AN: how was the first chapter I hope I can make it better and I hope you guys can help me! SUBMIT IDEAS PLEASE PLEASE I NEED SOME!
Deidaras POV: I burst into the door and the men stared at me and the person in my arms. "I THINK I KILLED THIS PERSON!" I said. Kisame sighed and said "Deidara how many people do you have to kill before you realize we are running out of places to hide the bodies." I counted in my head "Hmmmmmmmmm let me see…" I said thoughtfully. Kisame sighed once again and tried to explain to me that it was a rhetorical question. "OH I GET IT" I said dumbly and kisame face palmed at my stupidity. "Ok ok joke times over let me see that person you have there" said itachi demandly. Itachi saw the arrow in the persons leg and started healing it after he finished he lectured me. Hidan watched amused and he whispered "someone has a stick up their ass~~~" itachi shot him a glare and hidan cowered and walked away mumbling things about fucking Uchihas and their fucking arrogance and shit. I looked back at the person whos chest was going up and down slowly to show that they were breathing I sighed in relief then pondered about what was under their cloak. I told the guys about this idea and we surrounded the person and slowly slipped their hood off. They all gasped a beautiful girl with long pink locks and long lashes with pale pink eyebrows and soft plump lips and her cheeks had a natural flush so this is what layed behind the hood. A stunning girl with breathtaking beauty. Suddenly her eyes shot upon to reveal green eyes and an angry and shocked girl.
Sakuras POV: the darkness did not last long for I woke up with 9 men surrounding me. I was shocked and then I saw the fucker who shot me those blue eyes checking me out. I shot up out of bed and pinned him to the floor and started choking him. "WHY THE FUCK DID YOU SHOOT ME!?" I yelled he gasped for air and started to reach out for help and he said in a raspy voice "I-im sorry I t-thought you w-were a wild animal." I let him go and cursed then attempted to walk out the door when my path was blocked.