Hey guys forgot to put this at the end of the first chapter, if you haven't read the orginal story and you're wondering about the courier's weapons and perks,just look at chapter 2 of my original story it's about that.
Another thing, someone said that Six would assume he's in a different time at first instead of a different world and personally i find that ridiculous, If I came from an irradiated apocalypse into a world that isn't like that and has a broken moon, I would assume it was a different world first instead of time travel,Occam's Razor, the simpler answer is usually the right one.
Also thinking the Grimm are robots? They don't resemble robots in any way, in his boots I would think they were mutants if anything.
Other than that thanks for the criticism, some of your other advice was very helpful.
Anyway, mini-rant over, probably gonna rewrite chapter 2 tomorrow.