AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok
Ilvecoffee-n-narutoYouth: So I've decided I'm going to go a bit further than just editing this story. I'm going to try to rewrite it, keep characters in character, and cut out anything that doesn't make sense...like the entire Vampire Potter name change thing. This is written on my iPhone, so I apologize in advance for any strange formatting. I'm still not touching the AN's; it makes a nice contrast.
The next day I woke up in my bedroom. The weather was just like the previous day's: raining, snowing, and delightfully dreary. I pushed open the lid from inside the coffin-style bed I slept in (not exactly practical, but extremely awesome). The outside was a shiny ebony, and the inside a soft, pink, velvety material. After I got out of the coffin, I shed the oversized band tee I used as pyjamas And changed into a black dress, my boots, some earrings, then put my hair in a bun.
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) woke up and smiled at me. I always thought Raven was extremely pretty. She had long, shiny black hair, clear, green eyes, and a flawless complexion. She sleepily shuffled around the room and put on her clothes, then she sat down next to me in front of the mirror as we put on our makeup.
"So..." Willow began with a grin on her face. "Rumor has it you were talking to a certain Malfoy boy yesterday." Though I loved Willow she had some major flaws, especially being the biggest gossip in all of Hogwarts.
"So what if I was?" I said, trying to keep a blush off my face.
"I knew it!" Willow laughed and pumped her fist. "Just watch. By the end of the week you're gonna tap that."
"You're disgusting, Willow." She only winked at me in response. We then left our rooms and made our way to the Great Hall for breakfast.
"You know what you need to do?" Willow asked me as we took our seat at the Slytherin table.
"Enlighten me." I said dryly.
"Go over there, drop trou, and say: 'I like you and I want you. Now we can do this the easy way or we can do this the hard way. The choice is yours'. Then just ravish him."
"How you haven't been arrested yet is a surprise to me." Willow was about to say something but then trailed off as she looked down the table.
"Here comes Romeo."
"Who's Rome- oh, hi Draco." I tried to keep my blush down as he sat next to me.
"Hello Ebony and...Whitlock."
"Willow."
"Whatever." He rolled his eyes and then sneered as he looked over at the Gryffindor table. "The stench of mudbloods and blood traitors is horrible in here. I've completely lost my appetite."
"Yeah. Haha," I laughed nervously. "Those darn mudbloods." Draco looked at me quizzically and Willow buried her face in her arms, trying to keep herself from laughing loudly. I kicked her under the table.
"Anyway, this band is playing in Hogsmeade, and Crabbe and Goyle are forcing me to go. Maybe you would like to go? Or not; I don't really care."
I gasped. "I'd love to go."