The Immortal Spirits

by Owari the Terminator

It was dark, and she felt dry... The next thing she felt was the pain, sadness, sorrow, and the slight trauma that was madness. There were whispers all around her, images of blood and war in her head. She opened her blood red eyes."... I'm awake."

2. Frozen in Time

Chapter 2: Frozen in Time

(Point of View) 'Thoughts'Flashback"Talking"Narration

"MIM talking"

Oh, I forgot to mention in the last chapter that I decided to make the rating mainly be M because of colorful words, angst, hurt and comfort, and violence. I'm not particularly good at writing violence and would appreciate help.

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(Eldest Sibling, WWII, somewhere in Europe)

'….. Where am I? What happened? I remember….. nothing. What…. who am I? Am I…. dead?'

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'….. What is that? I hear… screaming? Fighting? What is going on? Is there… a war? I…. I can smell blood! Is someone dying? Th-The smell's so strong, I feel like I'm being covered in it!'

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'….. It stopped.'

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'… Why? Why couldn't I do anything? Could they not see me?'

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'…. Maybe…. I am dead. It would make sense. I mean, I can't move, can't breathe, can't open my eyes… can't even scream.'

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'….. I need a name. Something to call myself, something others can know me by since I can't remember anything. Something…. that will make me stand out. Something that if heard, people will immediately know that it's me. Something like…'

Sorry, I'm going to have to stop it there. You'll get the next chapter soon! Oh, and thanks, Proud To Be Canadian, for telling me about that. It really helped. Sorry I haven't made a chapter in a while, and I'm about to start on the next chapter.

Sayonara!

Owari

P.S. Owari is actually Japanese for 'end'. I have been getting really into Japanese things, lately.