The story starts off from earlier on at the orginal story..

And before that, there's a flashback to how they ended up there.

4 MONTHS AGO:

Packie, Johnny, Dash and Carly, and Jimmy finally were invited to some kind of disco party the day before by there new friend Grant Brody, and his girlfriend Daisy.

"It's great to be away from Trevor for once" Carly said, holding a beer, and needing to shout over the music.

"You said it, I love the guy, but he's a fuckin nightmare!" Her brother Jimmy cried, the two having gotten closer during the trip, cause Jimmy has finally started growing up a little, and acting like a human being. But least till he returns home and goes back to that damn game.

But Carly dosen't care, she'll still take it.

Suddenly Packie and Grant came over.

"Hey guys, Grant and I found this guy here, who told us about an awesome oppunity" Psckie said, pointing at the club DJ, who, unknown to them, was a spotter for Vaas Montenegro.

"Yes.. Heard you guys are looking for a crazy time.. There's a place called Rock Island where you can literary do anything" the man said.

"Count me in!" Carly cried excitedly.

The next cuts a makeshift music video of Carly and the group, enjoying their vacationin Bangkok celebrating Carly's brother Jimmy on getting a pilot license. As part of the vacation they decide to take a skydiving trip, as the DJ told them the Rock Island was perfect for this.

It than reveals that it was preshown footage from Carly's phone, being shown by Vaas, who appearently kidnapped them, as the DJ was secretly a spy.

"You two think you're crazy, huh? Jumping out of airplanes... flying like birds? (chuckles) That is crazy!.. (shows to have stolen Carly's phone) I like this phone. This is a nice fucking phone... So, what do we have here? Grant, from California.. And Carly, from Los Santos.. Well, I hope your mama and papa really, really love you, cause you two white kids look expensive! And that's good because I like expensive things" Vaas said, putting Carly's phone in his pocket.

Grant tried talking, but his mouth was gagged.

"I'm sorry, what was that?" Vaas mocked.

Grant again tries talking but Vaas becomes suddenly enraged.

"DO YOU WANT ME TO CUT YOU OPEN LIKE I DID YOUR FRIEND!?" Vaas screamed, he is most likely talking about Vincent Salas, Carly''s friend who was cut from the game due to limited time issues.

"SHUT THE FUCK UP!.. Okay? I'm the one with the fucking dick! Look at me, look me in the fucking eye., (Grant looks away from Vaas) HEY! YOU FUCK! Look me in the eye. (Grant looks Vaas dead in the eyes). You're my bitch. I rule this fucking kingdom. Shut the fuck up... or you die. (Carly mumbles too) (Vaas turns his attention to her) What is it, Carly? Carly, what is it? Why aren't you laughing like you did up in the sky?.. What, is this not fun any more? Have I failed to entertain you?.. You see, thing is, up there, you thought you had a chance. Waaaay, up in the fucking skies, you thought you were the king of the fuckin world didn't you?,.. But hermano, down here... down here... You hit the ground" Vaas said, intimidatingly.

Carly, realizing the seriousness of the situation, stayed quite. This guy was scary, even to HER.

Vaas laughed to himself.

"It's okay.. Cause the three of us, we're gonna be spending a LOT of time together as we wait for the mon-"

"Vaas. Stop scaring the hostages, I need you to take care the rejects" A man, later known as Hoyt Volker said to the scary looking man in-front of Carly and Grant.

"Let's hope you two pieces of FUCK are more entertaining than your friends.. Ta-ta.. bye bye" Vaas said to Carly and Grant, before following Hoyt and both were gone.

Grant secretly cut himself free, and then freed Carly.

"Are you okay?" he asked.

Carly could only node in silence.

"We gotta get out of here, call that guard over" Grant to Carly.

"You serious?" Carly asked, her voice still a bit shaky.

"Yes, do it" Grant sternly replied.

Carly called over one of the Pirates, who came over, telling her to shut up. But Grant grabbed him and broke the man's neck. Scaring Carly a bit.

"That's what they teach you in the army" Grant said to himself, and grabbed the guard's key, unlocking the cage, and Carly and himself.

"Alright, follow me, and stay quite" Grant told Carly, despite not fully knowing where he was going.

Carly followed Grant threw the hostile area, sneaking past the pirates. And Carly saw Vaas shooting down prisoners while mocking them about nobody wanting to pay for them, having it be the last thing they ever think about.. Yikes.

Grant and Carly entered a small house, but a Pirate was napping inside and stood up to call the others, but Grant quickly threw a throw knife into the man's head, killing him silently and instantly.

"Oh shit, he's dead" Carly whispered to herself in a bit of shock.

Grant moved the body to a hiding spot, so it won't be found later, and then opened the door silently.

"G -Grant I can't do this" Carly said, the situation finally being too much to her.

Grant grabbed her and shook her a bit.

"Hey.. Hey.. I can't find Johnny, and Daisy, and Dash, and Packie, and your brother, without you.. So hold it together. Okay?" Grant sternly told her.

"Okay.. Okay.. Sorry, sorry" Carly said, trying to calm down.

"God. I never should of brought Jimmy" Carly quitely said, sad for her brother (maybe for the first time).

"We're find him.. We're find all of them" Grant quietly told her.

Before getting to that "extended ending".. I'll do an "extended intro".. What happened to the others, during Grant's and Carly's escape.. And maybe some other extended scenes from the beginning half.