Disclaimer
I forgot to say this in the last chapter but i don't own Naruto Masashi Kishimoto does.
xxxAuthors Notexxx
All-right guys I need your opinions on weather i should add Naruko to the pairing and don't worry it wont be incest because in a way she isn't his sister. Ill explain later don't want spoil everything.
Heres chapter 2 enjoy and please review.
His eyes begin to burn again as he cry's tears of blood. The villagers and shinobis continue to stare at the blond boy who has just been revived in shock and fear. The 9 tomoe in his red eyes began to spin and turn into a whirlpool like pattern as he sees hi sister fall. The burning sensation has yet to recede as his eyes went yet through another evolution. His eyes now turned light purple with ripple-like patterns.
An old man with gray short hair, tan skin, gray sleeveless shirt, black pants, and black pitchfork in his right hand. You could say out of everybody there this old man had balls of steal or was the dumbest. "Why wont you die!" he screams as he charges at Naruto with his pitchfork. Naruto taking notice of his attacker brings his right fist to his face and swings it across to his right while opening his hand to grab a sword that suddenly flew towards his hand. Naruto grabs the sword and in a flash thrusts it towards the old mans throat. Blood came spraying out drenching Naruto. "Die!" he tells the old man as he swings his sword to the left decapitating the man with balls of steal partially.
As the old man falls Naruto vanishes and appears before the chunin that stabbed his sister intending to slash him from his left shoulder to his right thigh. The chunin jumps back just barely and pulls out his kunai from his right leg holster. The chunin charges forward only to be met with a downward slash from Naruto. Naruto notices the chunin left triangle step forward plunging his kunai towards Narutos lung. As the kunai comes closer to piercing Narutos right lung he sides steps slightly to the left and shifts his body out of the way while swinging his sword in a wide arc to his right decapitating the chunin. He smirks as the chunins head falls to ground roiling, the decapitated body sprays out blood from where the head once was showering Naruto.
He turn to the rest of the shinobis and villagers. "Its your turn to die." He tells them with bloodlust filled eyes. As he is about to make his next move he suddenly grabs his head with both hands. "Aaaaahh!" he screams as a shockwave of chakra pulse sends the villagers and shinobis flying with insane force. "uhuuhuu" he pants as he looks up. Blood everywhere, body parts scattered all over, several villagers genin and chunin about two kilometers away splattered on the trees that were still standing. The rest were under trees that had squash them like potatoes. Naruto notices movements under a pile of trees. 5 shinobis erupt from the debris.
The tallest one stood at about six-feet. His brown hair covered by his hitai-ate like a bandana with his bang sticking out covering the scar on his right eye. He wore a black long sleeve shirt with a green flak jacket on top, dark blue pants, black boots, and fingerless black gloves with metal plate covering the knuckles. He held his left arm which now had the sleeve torn up to the elbow. His arm Squash and hang like jello below the elbow. On his right stood another three shinobi supporting the one in the middle with his left leg that apears to been squash like a banana. The one with the squash leg stood at about five-nine ft, hitai-ate around his forehead, blue long sleeve shirt green flak jacket on top, dark blue pants, blue boots, and dark blue gloves. The one on his left supporting him stood at about five-eight, spiky black hair, his hitai-ate around his arm above the the elbow, he wore green flak jacket under it dark blue long sleeve shirt, dark blue pants, and blue boots. The one on his right supporting him stood at about he had the the same attire as the one to the left except he wore his hitai-ate around his waist. The last one all the way to right stood at about five-seven ft, long silver hair tied in a pony tail reaching to his shoulder. He had on black short sleeve shirt with mesh armor over, black flak vest, black anbu pants with black boots, and brass knuckles with sharp points.
This one seem to be grabbing his ribcage probably due to the fact they were shattered. Naruto now stares at them with ferocious hatred and blood lust. "haa still…" he begins to say as he suddenly blacks out as he falls back he regains his balance. From his hunch over position he stands straight again and begins to crack his neck. "Stupid brat collapsing under the pressure of his own power. Looks like ill have to handle things from here now." He says in his deep dark demonic tone. "Who the fuck are you! What the hell are you!" shouts the shinobi with silver hair now viciously trembling in fear. The possessed Naruto glances at them and see their fear stricken faces. He inhales deeply and smells fear and urine. He cracks a grin at this. "Ironic isn't it. The person you sought to kill because of fear of the power sealed within him only gained more after death. In a way you helped him gain power that surpasses the kyubi." He say's in cold tone as their eyes widen.
