A/N: I have edited the chapter 0 so it should have fewer typos and grammar error than before. But the story is still same as before because it was hard to upgrade the fight scene more than before, so just wait until sometime later. On another note, I also appreciate for everyone who read, fav/follow and review this story. I'm not a beginner in writing but this is my somewhat-kind-of-first to publish a full-blown English language story. On other note, I feel FFN has really weird UX difference between website, mobile website, and apps; or it's just me feeling this? Anyway now I'm going to answer the reviews, started from older ones
Guest: "This was nice and all..but, why did you give him two family names? Maybe he wouldn't like the name Shirou, but Emiya and Menethil are both family names."
Well yeah, I know Emiya is a family name, but in my perspective, EMIYA is more label rather than family name as we could see CG Not-so-Shirou Emiya, CG Kiritsugu Emiya, Emiya Alter, Nameless Emiya, so because Emiya seems like a brand already, I just take it for granted and made Emiya his given name.
Guest: "Your grammar and tenses need a lot of improvement. Get a proof reader."
I did use Grammarly and Ginger as my tools, but halfway through in the last chapter I skipped the proofreading so yeah. The edited chapter already up so I hope it's up to your standard.
Guest: "Too much anime like"
Well don't know what to say, maybe it just my writing style as I tried to extend fate style into worm itself, but minus the dark and tragedy. As I'm kinda weak hearted to that genres, but not to violence and gore… maybe.
For sonic: Thanks man!
For OgamiRei-kun: Thanks for your input, I made the PRT data based on Wikia and some example they provide. How could I miss structural grasp, I really make fool of myself there so yeah I could see he classified as thinker. For the blaster, I think 4/5 is okay for various noble phantasm bullet, and extra 1 level maybe for the fact he could shot to any angle and still hit his target (jokes for his animation, which he shoots while spinning his gun). Though it is debatable to put it into blaster as UnlimitedVoid Lost Work is a bullet or the noble phantasm is to project his inner world into real world, as in his target. And yes Emiya Alter could invoke his RM, as seen as in his final ascension artwork, but he doesn't show it yet so PRT didn't have the data. As for mover I had seen some servant stat in wormverse at spacebattle forum, their opinion to fuse the servant stat reinforcement (speed, power, durability) into brute classification, and that also another thing I miss about sword regeneration. Trump is highly possible, but also quite impossible. As tinker tech relies on technology rather than history/achievement of the weapon itself, there was a chance Emiya couldn't trace it, it was same as Shirou couldn't copy Gilgamesh's EA nor copy firearms. But as I said it's highly possible because this Emiya was EMIYA Alter after all, and he uses guns. The last one, I quote from type-moon wiki "A Skill that may very well be called "Protection from Arrows" by means of the most modern Heroic Spirit. It's designated as bulletproof, but strictly speaking, most projectiles can be repelled". So yeah. Thank you very much for your insight though, and I hope maybe we could continue this discussion via pm.
See ya later~
PS: I shall open a challenge to take this one-shot into series. It's okay if you change the setting, premise, etc, as my only request is to you pm me first and keep the premise of EMIYA Alter reincarnated/dropped into wormverse, that's all.
Also, below is 'What If' I'm going to continue this story, not that I will with the heavy theme and fame original worm had.
Butterfly effect
- Because Coil's death, Tattletale decided to keep the money inside their base instead of boat graveyard, no fight with Bakuda
- Undersider meeting to decide their fate, Lisa told them the truth, Grue grew anxious as his main income disappear, Taylor sensed it was finally time to said goodbye. Then Accord contact them to meet with him and a group called Travelers
- Emiya decided to keep Dinah at his apartment, because of possibility told by her that she more likely kidnapped again if she stayed in her home rather than with him. Emiya didn't care as long as Dinah behave herself.
- Bakuda bombing start slightly earlier than canon
- Because of Bakuda bombing start earlier, Parian's family luckily still alive and only experienced a minor injury
- Contessa paying a visit to Emiya and Dinah. Later Dinah made a plan to save the Earth Bet with her and Emiya power together.
- Meeting at Somer's rock not going smoothly because no Coil means harder to persuade Faultline crew
- No Coil mean no E88's civilians identities leak.
- S9 Come to Brockton Bay as the fight against ABB still ongoing, chaos issues.
- Nameless made his cape debut, taken care of S9, rogue, some vigilante and some people from new wave.
- Then Leviathan happened almost immediately
- Then bunch of complex chaos issues (ROB did this)
- A long time later, Emiya solo Scion inside his RM. The end
- Foreshadowing Abbadon happy reaction with Zion demise.