Hey guys!
Sorry about this, but this is an update.
Here's whats up.
The first chapter is very messed up. Stuff got deleted from it and I can't fix it. I don't know what on earth I did... Maybe I'm looking at this wrong...
I'm hard at work with the second chapter. I have a ton of stuff I need to do so updates will be slow.
Also the next chapters will have song lyrics in them. Due to that fact I want to have a solid account on another site encase this story gets taken down.
So that might make progress even slower.
And on that note if you know any good songs then please message me with your suggestions! Sad, happy, whatever songs you like!
You've meet Yuu, who will you meet next?!
It's a mystery!
A girl a boy? Just wait and see!
Here is a light teaser!
Where...? What was going on? Why was everything fuzzy... Where memories missing...?
Something else was missing...
Something...
What did this mean...? was someone trying to kill...?
Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu is so funny!
...ha...ha...Hahaha! That murderer! So funny!
Maybe insanity was closer then first thought.
I just want to change! Into a better person!
Now for the extreamly heavy trailer! And just so you all know, I'm going to make this into a flash game! Hopfully all will goo well with it, but it's going to take a long time! Right now this is pretty much as much of a outline as it can be!
On to the teaser!
(Spoilers!)
Hey you should listen to this music! It fits the moods!
Dangan ronpa ost
Mr. Monokuma's Tutoring
Class Trial
Distrust
Desire for Execution
Punishment Rocket
Hiro smiled bitterly.
She was a murderer now. She didn't mean to kill anyone but it still happened. She had become so furious and enraged she wasn't thinking.
And over something so stupid. And in her own room to boot. Nanami had came to talk to her about some infermation she had descovered.
she found out about HIM. That Hiro was the murderer. She killed her own brother. Nanami had proceded to tell Hiro that it didn't matter. She would need to tell everyone the truth If they where to ever trust her.
Hiro had exploded in rage. She smashed Nanami on the head with the hevyest lamp she had.
In fear Hiro moved the body to the beach. Luckly everyone was sleep...
Hiro found a metal pipe and coated it with Nanami's blood. Thus she made a fake weapon.
She then covered Nanami with sand.
And she ran back to her cottage. She was covered with blood! She took a long shower. It finally dawned on her. She killed her friend over something stupid.
Hiro screamed and punched the wall.
She was so stupid! Nanami was dead! And to make it worse now either she would have to die, or all the other kids would! She couldn't let that happen. But she was so scared!
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In no time the trial finaly began. Hiro listened as their evedence began to stack up.
They noticed the blood around Nanami's body was strange. They left that for a bit.
Next the cause of death. A hard hit to the head. Killing Nanami instently. Hiro felt sick.
Next the weapon. Hinata had spotted colored threads on Nanami's head. Komeada helped Hinata make the conection it must have been a lamp.
Next they concluded the body must have been moved. But for what reason?
Souda mentioned around three o'clock he couldn't sleep so he went out side. He had gone to the beach hoping it would south his nerves. He had wintnessed someone running away from the beach in a hurry body seemegly soaked with liquid.
In the dark light he couldn't see, but now that person much have been soaked with Namai's blood.
Sonia had gotten upset that he would doubt their friends.
Hiro was doing her best to keep her poker face up... She was to scared to tell them!
Next why would they kill Namami? And what was she doing before she died? Hiro couldn't watch.
It was found in a note that Nanami was going to visit someone. Hiro had never recived a note...Was Nanami to shy to give it to her...?
Who had Nanami gone to visit... whoever it was they killed her!
And the reason the body was moved was due to it being evedence.
Hiro was getting nerveous. Souda chimed in whoever it was did seem to have a small body frame. But they where still taller then Kuzuryuu and Saionji. Whitch Hiro was.
Hiro was getting tired of this...Maybe she should come right out and say it.
Eventualy everyone was convinced Souda was the muderer seeing that he admited to being out that late. Dissapointing. Now she had to admite her crime. She wanted that shark like kid to live.
They wanted to move on to vote.
Hiro sighed loudly gaining some attention.
"This was the best you could do? I'm dissapointed."
"What-?"
"Who else could it be?! Ha?! If you say something stupid I'll sell your organs on the black market!"
