Chapter 2: Not human at all?
"What is this? Why does it taste so good? I just can't stop myself! He needs help and here I am, bleeding him to satisfy my cravings. Just what kind of creature you are Naruto?" Sakura managed to think as she briefly doubted drinking Naruto's blood.
Nonetheless she didn't stop and just kept going for a while making Naruto grow weaker by the minute.
Naruto on his side just grew colder and colder, but for some strange reason he didn't felt the natural urge to protect his own life, instead this situation was actually revealing.
This event managed to explain his mom's weird beliefs and endless tales of monsters she used to tell him before sending him to sleep. If she truly attended this place it meant that neither she or he were regular humans.
"Human…heh…am I even human? It makes more sense of father's indifference and the contempt from the other priests" thought Naruto managing to grin a bit.
"But I don't feel different from others, except perhaps that I never got sick or anything and my wounds never scarred and healed within hours or days at the most" continued Naruto shifting a bit to get a bit more comfortable.
"Maybe the monster is mom, and I am just a half-breed, which in that case I would be neither" thought Naruto as his eyelids got heavier.
"At least the end is not that bad, a death in the arms of a beautiful creature; more than what most men get I guess. Besides is not like I was going to have a bright future or anything." Thought Naruto, as he lifted a hand to caress Sakura's hair.
"I am sorry mom, guess I will wait for you…" thought Naruto letting himself go.
"Ahem! I think you got your fill already Haruno!" loudly exclaimed a powerful female voice in thunderous authority.
Sakura's eyes shot wide open making the glow in them disappear; blinking she realized what she was doing and immediately let go of Naruto's neck.
She allowed the pleasant looking Naruto to fall to the ground while she stepped back covering her mouth with both hands, unsure of what she had done. But the two bloody marks on his neck told her everything.
Sakura started to breathe rapidly realizing the horrible thing she had done to her own classmate "Naruto?" she whispered while feeling the metallic yet sweet taste of his blood in her mouth.
When she saw Naruto's relaxed expression, pale color and lack of movement she began to hyperventilate.
The tall blonde woman with twin pigtails and a tight fitting designer suit, placed a hand on her shoulder "Calm down, he isn't dead; a little blood loss like that won't kill someone like him" said the woman reassuringly to the scared girl.
Sakura then turned her gaze back to Naruto and saw how his body started to regain color quickly, his breathing returning to normal and the wounds in his neck disappear.
"Wake up brat!" said the woman kicking Naruto on the ribs.
"Ouch! What was that for?" groggily said Naruto while rubbing his side and attempting to get back.
Naruto was slowly recovering all of his senses as he managed to stand up again; Naruto rubbed his neck surprised of how little it still hurt, but the biggest surprise was that he was still among the living.
Before he could re-address the woman that apparently saved his life, Sakura tackled him to the ground crying furiously on his chest "I am so sorry! I don't know what happened! It's the first time it happens something like that I swear!" screamed the apologetic Sakura while holding Naruto close in clear repentance.
Naruto himself was surprised again by the girl's monstrous strength, but the real surprise was how sorry she looked. Weren't vampires supposed to be ruthless and without pity? Yet here he clearly had one who seemed every bit as merciful and normal as any girl.
"You are Uzumaki's whelp, aren't you?" said the tall blonde woman with hard eyes and in a matter of fact tone.
Naruto just nodded affirmatively.
"Alright, you two come along, we need to speak" said the woman turning around heading back to the school grounds.
Naruto turned in the direction of where the bus stood moments ago and letting out a long breath he helped Sakura to get off the ground and realizing he wasn't going back went to pick up his bags and follow the woman.
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Naruto and Sakura were now seated at an elegant office with large wooden furniture with symbols of nature carved in them, as well as a large painting of what one could tell where creatures of the forest.
Naruto recognized the creatures as Elementals of the Forest, from his mom's stories; he couldn't help but think that the woman standing in front of him could be one.
The tall woman offered the two teens a sweet smelling tea that she said would calm them down, as they still looked somewhat freaked out by the previous events.
"My name is Tsunade Senju and I am Crescent Moon Academy's headmaster" said the woman taking a seat from across the large ancient desk, which was made from different materials to the rest of the office.