"As for who i am there is no need telling dead men who i am. Lets dance." He says while smiling wide showing his now shark like teeth. He extends his left hand towards them. "Bansho Tenin." Suddenly an invisible force pulls the two surprised shinobis supporting the one with the squash leg towards him. As they near within striking distance he swings his sword to the left spinning in a counter clock wise as he steps, end result blood spraying like a broken faucet and the shinobis being cut in half. The silver hair and brown hair shinobi with the scar vanish. They appear to his right and left charging at him with kunai in hand. As they get closer the possessed Naruto rushes at the silver hair one on the left and spins under the slash to the left side of his neck successful getting behind the silver hair attacker and kicking him into the other attacker in one fluid motion.
Their eyes widen as they collide with each other. The possessed Naruto charges forward and thrust his sword into both of them. They both cough up blood as they stare into each others eyes with a look of resignation knowing what will come next. Naruto swings his sword to the left while still inside the shinobis killing them instantly. The shinobi with the squash leg looks with tear filled eyes as he see each of his comrades fall knowing its only a matter of time until its his turn. "Aaaaa! I don't want to die. I want to live." He screams as he begins to crawl away to safety. Possessed Naruto looks over to see the man crawling away. He slowly makes his way over. When he reaches him he stabs him through the head and into the ground.
He turns around and makes his way over to Naruko. "Huu." He sighs . "That sure was boring." He says in a bored tone. When he finally reaches Naruko he see her in a puddle of blood and the katana still in her stomach. "Poor girl. Well I had an agreement with the brat so I cant let her die." He says in a monotonous tone. He removes the katana from her stomach and tosses it away. He brings his hands to the center of his chest in a Hitsuji/Ram hand sign. "Gedo: Rinne Tensei no jutsu." he says summoning the king of hell who looks more like a gate with eyes, and a white cloak over it. It opens its purple lip mouth and a transparent light of bright sea green shoots out and goes into Naruko. Naruko begins to breath as her wounds begin to fade. When finished the only signs that she was ever wounded was her blood ripped white sundress with a hole in the stomach and some dried blood that trickled down her cheek.
"Naruto! whats going on here!" He turns around to be greeted by the sight of an old man with a birth mark under his left eye and white goatee dress in traditional ninja attire with about ten anbu shinobis wearing masks. "Im not Naruto and as for whats going on these brats where attacked and killed by your shinobis. So i saved them." The sandaime hokage flinches at hearing the deep dark demonic voice and at the fact that his subordinates and citizens killed two children. 'That voice could it be the kyubi.' The hokage thinks. "Are you the kyubi and what do you mean by killed." The hokage asks in worry as he gets into a fighting stance. The possessed Naruto chuckles.
"No I'm not and its just's as it sounds they both died so i brought them back to life." He responds. "Then who are you!" The hokage shouts getting anxious."It doesn't matter who I am hokage-san. But I need you to take good care of this brat." He says seriously as he points to Naruko. "As for this brat he's coming with me he and i have an agreement. Don't worry you'll get him back when I'm done training him." He says as he points to himself. "Goodbye hokage-san." His eyes turn red with whirlpool like pattern and begins to get sucked into them. "I won't let you!" the hokage shouts as he sprints towards naruto in vain. By the time he reached the spot Naruto had vanished leaving Naruko behind. "Im sorry Minato, Kushina" He thinks while clenching his fist and gritting his teeth. "Damn it" he curses He Picks up Naruko. "Ill take her to the hospital. Anbu clean up this mess!" He orders his subordinates.
XXX Naruto's Mindscape XXX
A growl is heard throughout a narrowed dark sewer. With a giant gate. The gate had a seal tag on it preventing something powerful from escaping. Footsteps are heard nearing the giant gate. Huge red slit eyes open behind the gate. The giant behind the gate moves closer to the gate making him visible. A giant fox with red fur and nine tails. "Grrr!" he growls in a powerful voice wondering who dares disturb his slumber. He looks towards where the footsteps are coming. He see the silhouette of a man with long spiky hair with horns, light purplish eyes with ripple like patterns and ten tails waging behind him. "Who are you? What are you doing here?" The Kyubi growls out. The silhouette man smirks. The man continues to walk towards the gate. The Kyubis eyes widen upon finally seeing the mans features. "W-w-why! Why do you resemble father!" the Kyubi asks shocked.
XXX Seven Years Later Konoha XXX
XXX Naruko XXX
"Aaaaa!" I wake up screaming clenching my bed sheets. sweat trickles down my skin soaking my white shirt and bed sheets further."Uuuhuuhuu"i pant trying to stabilize my breathing. I look to my nightstand in the darkness and see the number six with two zeros in green light reflecting off of my alarm clock. It hasn't gone of yet, still ten minutes left. I turn off the alarm clock. I sit on my bed remembering the dream I just had. Well Its not a dream more like a memory thats been replaying every time I go to sleep for the past seven years. I hug my knees as i sit and before i know it my vision begins to blur.
