I Wont Break 2

The Challenge

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(Naruto's POV)

'Ah it's so warm what is this feeling? What is this scent? It's intoxicating.' I was starting to wake up but I didn't want to. Something was warm by my side and it felt sooo good. I snuggled closer to it, trying to more of its warmth. I haven't felt this peaceful since, well, since I was a kit and I slept with Kyuubi. 'But this feels different than it did with Kyuubi, it feels more right. Why is that?' Just then the source of the warmth and comfort started to move, I had no choice but to open my eyes and see what was happening.

All I see when I open my eyes is black and white; black hair, black eyes, and pale white skin. 'Who is this?' I ask myself then I remember the events of yesterday, me getting captured but the guards, forced to become a slave for Sasuke, getting whipped by Kyuubi and then blacking. I jump up; surprised to see I was cuddling with the man who was trying to take my freedom, only to notice that my back was all bandaged up. 'Did he patch me up?' I could feel myself starting to blush.

"I see you're awake. Man can you sleep, not that I mind cuddling with you." Sasuke said with a cocky smirk on his face causing me to blush.

"W-well you could have woken me up teme. And I wasn't cuddling with you; I was just… um…" I had nothing, the blush on my face darkened with each passing second. Just then he started to laugh.

"Phahahaha look at you face hahaha I've never seen anyone go that red before hahaha." He continued to laugh for about five more minutes until he was able to gain control of himself again.

"He looks better when he smiles and laughs, he should do that more often." He stopped laughing and stared at me, I realized I had just thought out loud, I blushed even brighter.

"Heh~ so I look better when I laugh huh? Well if you stay by my side willingly you can see me laugh and smile all you want." As he spoke, he kept getting closer to me, making me back up all the way until I was against the headboard of the bed. Placing his hands on either side of my face, he leaned his face in, to the point where our lips were almost touching. "So what do you say, will you be my slave?" He said it so quietly it could be mistaken as a whisper. It was like his eyes were burrowing into me, controlling me. I couldn't escape I was trapped. My breath quickened and my ears laid flat against my head, my tail rapped around my waist, I could feel my eyes start to close, I resisted the urge to close the gap between us, 'How can this man have so much control over me even though we don't even know each other.'

"I-I will n-not be controlled." I forced myself to say, even though it only came out as a weak little voice. Just then he gave me a sinister smile that sent chills down my spine for some reason, I'm not sure if that was good or bad.

"Heh~ good I love a challenge; it would be boring if you came to me easily." He got up from the position we were in and I let out a breath I didn't know I was holding in. "But remember Naruto~" I looked up at him the way he said my name sent a shiver of pleasure down my spine. "I always get what I want." The same cock smirk graced his lips again; 'I need to take him down a notch.' I glared at him once again.

"Well you remember this, I'm Naruto and I'm not someone who can be broken. This is one challenge that you'll lose."

"I look forward to seeing what will happen." And with that he got off the bed and left.

'Don't think I'll let you have control I will get out of here and with Kyuubi as well, I need to bring him back for the safety of everyone.'

~(Time skip –Sasukes POV Journal Entry- a few weeks later)~

'Just as I thought, Naruto is defiantly a difficult challenge, but he is a very fun one. Though for some reason he keeps trying to get near Kyuubi, my brothers slave. Everyone sure does seem to like Naruto though; no one can seem to hate him not even my dad. I do believe that I'm wearing him down though, he now sleeps in my bad willingly and cuddles with me, we can even have a conversation without getting in a fight plus he's finally following my orders at time. At first I thought that slaves were a waste of time but after getting Naruto, I realized slaves are a lot better then I though. They will ways be there for you, even when they don't wanna be. I decided to keep Naruto because I thought he would be a good way to pass time then throw him away a week later, but now it's different. Now I love his company, be it he's asleep or awake. The way he curls up to me in his sleep and purrs when I pet his ears, the way his tail raps around me as if to make sure I don't leave, I love it all. The way he is so hyper and is always amazed by the simplest things, they way his eyes shine up when he's running in the garden, or eating ramen, his favorite food, I can't get enough. I felt some attraction to him the moment I first saw him, but now I'm truly attached to him. And I think he's becoming attached to me too. Like the time I was bed ridden with a fever he could have easily made his escape but he didn't he stayed by me and took care of me until I was healthy. I don't know why but my life just seems so complete now that he's here. It's almost like… but that impossible, he's not human so how could I,,, no people and demons can marry…. But but he a guy… well it's not unusual for people of the same sex to marry either… but I mean I just can't be can I? Am I in love with Naruto? If I were then that would explain why I'm so attached to him and why I get jealous every time I see him try to talk with Kyuubi and why I love teasing him and seeing him blush and why my heart beats faster whenever he's around. Not to mention why I think he's cute. I just there's no point in denying it after writing all this, I am in love with Naruto Uzumaki my fox slave, or should I say my foxy slave.' *Smirk*