"I had wanted to speak with you Naruto, but you beat me to it by running out of here. You probably wonder, but I am your mother's friend from her days here and I am the reason you managed to enroll into this school after flunking all your other applications" continued Tsunade as she carefully eyed Naruto.
"By now you probably have realized this, but monsters are quite real, they are all around you here and they have been mingling with humanity for the past millennia in secrecy" said Tsunade expecting some sort of outraged response from Naruto, but seeing him nod slowly told her he had already acknowledged much of what she said.
By this moment Sakura was the one with more doubts, as she already knew from some years back that she would have to attend this school eventually as her older sisters had. But the most interesting part was, why did the principal was explaining all this to Naruto? Whom she thought only had cold feet over nervousness in his first day.
Tsunade took a book and opened it, going through a few pages she apparently found the one and smiling turned the book so the two teens managed to see in it. The book was actually a yearbook with pictures from the old generations of graduates and the main picture showed Tsunade as the school president and a nasty evil looking red head girl with a rune carved wooden sword grinning by her side wearing a school uniform similar to those old fashioned bully girls from manga.
The girl had a long school skirt and her red hair was waist long with seven strands tied tightly in golden ribbons with a menacing look and a playful grin. She also sported a half opened shirt clearly showing some of her lace black bra and a spiral tattoo around her belly button.
Looking down at the names Naruto's mouth nearly crashed at the desk.
"Is that my …" Naruto tried to say sounding flagger basted.
"That's your mom in her first year when I formed my student's council; I decided to not make an enemy of such character by making her head of the discipline enforcement squad, you see she was quite the wild one and with a very nasty disposition towards authority. She also had a very perverted attraction to cute boys making them grovel to later pamper the lucky ones" said Tsunade clearly remembering a funny memory.
Naruto on his side just couldn't believe his eyes, the girl in the picture was his mom? The sweet, clean looking and tender mom that always pampered him and loved him more than anyone else in the world? The woman that for some strange reason drools a bit when she see the cute boys of the hip magazines…The woman who sometimes teased him about new outfits to try…The woman who from time to time cornered his father to her bidding…The woman that managed to drive away bullies from little Naruto…The woman who just grew up to better conceal her nature…
Naruto dropped his head in acknowledgement of his mom's strange behavior.
Tsunade actually felt some pity for the boy but his features reminded her of both Kushina and the young man that eventually swayed Kushina off her feet so many years ago.
"I am sure seeing your mother like that it's quite a shock, but the real question is, just why did she studied here?" said Tsunade turning serious once again.
"You mean then, that neither, my mother or I are human?" whispered Naruto feeling sad at the thought of being some sort of monster.
Sakura on her seat gasped "Human?" but before she could shout or scream, a stern look from Tsunade silenced such thought.
"Wrong, you ARE human though a very rare kind of human. Have you ever heard of witches, druids and the like?" said Tsunade re-attaining Naruto's interest.
"Your mother descends from a sect of humans who in days past made combat with evil spirits attempting to disrupt humanity's peace on the land. These humans trained themselves in the spiritual arts of exorcism and the like, but even with all the training many spirits were just too much for them and ended in disasters. Kinder spirits seeing their hardships and answering to their good intentions came to their aid, so they both combining their powers managed to vanish the evil ones" said Tsunade earning looks of amazement from both kids.
"And so, the spirits and the humans cooperated together to keep fighting the evil spirits and protecting humanity shoulder by shoulder. The kind spirits taught this tribe of men how to increase their own powers to a point in which they could someday fight on their own but such training brought a new problem; the greater the spiritual power of a human is, the more appealing it becomes for evil spirits and so these humans started to get possessed by this evil spirits unleashing great devastation" continued Tsunade while grabbing another ancient book.
