I'm going to give you the gift of another chapter. There's a poll on my profile of whether or not I should delete Halfleg's stories of Shellclan.
A she-cat writhed in agony "When will this be over!" she howled. Digging her claws into the ground she heard an instruction to push and as she did she felt unimaginable pain. "It's one she-cat," she heard "the rest were stillborn." a white cat mewed softly "What would you like to name her?" the cat asked. "Fury, her name is Fury."
Chapter 1:
"Faster, Fury." Eagle mewed. "Yes ma'am." Fury replied trying again but faster that time. She was in an extensive training session with some of the more advanced trainees. "Do you think that Fury is ready to battle Blaze?" Malice asked from the other side of the training area. "Yes she is." replied Eagle. "To your stations!" ordered Malice as Blaze and Fury got into position. "Ready, steady, begin!" yowled Eagle.
Fury unsheathed her claws and pounced onto Blaze clawing at her ear. Blaze pinned Fury down and was about to strike when Fury bounced up and knocked Blaze over. Fury then proceeded to make a deep cut down Blaze's stomach. "Fury wins, please do as you must to your opponent." Malice mewed calmly since cats were allowed to torture defeated training opponents. Fury proceeded to calmly make a nick in Blaze's ear and some other minor but painful damage. "You both are dismissed." said Eagle. Blaze slowly rose and they went to the trainees' went into her little corner and slept dreaming about chasing mice and defeating enemies.
She soon woke up to the call of "Fury, Fox, Thistle, and Badger come with me for hunting!". Fury rolled out of her nest and walked up to newt waiting for the others to catch up. "Fury: You go hunting in the mousy hollow, Fox: You go hunting with Fury, Badger and Thistle: You come with me." Newt ordered. Fox and Fury ran to mousy hollow. Fury immediately spotted a mouse and started stalking it, determined to catch at least three pieces of prey so that she could eat well and maybe give one of the mothers or Tornado one. Fox was stalking another mouse on the other side of the small hollow. Fury pounced onto the mouse, cutting off its terrified squeal. Burying it in the roots of a tree. She smelt a smell that was uncommon for the hollow, shrew. The she-cat pounce onto the shrew and asked Fox if they should head back to camp. "Sure." Fox replied and gathering their fresh kill they set off towards camp.
Fury reported her catches to Newt and asked if she could take the shrew to Scratch and he gave her permission. Fury went into Scratch's den and asked "Would you like this shrew.". Scratch's face lightened a little and said yes. "May I play with the kits?" Fury asked. "Knock yourself out!" replied Scratch. Fury play defeat the badger with the kits and then went back to the trainees' den. After eating her mouse she curled up and went to sleep.
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