClan,I give you your warrior names. Featherpaw, from this moment on you will be known as
Featherheart, StarClan honors your knowledge and courage, and we welcome you as a full member of ThunderClan." Yowls interrupted
Sunstar, "Featherheart! Featherheart!"
"Whitepaw, from this moment you will be known as Whiteheart. StarClan honors your bravery and knowledge, and we
welcome you as a full member of ThunderClan." Sunstar finished. Everyone started cheering.
"Featherheart! Whiteheart! Featherheart! Whiteheart!"
I cant wait for my warrior ceremony! i wonder what my name will be? What about Stormheart? or Stormstrike? Fox-dung! i
still have to go through my apprenticeship. I still wonder!
A yowl interrupted her thoughts.
"ShadowClan, attack!"
I know this is short too, but I don't want to write long and boring chapters, so I'm writing short ones with exciting
endings! thanks guys, and I only got one review last time, so review please! And I will work on longer chapters:) thanks and in
your review, who's your favorite character so far? thanks guys!
-Leafshine4