Opening the book at the right page, the drawing depicted horned human beings killing droves of humans while a few warriors uselessly attempted to defeat them "Seeing that these once champions of humanity had turned to evil, great armies led by other exorcists were risen and sent against them. The kind spirits that saw how their friends were slaughtered in a terrible war took their younger children and hid them away from the other exorcists; they took them to a place they warded and there they could prosper in peace and unaware of their latent ability"
Turning another page showed kids playing with what seemed multiple tailed creatures "But as generations passed the kind spirits saw that the children on these people kept incredibly high amounts of spiritual energy and so they would never be able to leave their sanctuary less the past repeated itself"
Turning to a last page, the drawing now was of a man casting the shadow of one of the tailed creatures "To solve their problem and pay for the mistake of giving these humans great spiritual powers, the kind spirits possessed them. A vessel like a human can be possessed by a single spirit at a time and so with this, the spirits could protect them and at the same time give them the freedom every human seek"
Turning to another page the drawings now depicted a family casting the dancing shadows of the spirits that possessed them at birth "So every generation of your family is born to have a sort of guardian spirit within that help and protects them"
Naruto was shocked and all he could do was to place his hand upon his chest "Y-Y-You mean that I have a spirit within at this very moment? And it has been there my entire life?"
Feeling a bit uneasy with the panicking boy, Tsunade beckoned him to take more tea "Yes but it has never interfered with your thoughts or your life beyond warding off evil spirits and giving you a few physical perks"
Now a lot of thing made sense for Naruto; the marks on his face that weren't scars, his perfect health and fit body. Not to mention the industrial amounts of Ramen he consumed never gave him trouble. The only thing his body didn't seem to be able to process was when he drank rotten milk.
But this in turn raised one important question "But my mom seems perfectly fine, how comes she is also possessed and don't have any of my apparent traits?"
"As I understand, the traits on the person become more apparent on proportion to the strength of the spirit possessing them; if I recall right, your mother's main trait beyond her nasty personality was her long red hair. It was the same as the fur of a fox, like a long soft mane. No girl I ever met had a hair like that" said Tsunade remembering.
Naruto smiled remembering his mom's long hair and how nice it felt when she covered him with it in winter "It is so warm…" Naruto whispered softly with a smile that made Sakura drop her worries of him being a weird human.
"Ideally you should have been able to live your life normally and without incident since the spirits are supposed to just keep you from being possessed without you knowing it. But in your case Naruto, given who your parents were, Kushina was right to send you here" continued Tsunade breaking Naruto's happy memories.
"Your father is a powerful exorcist while your mother already had a powerful spirit living within. She hoped that you would be born with just a minor spirit so you could have a normal life but as logic would suggest, you were born with an incredibly vast spiritual energy; which in turn summoned a powerful entity to occupy your body" said Tsunade looking for another book.
"But it doesn't matter right? I mean the spirit is there just to make certain no evil spirit enters" said Naruto worrying about the real reason of why he was sent here.
"You being here is something you can thank your own father. You see, he belongs to the same sect of monks that tried to wipe out your ancestors long ago, so in his arrogance he thought he knew better than the wisdom of the guardian spirits. He tried to stop the spirit from entering your body but the spirit would have none of that and still accomplished its task. But your father's ritual created a direct link between you and the spirit thus making you even rarer" said Tsunade still looking for the right book.
"And what does that mean? The spirit is still my guardian right? I shouldn't fear" said Naruto while Sakura was thinking of a way to calm him down.
"The link in some way, have merged your souls and that's why you have more traits than your mother. Your hair is thicker, your marks on the face, your rather well toned body and perhaps even your personality" said Tsunade bringing the book she wanted to the table.
Displaying the book on the desk she showed the drawings of a bunch of smiling foxes with different number of tails.
"The real issue is that the link provides the spirit with a taste of the human world through your senses thus risking corruption. Spirits are without bodies and so without a similar perception of the world to us. When presented with the experience of touch, of pleasure or even smell, a spirit can go high wire and become something else" said Tsunade allowing the kids to see the drawings.
"Has this happened before?" asked Naruto.
"Yes it has, throughout history there are legends of foxes taking human form and doing stuff of legends. From doing good things to making as much trouble as they can, your family in particular now belongs to the lore of some nations. But others have attempted the same in people similar to you with similar results, creating unbalances that later on backfires" continued Tsunade.
"Then why am I here?" asked Naruto looking back at Tsunade.
"This school will help you deal with the influences from the spirit within you and carry on with a happy life. Many of our students are from predatory species and well, humans were among its usual prey, we help them control these urges and settle down" said Tsunade trying to restore some hope into Naruto.
"And if it doesn't work?" asked a still worried Naruto.