"Ha...Hahaha! Don't you get it?! I'm the killer!"
"Hiro? Surely you jest?"
"Sonia I never joke!"
really they had so little faith in her.
"I'm taller then Kuzuryuu and Saionji and I have a small build."
Debiliving silence.
"Oh? You think I'm lying?! Then prove me wrong! Nanami visited me that night! I struck her once with my lamp! And here's a picture to prove it!"
Hiro went about documenting everything in her room after the murder her mind realing from Nanami's death.
Her lamp had blood on it and the colored thread.
"How do we know that was from your room."
"Souda can prove it. My orignal lamp had broken the day before. So I asked him to repair it. He alredy was neck deep in projects so it would take him a while. He offered my one of the lamps in his room he had been tinkering with. Isn't that right?"
Souda looked sick. He nodded slowly.
"Yes that's the one I gave her..."
"But why move the body?!"
Hinata didn't want her to be the murderer... He wanted Hiro to be innocent. That touched Hiro's heart, but this wasn't the time for tears of joy.
"Because the place I killed Nanami was my own room."
Everyone was shocked.
"Your room...? Why was she there?!"
"She wanted to talk to me. She was trying to help me and I killed her for it."
the truth stung. It cut deeper then any sword could. Hiro frowned doing her best not to cry.
"Help you...?"
"It doesn't matter now."
It didn't.
"Let's vote shall we? Unless you have any evidence dissprovoing me."
And just like that they won the game of death.
Hiro smiled widly at them. She was so happy they where spared!
"Why...? Why did you kill her?! "
Sonia had a big heart...But it was a tad miss guided at times.
"Nanami found out something I didn't want any of you to know. She found out about my brother. "
"Brother?"
"Yes. I had a younger brother once. I can't remember his name... He meant the world to me. Everything. He was the only person I had. We booth where orphaned in a accident. And he lost one eye.
It seemed fitting to give him one of mine. I took his damaged eye and he got my good one. After he rescived my gift it changed colores to match his other eye. "
Hiro raised a hand to her missmatched eyes.
"Mine however stayed missmatched. And I can't see out of the left eye. Over time they eye I gave him became a curse. It got infected. The eye I gave him became his death. The invection spread to fast and nothing could be done."
"So you struck Nanami because of that?!"
Hiro nodded slowly.
"Yes."
Hiro searched in her pokets briefely and pulled out two things. Keys and her note pad.
She tossed Kuzryuu they keys and Hinata the note pad.
She smiled softly at them.
"It had been a hornor to know you all. Bear? Let's get this over with?"
"Wait!"
Hiro turned around. Souda was giving her a teary gaze. She felt so happy she had friends like him! Or... not that couldn't happen anymore...
"Why did you give up?! You could have killed us all! They almost picked me! If you had stayed silent then you would have lived! "
Hiro felt her eyes water.
"Souda I couldn't let them kill you. All of you..."
her voice broke as tear slipped down her face.
"Are so precious to me!"
Souda was in tears now aswell. Hiro couldn't resist the urdge! She ran over to him and hugged him as hard as she could. He started to cry harder.
"I know it must have been hard Souda."
Proving one of your friends was a murderer.
"But thank you so much! "
He shivered sorrow in his vains. He felt guilty... She hoped he could forgive himself.
She gave him one last pat on the back and walked to the other door in the room.
"Let's get this over with!"
Monokuma hit the hammer on the button.
Hiro was taken to a blank white room...
the tital over her death over load!
Thousands of T.V came out of panials. Hiro gritted her teeth facing it head on. One after another turned on overloading her gift and filling her mind with to much infermation. Hiro ignored the pain and pressed on. More and more! Infermation about so much!
Hiro spotted a door and made a break for it. It was likely a trap but she did not want her gift to be her death!
Hiro ran into the room. So this was how she was going to die... the ceiliing was falling down. She was crushed to death.
Brutal! Alright one last note here's how this is going to work with the chapters! First Yuu then Hiro.
First is the good route then the bad and then the nightmare! This is part of Hiro's route Nightmare! Worse then what happenes in the bad routes.
So up next it Hiro's good route chapter one. Then Yuu's bad route! And so on and so fourth.
There will be a continuation of this teaser later on in the story.
