So there was a few reviews on this story. There was five, I think. Thanks for the thought, dude with the guest account. But I remember asking for your opinion of the story and some helpful criticism. Instead, you left me five reviews that had everything BUT what I asked for. I'm being for real, guys. There was stuff about Batman I didn't need to know (he's not gonna be seen much in this story), quotes from movies that had nothing to do with the DC universe, something about Jake Long, Marvel references, and pretty much information I didn't need. Thanks for putting in the time and effort, buddy, and I really do appreciate it, but like...pffgfwah? What even was it?

And I quote: "Nanonauts designed to explore the Yoctasphere, or massive Titan Voyagers designed to explore outer space in the long term..." "Real Life controller cheat codes-American Dragon Jake Long..."

If you guys don't believe me, I will screen shot the email and post it on DeviantArt.

Uh...that's all I have to say. I guess. Thanks for reading the story. But I don't even know if you even read it. Thanks anyway? Uh...yeah. Thanks for reading. Enjoy the chapter.

But please...leave a review that is something about the story. Thanks again.


The girl's eyes slowly flutter open. How long has she been out? How did she get here? She's in a crater. There's a sodium oxide and silica compound beneath her. What do they call that on Earth? Oh yeah. Glass. She's lying on glass. Why is she lying on glass though? She examines the circular shape in the clouds above her. Her body temperature is above the normal 87 degrees. How did that happen? Why...?

She sits up quickly. Now she remembers! She came for help!

She observes her surroundings. Feet. Two pairs of feet. She slowly looks up. There are two boys standing above her.

Frightened, she scoots back. Who are these people? What do they want?

Jaime stares at the frightened girl. Blinking, he comes to his senses. "W-Wait! We're not here to hurt you! We just saw you falling from the sky."

"Yeah. We just came to make sure you're okay. And to find out who you are. And what you are. And where you came from-"

"Bart. That's freaking her out more."

"Oh."

The two examine the alien. She looks just like a human. Despite the pointy ears. Her skin is pale, almost like milk. Her eyes are gold with small, faint white crosses as pupils. Her eyelashes are blonde, just like her medium length wavy hair. It parts to the right and pools around her shoulders. She has a small body type, and looks like she would stand around two inches shorter than Jaime. She looked normal...until they looked at her outfit and other accessories. Attached to the sides of her head are thin mech-like boxes. Armor slightly wraps around the frame of her face and extend down her neck. She's wearing some sort of techno breastplate, far more advance than most technology they've seen. It exposes her shoulders and a small portion of the underside of her breasts. It exposes her stomach as well, a chain mail type of material runs down her torso's sides, connecting the strange armored breastplate and the armored belt that sits atop her hips. It extends at points on the sides, three inches in length. A piercing is on her belly button. It looks like a star. Strips of gold and white cloth hang from the hip armor. Loose black shorts adorn her legs. She has on white mech boots with gold and black accents that reach a bit above her knees. They're heeled. The same type of gauntlets are on her arms, reaching halfway up her upper arm.

She studies the boys in front of her with wide eyes. She squints and looks around more.

"Lemara?" she asks.

"Uh...what does that mean?" asks Bart.

"I don't know. The Scarab can't translate. It says its trying to figure it out."

"Figure it out how?"

"I don't know. Go through its own files like a computer?"

The girl slowly attempts to stand up, her legs collapsing beneath her. She hisses in pain. Jaime squats down beside her. "Hey, don't do that. You just fell from the sky."

The girl looks at him, turning her head like she's curious.

"S...skie?" Jaime blinks in surprise. She repeated what he said? "Lemara? Ten kucht tet Lemara?" She speaks in brief, staccato syllables.

"Uh...sorry. I don't understand you."

"U...undarstund? Ten kucht tet?"

"What is that supposed to mean?!" Bart exclaims loudly.

"Hush! The Scarab is almost done translating."

"Scaraab? Scaa...raab? Reech?"

The two boys' head snapped towards her.

"Did she say what I thought she said?" says Bart slowly.

"I think she did."

The girl's eyebrows furrow in frustration. If only she could remember how to say that word. In English. Like her teachers taught her. Why can't she remember?

'Cortex, access files on the English language and translate.'

Translating...

She looks up at the humans. "Earssss? Ten kucht tet Earssss? Le nuum Aurora-tet."

"Scarab, we could use a translation."

Translated. 'Is this Earth? My name is Aurora.'

"Is your name Aurora?"

"Sann."

"What does that mean?" asks Bart.

"It means yes. It seems she can understand English but can't speak it."

"Tr...translaht. Trenslut. Transluut. Translate. Translate." The girl, Aurora, repeated different words Jaime and Bart exchanged quietly, her eyes glowing a dull gold.

'Cortex, put together the sentences so I may communicate.'

Executing...

"My..nuum...name...es...is...Aurora." The two males looked at the alien in surprise. Putting her hands on her knees, the girl slowly picks herself up. After steadying herself using the wall of the crater, she straightens to her full height. "I...off...wuld...warld...world."

"She's speaking English! Crash! Now we can know what she's saying."

Jaime and Aurora stare at one another. Her gaze is intense, almost as if she's trying to figure the male human out.

'Cortex, run scan of male human inhabitant.'

Scanning...

"S...Scarab." Aurora pronunciations slowly, face contorting in effort from concentration, eyes flashing a dull gold. "Reach. Bad. Ex...extermmmm...exterminate."

She moves forward but Jaime holds his hands out. "Woah, woah, woah, hermana! Slow down! Yes, its of the Reach but they don't control us!"

"C-Control...?"

'Cortex, define the term 'control.''

Defining. Control: 1. Determine the behavior or supervise the running of.

"No control?"

"That's right. Now who are you? Where are you from? And how did you fall from the sky?!"

Accessing memories...

Aurora gasps. "Comet? Other comet? Low...low...locashun...location?"

"Where's the other comet? Crashed somewhere over there. Its definitely feeling the mode."

Aurora's face turns serious. "Must...go...exterminate. Com...Communicate...later. J'ban."

Two discs detach themselves from the alien's back. They levitate behind her, and all over her body, linear markings glow bright blue. Feathers spring from the discs, forming two huge golden wings. She squats, pumping her wings hard, taking off into the air at breakneck speed.

"Wait! We weren't done yet! We're still interrogating you!" shouts Bart. "Dang! We need to follow her. She's probably meeting up with a buddy or something."

"Or something. She said she as to go exterminate whatever was in that other comet. We definitely need to follow her. This could turn out bad."

Bart reaches into his pocket and pulls out his goggles while Jaime's armor activates. A rumble shakes the earth. What could possibly be going on?


There! A much better chapter than the first one! Third chapter coming soon. It will definitely be a longer one.

So the alien is revealed. What's her purpose? What's the significance of the other comet, and who does she need to exterminate? Find out next chapter ;P Stick around, guys! All shall be revealed within the week!

~Slayer