Chapter 1
Fruits of errors
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Also note guys, that this fanfic will follow extremely close to the timeline of the canon story, though at first I would be quite sadistic to Naruto, even though I would hate it, but just to add a new dimension to fanfics. Again thanks a lot if you are reading this.
And now to Chapter 1 (finally)
CHAPTER 1: Fruits Of Errors
"Kyuubi, are the results supposed to look like that?"
"Why don't you ask your damnable father for that, eh?"
"C'mon, you know that both our lives are at risk here.. right?"
"WRONG BOY, the one who will die here is you, I will be reborn, for me, Time is inconsequential"
"Oh crap." muttered Naruto while staring at the sky which was being torn apart from the jutsu he used.
- With Minato and Kushina –
"Our son sure knows how to create problems doesn't he?" muttered a very worried Minato Namikaze
"Sure he does sweety, but I trust him and I know that whatever happens, It WILL be for the good of him, that I have trust on Kami." Kushina assured Minato quietly, while having her share of doubts in her mind, but something inside her heart told her everything would be alright.
"Kami-sama, what's going on? Would Naruto and the others be alright" Inquired Kushina.
"Child, you have no reason to worry….." trailed of the smoke covered figure as she related what was going to happen, earning a half sad-half happy expression from the couple.
"Thank you for telling us this Kami-sama, Naruto, I wish you luck in your coming lifetime." Whispered Kushina tearfully, knowing that Naruto would not remember the encounter with his parents.
- Outside –
As the force of the explosion radiated outwards, everybody felt different, they all expected to be crying out in agony if they had the capability to do so, However what everybody saw, shocked them out of their minds.
"What's going on, why my injuries seem to repair themselves, why am I feeling as if I am getting compressed?" was a thought which flitted across the minds of most of the people present.
All of the newer generations exclaimed as they saw themselves shrinking, their memories slowly starting to seep out of their minds, followed by the memories of the elder people present, in thin golden strands towards where they presumed the heavens would be places, as they could see nothing except white.
Another mutual thought was present in their minds, "Am I dead?"
Then everyone had a sudden urge, to sleep, to which they followed their urge and slept peacefully, for the last time they remember.
"W-w-what's g-going on?" Hinata's memories spoke as she saw the strands growing thicker for everyone except for her blonde heartthrob, this being the least thought out of everyone before sleep claimed them.
- Mindscape –
"What's going on?" screamed Naruto as his mindscape was slowly being disintegrated into strands of golden and platinum threads
"You did a tiny error in your jutsu, Time is being reversed as normal, but you people will not remember anything"explained Kyuubi, earning a half hearted nod from Naruto, knowing he would now not remember his parents, unconsciously hoping that his parents would also know this and would at least remember their encounter with the Most-surprising-knucklehead Ninja of Konoha, smiling a bit that he would get to meet them again.
"Good bye, I will meet you in the next life, Kyuubi… sama, after all, even you are a demon lord" said Naruto while smiling again, all this while slowly disintegrating into tiny wisps and threads of gold and platinum.
- Back Outside –
Even though no one was there to see it, the universe was rebuilding itself from scratch, the earth formed again, Kyuubi was born, then sealed twice, all in mere blinks of an eye, before time started to slow down, and then there was darkness, not the eternal darkness of empty space, but night, whose sky was dotted by a million stars, there was, however there was a new cluster, faint but unavoidable to the keen eye, these stars glowed gold and platinum, and was of memories, not fuel as any astronomer could say if he saw into the stars, which many did, but their memory also taking part of the stars so as to not divulge the painful secrets of the past life.
A/N: I am extremely sorry for such a short chapter, however I would like to ask you something, would you prefer long chapters which will most likely have quite a long break between updates, or shorter more frequent ones?
Another thing, please tell me whether I should make Naruto fail Academy exams for the third time too? (I will compensate for that) or not, and should Mizuki-teme be killed or spared?
Oh and before I forget,
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