He led me up to his room, and gave me one final kiss before lowering his mouth to my throat.
At first, I didn't know that he had bit me. When he did, I gave him one last kiss before I sank to my knees in agony. I remembered what the pain was like, but this time it was worse. I could barely open my eyes, but I could feel Edwards cold hands pick me up and carry me to his bed. Then the pain enveloped me.
It was like I was floating through a giant room filled with large, sharp knives. I was traveling through very quickly. It hurt more that I could ever know. I could feel only the intense pain, and two very cold objects moving along what I think were my arms, although I couldn't be sure, through the pain.
I could hear my slowing heartbeat in my ears. And also some whispering. I concentrated on the smooth, velvet-like voice. I was in pain for so long; it took a minute to figure out the words. They were saying something like, "Only two more hours, then we'll be together forever."
Suddenly, my body convulsed, and I heard the voice shout for someone named Carlisle to come quickly, and the pain was gone. I breathed deeply, and noticed that I could smell very well, and the air did nothing but bring the smell. I found that interesting. I heard the door to whatever room I was in open and shut. I opened my eyes to see Carlisle and Edward.
"Did it work?" I asked. "Am I a vampire? Do I look different?"
Edward just smiled and took my hand. He led me to the mirror hanging next to his door. I was shocked when I saw my reflection. I had paler skin than before, with dark circles under bright red eyes. I was about two inches taller, and I was more slender. My clothes were nearly hanging off of me. My fingers were longer, and more delicate. My hair seemed to grow down to my waist, and it was thicker, and wavier.
Alice came in with some of Esme's clothes. I gratefully put them on, and they fit perfectly.
Alice took my hand and said, "Come, you need to hunt."
"Thank you," I replied.
We went out into the woods behind their house, and ran at vampire speed, which is when I noticed how much more graceful I was. I didn't have any trouble flitting through the trees.
I caught two deer and a rabbit before I had my fill. We ran back to the house, and when I looked in the mirror, my eyes were topaz. Perfect.
Edward looked at me and said, "We need to go get your stuff."
"Yes, I suppose we better."
We walked outside together. We walked human speed to his shiny silver Volvo, and drove off to go see Charlie.
A/N: I didn't get my five reviews, but I decided to update for you anyway. PLEASE have your friends R&R. This time I'm NOT updating until I get my five reviews!