Hello everyone here is the rewritten chapter 2. Didn't really do a lot of changes like I did in chapter 1 only a few this here and there but I hope you read and enjoy. Please remember to review and pm me with comment, questions, or advise :)
Normal pov
Right outside of Pallet town on the side of the road lays Jacinda and Arcanine fast asleep. They had arrived late in the night and went to sleep not wanting to be tired for the big day. Arcanine had his body curled around Jacinda as she rested on her head on his and had a large blanket wrapped around them both. "beep beep beep beep" the alarm on Jacinda's watch began to go off signaling for her to wake up. Arcanine pushed at her with his head trying to get her up. "What" groined looking at her watch to see that it is 8:30am. She got up and began to stretch. A few meters away she spotted a stream and filled her pot with water. With it, she washed her face and brushed her teeth. Looking down at the clothes see had on yesterday, she thought 'I need a shower' while brushing her hair.
"Miss. is everything alright" Jucinda turned around to be greet a woman with reddish-brown hair in a pony tail smiling at me.
"Oh yes everything is fine" Jacinda told her with a smile.
"Are you a trainer" the woman asked looking at arcanine?
"Oh no he belongs to my brother, I here to get my first pokemon" said Jacinda.
"Oh I remember that day like it was yesterday when my son left on his pokemon journey" she announced.
"Really which starter pokemon did he choose" Jacinda asked excitedly?
"He woke up late that morning, and the Professor didn't have any starters left but could get a pikachu that he had caught" she said.
"Well that cool but I best be on my way" Jacinda tells her.
"Would you like some breakfast" she asked?
"Um sure," said Jacinda a little.
"Splendid, by the way, my name is Delia ketchum" she said.
"Jacinda." She replied.
"Oh and don't worry the professors lab is right down the road from my house" replied Delia with a smile. With that Jacinda and Arcanine followed her to her home. When they got there Delia immediately went to the kitchen to make breakfast.
"Miss ketchum do you mind if I use your shower" asked Jacinda peeking into the kitchen?
"Not at all its upstairs to the left," said Delia. Jacinda walked upstairs toke a quick shower. Getting out she looked at her watch to see that it was 9:15. She got dressed ( if you have played black or white than you know how the female starter dresses that is what Jacinda wears) and walked down stair.
"Miss ketchum I have to go, I don't want to be late," said Jacinda.
"okay but please do come back after you get your pokemon so we can talk some more" asked Delia?
"I will" she replied running out the door to see Arcanine waiting for her. " Lets go" she said while jumping on his back, and they took off.
Jacinda pov
"Wait here Arcanine" I tell him walking into the building. "Hello is anyone home."
"Yes how may I help you," said a man walking out of the back room.
"Are you Professor Oak" I asked.
"Why yes I am and who might you be" he asked?
"Hi my name is Jasinda White, and I'm here to pick my first pokemon" I say with a smile.
"Oh then, please follow me" he said with a reassuring smile. As we walked through the lab he asks me "are you related to Justin White by any chance?"
"Yes he is my brother" I tell him.
"So your Lily daughter" he said.
"You knew my mother" I asked in shock?
"Yes we were close friends I'm sorry for you lost" he said,
"I remember you from the funeral" I say thinking back. We arrive in the lab and in front of us sat three pokeballs on a lad table."Come on out everyone" he yelled while releasing Bulbasaur, Charmander, and Squirtle.
"So that means I'm the first one here" I say to him.
"Yes so you get first pick" He replied. I looked over each one fully aware that anyone of them would make a perfect starter pokemon but I had already made up my mind on who to choose the morning.
"I pick Charmander" I say to him.
"Char char," said Charmander jumping up excitedly.
"Well someone is happy now here are five pokeballs, a pokedex and a map with the location of all the gyms on it.
"Thank you professor smiled Jacinda.
"You going to be a brilliant trainer just like your mother," he answered, "she had this special bond with her pokemon to. They were more like a family than a team." He walked to one of his book shelves pulling out one of the books. "Here is a picture of her when she was your age." He gave me the book. I notice how much she does look like me accept the eye which by brother has an in her arms a Bulbasaur.
