Brightheart
Quickly, I walked out of camp,
The forest ahead dark and damp,
Swiftpaw walked up ahead,
The future I began to dread.
As we neared the dogs' cave,
I knew I would need to be brave,
Swiftpaw shouted, "Come and fight!",
I listened and tried to find my might,
The dogs spilled out the liar,
Oh the terror I could not bare!
Their snapping teeth came right up close,
I was about to fight like no cat knows!
It was all a blur of teeth and blood,
The pain feel like a flood,
Suddenly, the dogs ran,
Had I just saved my clan?
Ifeel back into the mud,
It coated me just like the blood,
I looked to Swiftpaw,
But all I saw,
Was a dead body with no life,
Not Swiftpaw! Oh the pain and strife,
He gave his life protecting me,
To StarClan may he swiftly flee,
I am Lostface,
Or am I Brightheart?
Who really knows!
But this is how my story goes...
Hi guys! What did you think of my first poem? I tried to dictate how I think Brightheart felt during the dog fight. I tried to focus on her feeligns rather than injurys and i tried to rhyme only failing on the last verse. Tell me what you think in the comments and dont forget to leave a suggestion on who I should do next!
Mari