Sorry :(

my laptop crashed :(

DISCLAIMER: no matter how much I want to I will never own divergent!

tell 'em, Haymitch

"SHE IS GONNA HAVE PORCUPINE BABIES BEFORE SHE OWNS THIS! wait...why am I here? where is here? are you my mom?"

um... I think he may have overdone the vodka.


Four and Tris lead us down a dim hallway. It takes a while for my eyes to adjust to the lighting. All in all there are six transfers- three Erudite (me included), one Candor, one Amity, and one Abnegation. The Erudite are me, a brown haired girl named JoJo, and a cute boy named Isaac. Isaac keeps looking over at me, and I keep blushing. The Candor is a redhead named Piper, her name makes sense. She is always piping up. The Amity is a boy with blonde hair named Dylan. And the Abnegation is a boy named Jason.- There are only five Dauntless-born. I don't bother to learn their names.

"This is where we split up!" Four yells to be heard over the initiates. "Dauntless-born, go with Six, you don't need a tour, do you?" The Dauntless seem to like this, so they whoop and holler. When I'm sure no one's looking, I sneak over with the Dauntless and follow them into a large gymnasium.

"Rachel, Aly, and Sarah, come with me. Josh, Liam, and Mark, go over to the other corner." Tris tells us. We split into our boy and girl groups. I am ready to fight, kick, and do whatever when Tris comes up behind me.

"Hey, Tr- Six." I say distractedly.

"Don't think I didn't notice you sneaking over." she whispers harshly.

"I'm sorry. I just, I... I wanted to-" she cuts me off.

"It's fine. I probably would have done the same thing, but now you have to stay here. Don't do anything stupid."

I feel so relieved. "I won't. I promise." Tris walks away.

"Alright guys, Tug-o-War starts now." My group grasps one end of the rope while the boys group grabs the other. Tris crosses to the center. In the center I see a pile of mud that I didn't notice before. "Three! Two! One! Begin!"

We grunt and pull until the boys come flying forward and land in the mud.

"Poned!" I yell at them. Josh looks up at me, smiles a bit, and throws a mud ball right into my face. "You did not just do that!" I scream.

"Oh, but I did." he replies. I cry out and run to the mud. I gather some up and keep throwing the mud at him. He laughs and dodges each with ease.

"Stop." A stern voice says. I turn and see a man with more metal than skin on his face. He must see my confused look because he says, " I'm Eric, a Dauntless leader. And you are not a Dauntless-born." he looks at my outfit and raises one eyebrow.

"I, um, I uh...that is..." I croak out.

"Don't worry. I'm not the one you should be worried about. You should worry about Peter, though." I notice Tris's jaw tightens when Eric says Peter.

"What do you want Eric?" Tris asks, clearly annoyed. "Other than a girlfriend."

"I want you." he points at...


CLIFFHANGER!

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