"Is her Venusaur flora here" I asked?
"yes she is please follow me" He said.
"Come on Charmander" I smiled down at the pokemon.
"Char Char" Charmander replied and began to follow me and professor Oak. He led us to forest areas on the land that he owned.
"Flora" He called as we stopped by a stream. After about a minute out came a Venusaur.
"Saur" she replied stepping up to us.
"Flora look who came to see you" Professor Oak said stepping out of the way to give her a better look.
"Hello flora" I say with a smile petting her on her head.
"Saur" she replied smiling at me. charmander peeking from behind my leg to get a better look. As he did that Flora let loose her vines and began to tickle her with them.
I'll leave you to alone" said Professor Oak and walked back in the lad.
"I've miss you" I say with tears in my eye. Flora mugged me with her head. I kneeled down and rested my head against hers. "For the past five years I was told I would be no good, pathetic and I started to believe it." I petted Charmander on the head "I want to prove that person wrong but what if shes right." I began to wonder why I came here then flora raps her vines around me and lifted me up in the air. As she rocks me back and forth and starts to sing all my doubt melted away. When I looked into her eyes everything my mother taught me came rushing back. I new then I would never let anyone pull me from my dreams again. "Thank you Flora," I say when she put me down, "I fist when I'm in the area." I head back in the lab and there stood a boy about my age.
"Good morning I'm Don Smith"he said to Professor Ockham
"Good morning this is Jacinda" Oak introduced me.
"I see you chose Charmander" He said with a smile.
"Yes which on are you going to pick" I asked him?
"I don't know yet" he said.
"Well how about we take a look at them," announced the Professor as he released them from their balls. Don looked between Bulbasaur and Squirtle checking them out.
"I choose Bulbasaur" he finally said.
"Bulbasaur" cried Bulbasaur tackling him to the ground.
"Well someone likes you" I laughed.
"Yeah" He said with a smile.
"Squirtle" sobbed squirtle sitting on the ground.
"Do you worry Squirtle, there's still one more trainer" Professor Oak reminded. With that he got excited and was returned into his pokeball. The Professor gave and explained everything he gave me to Don.
"Hey Jacinda you want to battle" He asked?
"Sure" I told he and begain to look at my new pokedex to see what moves she can do. 'So she can use growl and scratch okay I can work with that' I say to myself "You ready charmander."
"Char" she replied stepping in front of me. I see Don's Bulbasaur doing the same.
"Alright Bulbasaur us Tackle" he shouted. Bulbasaur came charging at us quickly.
"Charmander dodged and uses scratch" I tell her. Just when Don's bulbasaur was right on top of use, Chrmander move out of the way and attacked his side with a series of scratch attacks. Bulbasaur slide across the floor and feel unconscious.
"And the winner is Jacinda from Viridian city," Announced Professor Oak, "Now Don here is a machine where you can heal your pokemon."
"Thank you Jacinda" He said walking to the Machine.
"You welcome and I must be going now" I tell them while returning charmander to her pokeball.
"Good bye Jasinda and remember what I said" reminded Professor Oak.
"I will" I replied running out the door. "Arcanine." He runs to my side, and I jump on his back. "lets head back to Delia's house" and he took off.
"Miss ketchum" I called walking through the front door.
"I'm in here," she called from the kitchen. I walked in to see her place two plates on the table, "I just finished breakfast, please sit down."
"Thank you" I say to her, and I began eating.
"Well like I told my son you can't go on a pokemon journey with an empty stomach" she says with a smile.
"When did your son start his journey" I asked?
"About a months ago," she says, "oh before I forget which pokemon did you choose?" I released charmander from her pokeball. "oh she is so cute." As she cooed over charmander I finished eating.
"Well we had better get going" I announced.
"Alright well here is my phone number, if there is anything you need, please call" she replied handing me a piece of paper.
Thanks and I will come on Charmander" I said as I put the paper in my pocket and headed for the door. I returned charmander to her pokeball and climbed up onto Arcanine. "Lets go home."
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