~End of entry~

(Later in a library No Ones POV)

"SA~SU~KE~!" Naruto yelled at Sasuke while dragging out his name, "I'm board let's do something. Oh I know I wanna fight, I'm a really great fighter no one has ever beaten me before. Well there was this one person but I was pretty young then and-"

"Naruto, will you please shut up!" Sakura said as she and everyone else was trying to study, Naruto didn't go to school like everyone else so he didn't have to nor did he bother to study.

"Sorry but I'm so board cant you guys take a break from studying and play with me?" Naruto said while giving his best puppy-dog eyes. Usually that would work on everyone, especially Sasuke, but because no one was paying attention to him, no one was affected but him. "Che~ you guys are so boring."

"Naruto if you shut up now I'll get you some ramen later." Sasuke said as he was focused on trying to study his physics book for the final exam coming up.

"Really! Ok Sasuke I'll shut up." And he did, for a good twenty minutes but his short attention span got him complaining in no time.

Just as everyone was about to snap and duck tape Naruto's mouth shut, someone shouted Naruto's name and threw something in the air. Naruto jump up to see what that someone had thrown him, it was a sword. Out for the shadows Kyuubi came out holding another sword.

"Since you're so board how about you and me fight?" This had surprised everyone, no one even knew if Kyuubi could fight.

Grinning his foxlike grin, Naruto grips the sword. "Hehe you're on Kyuu!" The two of them dashed out the door to the training grounds. Everyone was stun to see that Kyuubi was going to 'play' with Naruto especially since he always seems to avoid him. Sasuke was the first to move, he got up and followed his fox, and everyone else followed him, forgetting all about studying. When they got to where the training ground was they saw Kyuubi and Naruto getting ready, for some reason they looked so serious.

"Oh why is my fox fighting your fox?" Itachi said coming out of nowhere surprising everyone.

"They're playing apparently." Sasuke answered never once looking away from the training ground.

(On the training ground)

"Looks like we have an audients." Kyuubi said to Naruto with a slight grin on his face.

"Yey but that's what make it so fun! Hey Kyuu, why don't we make this interesting?"

"Oh, what did you have in mind?"

Naruto's eyes, which were once excited and happy, became serious and hard. "How bout if I win you have to come back to the village and help us out, if you win then…"
Kyuubi's eyes became just as serious. "If I win then you have to stop bugging me about that."

"Fine but I make no promises I will probably bring it up again." Naruto said, and then added, "How bout we do the real fight tomorrow I wanna just have fun for now it's been a while since you and I fought after all." Kyuubi smiled at this and nodded his head.

"Ok that sounds fair. Now prepare to be beaten little brother."

"Hehe not a chance of that happening big brother." And then they attacked on another. Their swords clashing against one another, neither one letting up. Naruto jumped up using the sun as his cover, throw his sword at Kyuubi, Kyuubi moving out of the way just in time, only to use his sword to block Naruto's kick that was coming at him. After hitting the sword with his foot, Naruto jumped back and grabbed his sword. There movements were perfectly synced; when one attacked the other would defend when one would move away the other came closer. They were going so fast that the people watching were having trouble seeing who was who and who was winning.

(Back at were the people were watching)

"Wow I know foxes are known for their speed but that's amazing!" Kiba said as he watched in awe of there fighting.

"Indeed I cannot believe that they are so powerful." Neji said

"GO NARUTO!" Sakura cheered.

"GO KYUUBI!" Ino cheered.

