ok as i said these chapters i had written a while ago so the further we get into the story the mire it'll look more my style ok.

Chap 2
Her heart fluttered at his words. Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out two tickets.
"I bought two tickets for the 'Annie get Your Gun' play you said you played Annie in a high-school play so I thought you would want to see it." he said kind of fading out at the end. She smiled the biggest smile he'd seen yet and kissed him hard. When she pulled away her arms still wrapped around his neck and his around her waist with the tickets still in hand. "You still haven't given me and answer, will you go with me?"
"Yes!" she said. She had never seen the play before and desperately wanted to ever since she was chosen for Annie Oakley in her school play.
"Well I'm glad to hear that, little Missy; it's in three days at 7:30pm I got the best seats in the house. Well that weren't reserved for the families and VIPs." he said. How he got a woman like Reba was way, way beyond him. He had special plans for them and he was sure that this play would be one that she never forgot.
Over the next few days Buzzard was gone most of the day and she found herself going to bed alone and waking alone. This was not normal for him so she was worried that she had said or done something to offend him. She didn't want a repeat of every man she's ever tried to be in a serious relationship with. On Friday he was sitting in the living room talking on the phone when she came in.
"oh um I have to go. I'll call you later... alright bye" then he hung up the phone.
"who was that?" she asked getting mad but keeping it in check, she didn't even know who it was, or what he was keeping from her.
" oh just a friend." he said sitting back in the couch. "just getting something together." he said. He looked up to her eyes and saw a sad gleam in them. "What's wrong?" he asked leaning forward.
"You've been so far away lately, Buzzard I... I just want to know what's wrong so we can work it out... I..." she was crying now because of all the different emotions and thoughts going through her. He knew what she was saying; he got up and pulled her into his arms. She broke down crying fisting her hands in his shirt and burying her face in his chest. She had finally, truly fallen in love and now it seemed to be falling apart. Why was she cursed, what was wrong with her that she couldn't keep a relationship with someone? When her cries finally died down he still just held her tight.
"I love you Reba." he said into her hair "I will always love you and I have never loved anyone more than I do you" She held onto him tight.
"I'm sorry... It's just... I just ... what's going on?" she sobbed into his chest.
"It's a surprise" he said gently. Leaning back and cupping her face with his hands. He kissed the tears from her face and kissed her. Then he looked into her eyes. "I will never be Brock. I love you. And every day I wake up amazed that you love me too. I know that you could do way better than me but you chose me and I'm never gonna be so dumb to through that away." he said then he kissed her softly. Then pulled back before they could deepen the kiss. "And if you don't believe me I promise to spend my whole life proving it to you." Reba smiled like she'd just won the lottery.
"I'm so sorry that I doubted you Buzzard! I believe you!" she said a little louder than her normal voice. Then he kissed her so long and hard that she never wanted it to end but sadly they ran out of air and they had to brake off the kiss but he still held her close. After a second to breath Reba pulled Buzzard back into a loving kiss and they fell to the couch behind them. They were so wrapped up in each other that they did not notice the man watching in the window.

ok so this one will probably be slow and a long time in-between updates. i'll update when i have time but im also focusing on Till I get You Back,