Hey guys thanks for reading my first chapter I hope you are enjoing the story so far.
When the clock chimed 6:00, Darien awoke from his extended catnap. "Tonight, is the night that my life will change forever." He thought to himself as he got out of his bed and went to take a shower.

When he came out of the bathroom, he put on his tuxedo, and looked in the mirror and at his reflection. "I hope I really find my future wife among these women. I know this experience will be one that I'll never forget."

Hearing his phone ring, Darien answered it.

"Hi, Darien, it's Hotaru. I just wanted to make sure that everything with you is going okay?"

"Yes, Hotaru. Everything is great."

"Good. Well, just to let you know, the limos will be arriving around 8pm tonight. Would it be possible for you to come down to the foyer around 7?"

"Sure, that will be fine." Darien says

"Great, see you then."

"Ok, see ya."

After hanging up the phone, Darien takes one last look at himself in the mirror. "Dar, don't mess this up!" He tells himself. Walking toward the door, Darien takes a deep breath, and goes toward the foyer, ready to face his new future.

10 minutes before the women arrive

Darien and Hotaru are standing outside the beach house, waiting for the arrival of the 12 women.

"Are you nervous?" Hotaru asks.

"Just a little bit. I just hope that my future wife will be in this group of 12."

"Well, here's a tiny piece of advice that might help. Just be yourself. It true, the cameras are going to be everywhere around you, but try to ignore them. Just be the Darien Shields you normally are and everything will work out trust me."

"I hope so, Hotaru. I really do."

"Once the ladies get here, they will be sent to the living room. Once all twelve women arrive, you will be able to go inside, and mingle with them. Around 9:30, I will come back, and take you to the private room, where you will have to decide who will get a rose."

"Okay, I understand you perfectly."

"Ok, look here comes the first limo now!"

Darien turns and takes a deep breath as he watches as the limo come to a stop in front of him.

The driver opens the door, and a woman comes out, and smiles at Darien.

Walking to him, she extends her hand. "Hello, my name is Amy."

"Hello Amy, Nice to meet you." He smiles at her and watches as she enters into the house.

Darien turns around, and finds a gorgeous woman emerge from her limo. She had long blond hair too balls where on top of her hair and they looked like meat balls. Also her big blue eyes drew Darien in Quickly.

"Hi, I'm Serena." She says as she reaches for Darien's hand.

"Hello, Serena. It's a pleasure to meet you." Darien says as he shakes her hand.

"The pleasure is all mines really."

They share a small short smile, as Serena pulls her hand away, and walks toward the living room.

Wow, she is Beautiful. Darien thinks to himself, and just smiles.

Darien turns back to the limo in time to see the next bachelorette emerge. This one has long red hair, a nice figure, in Darien's opinion. She reaches toward Darien and smiles.

"Hello, my name is Beryl."

"Hello, Beryl, its nice to meet you." Darien says as he shakes her hand.

"And it's a great pleasure to meet you. I can't wait to get to know you better!" She says enthusiastically as she continues toward the living room.

"Wow, another beauty. This is going to be some hard choices to make."

"How are you holding up?" Hotaru asks.

"All I can say is that the producers really picked some gorgeous women. It's going to be so hard to choose who to keep and who to let go."

"True. But you can handle it."

"Thank you."

Darien watches as 5 more women exited there limos. There names where Rei, Lita, Michelle, Trista, and Molly. All extraordinarily beautiful, yet Darien still holds a picture in his mind of one beauty he met tonight.

Darien looks behind him toward the living room, watching as one woman he already finds himself liking, was moving gracefully around the room, introducing herself. Darien smiles as he turns around, and prepares to meet the other ladies.

Once the limo arrives, Darien introduced himself to the remaining 4 women: Caria, Kaguya, Tina and Kayla. Darien once again looks back into the living room, watching the ladies interact with each other.

"Ready, Darien? Your adventure is about to begin." Hotaru says as she steps next to Darien.

"Yes, I'm ready, Hotaru. Ready to meet the woman of my dreams. He thinks to himself.


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