"GO YOUTH!" Lee cheered, causing everyone to look at him like he's crazy, and Sakura blush a deep red for her slaves embarrassing outburst.

"I didn't even know Kyuubi could fight." Itachi said a bit pissed off realizing at how little he knows about his slave.

"Who would have that the Naruto could fight like that?" Sasuke said just as pissed as Itachi for the same reason.

"They sure do look like they're having fun though." Choji said.

"Indeed, I guess foxes really do love to fight, that might be why there one of the most hated species around." Gaara said, the other demon looked at Gaara then at each other and nodded in agreement.

"What do you mean by that?" Temari asked the demons.

"Foxes are one of the most feared demons around because they are one of the strongest demons. That's why you don't usually see foxes as slaves. There are multiple fox rakings as well, from 1 to 9. 9 is the strongest and rarest form of fox, if you ever anger one it can kill you with just a sweep of the paw. Other demons don't understand this power so they hate the foxes for it. The only way to tell what number of tails a fox demon has is it is in its fox form, but it rarely is ever in that form so no one can ever really tell how many tails it has." Shikamaru explained to the humans in a way that they could understand. 'That was only the simple version there was a lot more to that story but it's too troublesome to explain.' Shikamaru thought as he watched the foxes fight.

After about a minute or two of silence and watching the foxes fight, Hinata finally decided to speak.

"D-don't you think that they look like they're dancing?" This question caught everyone off guard so she continues to explain. "W-well I just mean is that they way they move their bodies and the way they are in sync with one another it's kind of like a dance, a battle dance if you will." The group looked back down at the fight and saw what Hinata meant. They were doing something like a battle dance the way they twisted their bodies, and the way they moved with each other and their expressions of happiness on their faces, if they didn't know this was a fight some people might mistake this for dancing.

And for some reason that drove Sasuke and Itachi insane. This didn't like the fact that their foxes where getting along so well, almost like they knew everything about each other. It made them jealous and they didn't know why.

But it looks like the fighting had come to an end when they saw that they both foxes had stopped moving. Upon closer look you could see that they both had a sword pointed at the others chest, they were sweaty and panting their faces were slightly red, and that they were smiling. Just then something happened, they put away their swords and Naruto jumped on Kyuubi causing jealousy to spread to Itachi and Sasuke.

(Back at the training grounds)

Naruto was holding Kyuubi's collar while Kyuubi was holding Naruto's collar, a sword at both of their throats. They were panting heavily, never breaking the eye contacted that they had. Kyuubi smiled, "I-I guess this means it's a draw huh?" He panted out, still looking at Naruto, his red eyes never leaving Naruto's blue one.

"Y-yey I guess it is. Good match." They let go of each other and put their swords away.

"Good job little brother you've improved." Kyuubi said with a rare sweet smile on his lips that only Naruto can see.

Naruto being so happy that his brother praised him could contain himself any longer. The feelings he wanted to convey since he first saw Kyuubi just came rushing out. "KYUUBI!" Naruto yelled as he tackled Kyuubi into a hug, a bone crushing I'm-never-letting-you-go-again type hug. Naruto didn't even notice his master and the others approaching him and Kyuubi.

"Na-ru-to~ why are you hugging Kyuubi?" Itachi said trying to keep his anger down.

"Naruto get off of him right now!" Sasuke demanded not happy with what he was seeing.

"No! I refuse! I don't want to let go of Kyuu, I finally have him back I'm not letting him go~!" Naruto exclaimed while sounding like a whining child, trying to get his mom to by him a new toy.

"Boy you guys sure do seem to be close when did that happen?" Kiba asked trying to calm down the Uchiha's.

"We have always been close, right Naruto?" Kyuubi asked while hugging Naruto tighter, purposely trying to make the Uchiha masters upset.

"Yep always." Naruto say gripping Kyuubi tighter, as if he might disappear at any moment.

"No you haven't you two never talk with each other if anything Kyuubi tries to avoid Naruto." Sakura said, sounding like a cocky know-it-all.

"No we are close I mean after all…" Naruto began, and then looking at everyone, "We are brothers." He finished with a smile. Everyone was so surprised that they froze. After five minutes that all came back to their senses and yelled, "BROTHERS!"


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