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Hi! I know I haven't posted anything in a while, but I´ve been pretty busy, with school and everything, I´m really sorry. I promise I´ll try to post more often.

On the other side I would like to thank for the reviews & story alerts, but especially to Firelady101, she gave me some advices, and help me in the edition of this first chapter!

Thank you SO SO much!

Here is the edited version of chapter 1… which is definitely better, so please enjoy. R&R. This version totally rocks!

Hopefully I´ll post Chapter 2 tomorrow.

Love ya´ all.

(Edited version of Angel … Maybe?)

NPOV

It was another normal day, as I was heading to biology. But, this morning
Patch didn't show up at my house to drive me to school. He said that he had something to do, that it was a surprise.

I spent all day hoping to see him at school but he never showed up.

Before entering to the class, I went to my locker to grab my book,
biology was going to be really boring without Patch. But at least I was going to be able to focus in the class.

As I entered to the classroom I checked to see if Patch was there. He wasn't. But Vee sure was, the second I steped in to the room she was already screaming my name

"Nora, babe!" Jesus! Could she be louder?

"What's up Vee?" I say walking to her. She had a pretty big smile; actually it was kind of creepy.

"You tell me... Where's that lover of yours?"

"He told me he had something to do."

"Huh... He's jus—" Thank god, the bell rang at that exact moment! A few
seconds later, we set up a whole lab. It was better like this, Vee's mind
paying more attention to Bio than thinking of my boyfriend. Hopefully by the end of the class she is going to be too busy thinking about other things to remember Patch.

The class was actually faster than I thought it was going to be. The moment the bell rang I was already out of the classroom, and of course, Vee was chuckling behind me…

"Little anxious aren't we?" She said, I just smirked and walked to our
lockers.

Once we were out of school I asked Vee for a ride, she agreed, but half way to the farmhouse I start regretting it. the only thing she would talk about was my relationship with Patch –unlike what I hoped for earlier today– and complaining about how she didn't have a boyfriend.

"Babe, may I ask you something? It's kind of personal…"

"Sure." I answered, not even close to knowing what her question was going to be about.

"It's been a while since you and Patch start dating right?..."

"Mhmm."

"Have you guys done it yet?" Crap. I definitely didn't see that one coming.

"Mmm, no, and, What exactly brings this up?"

"Sorry, probably shouldn't ask that I was just being curious..."She turned to look at me and give me a big smile, then we start laughing together.

Few minutes later we arrived at my house.

"Thanks Vee!" I gave her my best grin.

"No prob babe, guess I´ll see you tomorrow..."

"Sure, see you then." I wave goodbye to her, while she disappeared into fog, and drove away.

I discovered that my home was empty when I went inside. Dorothea has been
leaving early lately, and as normal my mom was out of town. Vee gave me a ride and left. And Patch, "had something to do," so I was alone. But thank god it was Friday.

After eating, watching a movie on the TV, and unbelievably doing homework it was almost 8 O'clock when I decided to wash dishes and go and take a shower. I was totally bored.

After washing the dishes, I went upstairs where I start wondering where
Patch was and why hadn´t he showed up yet. Suddenly I heard a noise behind me, and I froze.

'Thinking about me Angel?'I heard in my mind. Chills were dancing down my spine. I felt Patch breathe down my neck.

"Damn you Patch! You scared the shit out of me! You really have to stop that right now!"

"Hi there Angel, I'm fine thanks and you? And stop what? Maybe this?" He
kissed my neck, moving up to my earlobe which caused me to close my eyes and silently moan. He roughly turned me so that I faced him and kissed me tenderly on the lips, he smelled like earthy-mint. I relaxed and decided to play along.
I'll leave my mad girlfriend scene for later, right now all I could think
about was Patch.

Please tell me what do you think!

R&R )