"Then you would be forbidden from living among them, and then you would be casted to one of the dimensions we created a long time ago as a way to live separately from humanity. Only problem with that is that is dangerous and it is definite. Graduating from this academy means more than just being able to continue with your studies but also with your life among humans" said Tsunade in all seriousness.
Does that mean that my fellow classmates have been living among humans until now?" asked Naruto confused.
"Their parents graduated at some point from here, so they are functional in human society. Their children must come here before puberty hits them in full force, which is when their instincts kick in and so they become unstable and aggressive. Like your little friend over here helping herself to you" said Tsunade glancing at Sakura as she pretended looking other way.
"Other species though come here for different reasons but they are the lesser in terms of numbers" finished saying Tsunade.
Naruto seemed reflective about all this information, on one side he was glad that at least he was human, as far as the dictionary goes that is; and because the insistence of his mother to never get angry, he would have to consider that request as a rule, as far as he doesn't know exactly with what he is dealing. Also, knowing what kind of spirit lurks within him became a priority for him.
Sakura on her side fidgeted on her seat not knowing exactly why she was allowed to see and learn all this stuff about the newcomer.
Tsunade seemed to hear her mind and addressing her began "Sakura Haruno, right? I remember your sisters, good students and well behaved; so would you mind explain me what was going on earlier?"
Sakura almost jumped at the question and the mention of her sisters, but even she didn't know exactly what happened back there. She had been in presence of human blood before as kids scratched their knees or cut themselves. But this time it was so different, drinking Naruto's blood in the morning left her with a delicious taste in the mouth the whole day and feeling recharged like never before.
She had thought that Naruto was some sort of special monster and thus decided to make friends with him since her sisters told her that people with tasty blood were the best kind.
But later on when she chased Naruto down the hill and looking all the blood, everything became a blur of thirst and excitement.
Letting out a long breath Sakura began "Well, to be honest lady Tsunade, I don't know one moment I am chasing Naruto to try and calm him and the second I have my mouth at his neck"
Tsunade eyed Sakura looking for any deceit, but not finding any replied "Alright, guess that's the reason why you are here. Next time try asking for his blood, but try not to exaggerate, even Naruto can dry out"
Nodding furiously in gratitude Sakura replied "Yes, thank you very much!"
"Also try not to mention this to anyone, as far as it goes Naruto is no different from any other student here, so I would like to ask you to teach him the ropes of our world" continued Tsunade.
"Is there a name for people like me?" suddenly asked Naruto.
"Why yes there is, though it is rarely used; it's Selvain, the spirit carriers they are" replied Tsunade with a warmer smile trying to make Naruto's transition to a new truth more bearable.
As both teens excused themselves and prepared to leave the office, Tsunade reminded them once more of the school rules "Remember, stay in your human forms at all times. You can't reveal what kind of monster you are to others unless they figure that themselves. Don't use your powers unless it's absolutely necessary"
"Also as everyone here are monsters in their teen years a certain degree of violence is accepted, so don't lower your guard" said Tsunade in a warning tone.
Nodding slowly both teens left the office with a silent Tsunade
"I wonder if Naruto will make this school as interesting as you did Kushina" said Tsunade to her empty office.
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Walking under the mildly lit grounds of the school, Sakura guided Naruto to the entrance of the boys' dorms where Tsunade had already indicated which room he was meant to stay into.
Naruto still thought the entire place to be creepy but realizing his newly found nature resigned himself to stay here and learn as much as he could. Besides he would need better arguments to confront his parents for hiding this from him all this time.
"Sorry about earlier Naruto, I couldn't stop myself and I just got you injured and a bit drier" said an apologetic Sakura.
"Don't sweat it, you probably were as freaked out as me when you found out that I was a human; well of some sort" replied Naruto with a wide smile hiding away his own insecurities.
"No, it's not that; it's what Miss Shizune said about killing you on the spot. I was scared I would have to kill you, and well, you were the first person I have met here and I didn't want to hurt you" said Sakura timidly.
Naruto smiled at Sakura's tenderness and at his own crushed beliefs about monsters; apparently they weren't that different after all, though the killing part was still on debate.
"For a vampire you are like nothing I have heard" said Naruto.
