Took me a while to get on with this story… Thanks for the reviews it helped me a lot and I changed some things about the first chapter.

Reviewers are thanked by FMA cookies and a hug from Al's human body

Meas: If DutchCherry12 owned Fullmetal Alchemist I would be alive today!

Jolien was allowed to leave the hospital after two weeks she heard she was taken in by a woman named Riza Hawkeye. Jolien didn't know what she should think a strange woman wanting to take care of her! She sounded like she was crying but she couldn't shed any tears.

Hawkeye looked at the girl and then hugged her trying to comfort her. "You must still be upset but everything will be alright I will be taking care of you. You will need to get used to thing but I'm going to help you" Hawkeye said rubbing the girl over her back.

Jolien cried harder in Hawkeyes arms happy that she was in good hands. Jolien turned her head upwards to face Riza then she smiled and nodded like saying she was ready to go home.

All that Jolien had left now was her stuffed animal which was a dog even though it looked more like a rabbit now. Jolien hugged it tight to her body murmuring things to it. Riza smiled while she drove to her apartment.

Hawkeye helped Jolien out of the car and then led her to the door of the apartment.

It only took Jolien a week to get used to her new home. Hawkeye found out that Jolien was a shy girl but really honest. Jolien could talk for hours though and she talked a lot about the things she had learned her friends and what she wanted to do when she was an adult.

What Riza didn't know was that Jolien somehow was learning alchemy. Well she was learning human transmutation Jolien wanted to bring them back her family.

She had seen alchemy before and she knew how to draw transmutation circles she had seen the human transmutation circle too. She calculated from the size of the room how she would draw the transmutation circle.

Then she made three bodies with the components needed. Then she put her hand down on the circle.

She felt energy go through her body it felt great to her but then she felt the energy turn into pain and she screamed. She was in front of the gate but she was shocked that she could see the 'person' who was in front of a big gate.

"Welcome Jolien surprised that you can see me? Well that has to do with the fact that you are at the gate" The 'person' grinned at her she felt her legs falling away as her left arm "What you did was very bad girl…I will take toll for that. But you won't get them back though. But I'm a nice person you will be able to make out forms of people. Have a nice day further" He disappeared and Jolien felt a great pain in her legs and left arm.

She felt around with her right arm to feel if they were still there but she felt that her arm was gone up to her shoulder and her legs were gone up to her knees "No…I want them back give them back! Mom, dad sis!" she broke down crying holding herself with her only arm

Riza saw Jolien covered in blood. She was doing her best not to vomit inside the circle where three bodies all messed up. Riza didn't care about that right now she scooped Jolien up in her arms and took her to the hospital.

The doctor said that Jolien would need automail but Riza didn't know where to get it. She asked the doctor if he knew where she could find it. He told her about Rockbell automail in Resembool. Riza nodded and thanked the doctor.

As soon as Jolien was allowed to leave the hospital Riza took her to Resembool for automail. Pinako was surprised to see a young woman holding a seven year old girl asking her for automail for the girl. Pinako let them in and she prepared the operation. Riza sat down on the couch and held Jolien's head on her lap. Winry, Ed and Al just came in and saw Riza and Jolien. They rushed to see the girl and Winry asked what happened Riza said that she had an accident and she lost her limbs and her parents and sister. The three of them gasped and looked at Jolien with pity in their eyes.

Ed noticed Jolien's eyes "Why are her eyes like that?" he asked pointing at them. "Some of the fuel of the car got in her eyes and it burned them" Pinako came into the room saying that she could start the operation.

The operation took three hours one hour per limb. Jolien took it all without screaming once. "It is truly amazing that she took it all so well most adults scream during the operation" Pinako said to Riza once she was done.

"She will need a lot of time to get used to the limbs" she then said and Riza looked at Jolien's sleeping form. "Is it okay if she could stay with you and your granddaughter. I can't be with her all the time and I have to go to the front soon. I can't leave her alone like this" Riza looked at Pinako with pleading eyes

"Yes that will be fine she needs a lot of attention and care and I will be willing to take the time if you can't" Pinako said looking at the girl. Ed Winry and Al then came into the room "Is she really staying with us Granny?" Winry asked her eyes full with excitement as were the boys eyes

"Yes Winry she is. Now if you would be very calm with her she has been through a lot and she still needs to get used to the automail." The kids nodded and went over to their new friend who just stirred.

Neither of them knew this was the beginning of a great adevture.

Lame ending DX.

Well that's chapter two tell me how you liked it or didn't but don't make flames those are for the coronel!