Hey guys! Here's chapter 2!
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It was time for breakfast and Sanji was pleased to see that the fridge's locks were still intact and no food were stolen by Luffy…
"NAMI-SWANNNNN~ ROBIN-CHWANNNNN~ IT'S TIME FOR BREAKFAST!
ALL YOU SHITTY IDIOTS… GET UP AND EAT!"
"Luffy It's time to e-"
Robin turned and saw the captain's grouchy face…
"Why…? Why did I have such a weird dream?"
"Luffy… Are you ok?"
"Huh? Ah yes. I'm ol! IT'S TIME TO EAT! IDATAKIMASU!"
During the peaceful afternoon, Luffy sits on Sunny-gou's head and day dream again…
"Are you ok? Luffy?"
Robin came and ask again
I'm not surprised… Luffy hardly ever day dream…
"Ace…Sabo…"
Apparently Luffy did not hear Robin… However Robin was curious…
"Did I hear wrong? Did Luffy say… Sabo? How does he know Sabo…?"
"Ermmm Luffy… Do you know who is Sabo?"
Luffy heard Robin and became alerted…
"What did you say?"
"I asked if you knew who is Sabo…"
"SABO?!"
"Yes Sabo… Why…?"
"Isn't… Isn't….. ISN'T SABO DEAD?!"
"No… At least I don't think so"
"Sabo… Sabo… IS SABO ALIVE?!"
"Should be… I heard them say Sabo was away on a trip when I was at the revolutionaries…"
"Revolutionaries? DAD?!"
"Yes your dad… How… Luffy, How is Sabo related to you?"
"Sabo was… Sabo was… SABO WAS MY OLDER BROTHER!"
~End of Chapter~