Sakura blushed a little and replied "Well, it's not like we haven't grown since the days of Lord Teppes; most Vampires disbanded into the world after his fall and well, we have been living among the humans ever since"
Naruto stopped right there remembering the name Teppes as being the infamous Dracula. "You mean he really was a Vampire and not some blood frenzied tyrant?"
Sakura turned around with a slight scowl "Hey! Lord Teppes was a man with a dream; he just was unfortunate"
"He impaled people and had dinner while they still lived!" said Naruto remembering the tales of Dracula his mom used to tell him in Halloween nights.
Sakura pouted clearly irritated by Naruto's ignorance "And why the hell would a vampire waste all that precious blood? Really some people just don't have any common sense!"
Naruto was about to reply but shat up thinking about it "Really, why would a vampire waste that much blood?…Hey! Still that doesn't sound right!"
Sakura sighed and stepped up to Naruto placing a hand over his chest stopping him with considerable force "Let's stop before it goes any further, that's in the past and the only ones still clinging to it are the Regali caste families. Let's just say that here your perceptions of the world will be challenged at some times and completely changed, at least that's what my sisters told me"
Naruto scratched the back of his head and nodded understanding her point "Guess you are right, who knows what I will face here, but I hope it helps me in some way"
"Also my sisters said while giggling that the morality of monsters is somewhat different from humans. So taking that into account I would like to ask you something" said a nervous blushing Sakura.
Naruto suddenly got a bit nervous at her request, and started to imagine the many possibilities and hopes he had in mind for a girl's request. So gulping down his insecurities he just smiled and reassuringly said "Sure, anything for my first friend here"
Sakura's blush was replaced by a happy expression and almost jumping said "So it's fine if I take a bit of your blood every now and then? I have to admit it's delicious and since you aren't exactly a human it doesn't go against the rules, especially if you agree!"
Naruto responded automatically "Sure no problem…what?" lowly said Naruto but Sakura's fangs were already descending on his neck as she only heard the "Sure" thing.
Once again the pain was quick to fade and be replaced by that strange soothing feeling, only that this time Naruto was conscious and fully aware of Sakura's blood sucking. He could hear how Sakura gulped down his blood every few seconds and how fast her heart was beating.
Just as he thought Sakura was going to finish, he started to feel they were being observed with a mixture of excitement, anger and a ton of envy.
"Starting soon heh?" someone shouted as every window from the boys dorm lit to life as apparently every tenant of the place had watched the intimate moment.
Sakura let go of Naruto's neck while blushing a bit, knowing what it must have looked like from afar.
Naruto could have sworn that Sakura's eyes glowed green for an instant but quickly dismissed it as just another vampire's trait. Now he had a dorm full of teens waiting to tease the lucky new one.
Seeing that Sakura had fled in embarrassment, Naruto sighed and grabbing his bag entered the dorms where a bunch of guys were already bugging him with questions.
"Guess this is quite similar to the human world" thought Naruto bringing a smile to his face feeling somewhat more accepted in this environment.
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The dorm, Naruto had to admit, looked great on the inside, as some school mates lead him to his room. There were common areas where videogames and pool tables had been set for entertainment and he heard about a gym on the other side.
Apparently the generations of classmates where split and didn't shared the dorms, one of the guys leading him said that it was meant to avoid conflict with the upper classmen which were much more experienced in terms of controlling their abilities.
Arriving at a common area the other guys left Naruto to his own devices as they left to get fun somewhere else.
"So you are the last arrival, how troublesome" said a voice from the shadows.
Naruto turned to the source of the voice but found no one.
"You know? I haven't being able to get some sleep because of you taking all day to make out with that girl out there. Couldn't you wait for the second day to get it on with her?" spoke the shadows once again.
Once again Naruto wondered where that voice kept coming from did. but remembering the place where he was, he decided to play along "Huh, it was bit more complicated than that. Still I am sorry for the inconvenience"
"Guess it can't be helped" said the voice once more.
After this from the shadows at the corner of the room a young man with black hair tied in a ponytail came out from the shadows. The weird part about him was that he only became visible as he entered the light while not even his silhouette could be seen in the shadows.
Once more Naruto's memories kicked in…
Laughing from the shadows no secret remains for them.
The light may try but it will never triumph, for they see it coming
A path in darkness, a helping hand or a stabbing knife
I am the Shade and in shadows you shall find me
"Hey, you are a Shade aren't you?" said Naruto with a bit more excitement than he wanted.
The boy stopped dead on his tracks.
"How did you know? We are pretty rare" said the boy now with some more curiosity than boredom.
Laughing a bit Naruto realized that it was against rules for students to reveal their true natures to others without good reason; though he stepped out of the shadows like a Shade.
"Sorry about that, didn't mean to blow your cover. My mom used to tell me a lot of stories about other monsters and so I recognized your ability. I promise to not tell anyone" said Naruto stretching a greeting hand.
The other boy gave him a half smile and asked away "Well you know mine so tell me yours, if only to be even"
Naruto was about to answer but beating trembling started to be felt in the place.
"Now now Shikamaru, he caught you fair and square so let it be; remember the rules. We don't want to make our friend here feel pressured" said a regular boy a bit taller than Naruto with spiky orange hair and a couple of strange whirls on his cheeks.
The boy was eating some chips but besides looking a bit overweight, the odd thing was the force of his footsteps as each made a little tremor.
Dutiful sentinels and deadly defenders
You may stare at me yet you won't see me
The last thing you hear is my march and the last thing you see is my shadow.
I am the Golem and you shall not pass.
"Wow, a real Golem!" nearly screamed Naruto with excitement making the kind looking boy stop in his tracks making him drop one of his chips.
Shikamaru snickered "Guess you didn't deceive him either"
The other boy laughed heartedly not caring much about having his nature revealed "Hah! Guess you are right; it seems we have been blessed with an expert on monsters! Now I am the intrigued one to know who and what you are friend"
Naruto once again smiled and replied "Heh, guess I do now a thing or two. Anyway, the name's Naruto Uzumaki and I will be your fellow student for the next three years"
The large boy then offered him one of his chips and said "Chouji Akimichi and the skinny one is Shikamaru Nara; glad to meet you"
Shikamaru then stepped by his friend and also muttered a once again bored "Nice to meet you"
"So, I was wondering, why can't you go to sleep until I arrived" said Naruto while Shikamaru and Chouji lead him to his room.
"Because apparently being a lazy guy gets you the position of dorm manager" said Shikamaru clearly pissed off by his duty.
"Hah! Shikamaru got asleep while the teacher asked for volunteers in the different duties around campus, so everyone took a step back leaving Shikamaru to take on the heat" said Chouji munching his chips.
"I can't' help getting sleepy with so much sun on me, there weren't enough clouds to keep me awake" replied Shikamaru while looking for the keys to Naruto's bedroom.
Seeing Naruto's confusion regarding Shikamaru's weird complaint Chouji said "The more light there is and the less shadows around, makes Shikamaru weaker than usual and so he drifts into sleep until something casts a shadow above him"
Naruto made and Oh expression but felt quite satisfied with the explaining, he was by now glad Sakura stopped him when she did. Now a much larger world was being unfolded before him and its many secrets were waiting to be discovered, meeting creatures of legend and befriending them certainly beats any school for priests his father may have been able to send him.
"On your face dad!" thought Naruto.
"There it is your own personal bedroom with a desk, a small table for eating or drinking, your individual bed and a small fridge for snacks. The showers are communal and start working at 7 and close up at 11, curfew stands at midnight, keep that in mind if you plan to see your girl late at night" said Shikamaru in a bad resemblance of a hotel butler.
"She isn't my girl" said Naruto with a tiny blush.
"Yeah right, if you happen to bring her here make sure to hang your tie on the knob, just so we don't interrupt any "studying session" you may have with her" said Shikamaru with a snicker as Chouji laughed hard.
Both left before the red faced Naruto could reply anything.
Naruto huffed and entered his room, the place that would be his home for the next three years.
Being done with unpacking Naruto threw himself on his bed and letting out a loud sigh he stared at the ceiling "Hope you are okay mom; I'll give my best here so don't worry" said out loud allowing his eyes to shut.
AN: And done!
With this I end my introduction to this world, so its survival now rests in your opinions about it and if you want me to continue.
Lack of support will redirect me to new projects or my other current ones since I need to focus given my little time to write.
As for my insistence in your opinions it's because I want to be able to write my own material someday so I need to know if I am doing it right.
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