Warm tears now trickle down and soak my bed sheets. I continue to cry as i remember the image of nii-chan in his orange jump suit, in a puddle of his blood lying on the ground with a sword in his heart, stomach, lungs, both legs and arms. I clench my fists and grit my teeth as i try to calm down because today is a special day."Nii-chan after today ill become a kunoichi and then ill get a team with a jounin sensei. Just watch nii-chan ill come find you i promise!" I say with the upmost determination. I look over at the nightstand again six-ten it read. I get up and go take a shower. When I'm done I get dress. I wear my black shirt with mesh armor over, a navy blue hoodie, black anbu pants, black boots, shuriken pouches behind my back pants pockets and a kunai holster on my right leg. I grab my keys and walk out the apartment locking the door behind me.
I head towards Ichirakus Ramen. I chuckle to myself. Nii-chan passed his obsession with ramen on to me. I look around and am greeted kindly by some villagers and hateful by others. I continue to walk ignoring them. After what happened to nii-chan I can't help but resent them. All of a sudden I'm pulled down towards the ground by some unknown pressure. Its almost as if gravity itself was pulling me down. Just as fast as it came it went away. I go on high alert and scan the area. I sense no danger I only see people in a similar state as I. I make my way to Ichirakus and order 3 bowls of miso ramen. The pressure comes back again this time a little stronger. I look over at Ayame and Teuchi kneeling on the ground.
The pressure lingers for about ten seconds before it disappears. Again I scan the area and sense no danger. I scratch the back of my head in confusion. I turn around towards Ayame and Teuchi. "Are you guys alright." I ask them worried. "uuuhuuhuu. Y-yes w-were fine."Ayame pants out while Teuchi nods. "W-what d-do you t-think that was." Teuchi asks still finding it difficult to breath. "I don't know but its weird this is the second time its happen." I respond truthfully. After that we get back to doing what we were doing before. After i finished eating and paying I head over to my last day at the academy. When I get there i head to my class. I step into my class room and notice its empty except for my best friend sitting all the way in the back. I head over to her . "Hey! Hinata-chan!" I greet her enthusiastically.
XXX Hinata XXX
"Mmmm." I groan as i wake up to a loud beeping noise. I turn off my alarm clock and look at the time it read six. "Huuu." I exhale I was having such a good dream. I dreamt Naruto-kun came back and we spent the entire day together with his sister. I really miss him and i feel bad for his sister. I don't know what i would do if my sister disappeared. I sigh.
I get up and go shower. Then I get dress into my short sleeve black shirt with mesh armour, cream colored hood jacket with fur cuffs and hem, navy blue pant, and blue shinobi sandals. I head over to the dinning room to see my father, sister, and cousin waiting for breakfast. My father and sister are dress in traditional Hyuga robes. My cousin Neji wore khaki shirt, dull blue shirt with mesh armour underneath, brown shorts, blue shinobi sandals, bandages wrapped around his right arm, chest, and right leg. "morning" I greet them.
"Morning they greet back impassively. Our family relationship isn't that good. The only person i get along with is my little sister. When our breakfast is served we begin to eat. Suddenly a pressure pulls us to the ground then vanishes. "Byakugan!" we shout in unison activating our ocular power. We thoroughly scan the area for any danger. Nothing so we continue to eat. A few minutes latter the pressure returns this time a little stronger. It lingers for about ten seconds then vanishes. We activate our Byakugan again and again nothing. Once we finish eating. I head out to my last day at the academy. As I head out father tells me "don't disgrace the clan any further."
"Yes father." I respond then I head out. I arrive at the academy and head to my class. As always I'm the first one here since i don't like being home to much. I grab a seat all the in the back. A few minuets latter Naruko walks in. "Hey! Hinata-chan!"she greets me. "Good morning Naruko-chan" I greet her back.
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"Say Hinata-chan did you feel that pressure earlier." Naruko asks. "Uh yes it was really strong. But its weird it happened twice i wonder what caused it." She responds curious. "Thats what I want to know too. O-well guess we'll never know. Anyway Hinata-chan what should we do after we graduate." Naruko enthusiastically asks. "Im not sure but father wants me back by dinner to celebrate." They begin to discuss what to do as students arrive. "W-will -y-you go -o-out w-with m-me o-on a d-date?!"
Naruko looks up and notices the now full class staring at her and the guy in front of her. she recognize the guy as Kiba. He had messy brown hair,sharp black eyes, red painted fang marks on his cheeks, grayish pants, gray fur-lined coat with a white fur puppy in hood. "Hell no!" Naruko responds flatly.
'Im tired of all these guys asking me! Damn it can't they see I'm not interested in that stuff right now.' she thinks to herself annoyed. "Haaahaahaa" The whole class erupts in laughter. A chunin walks in in stander attire black hair tied in a pony tail, scar across the bridge of his nose this was Iruka the instructor. "Alright class quite down we have a new student joining us for the exams!" He shouts over them saving Kiba from further embarrassment. "But first attendance!" As he finishes with the attendance he looks at the door waiting anxiously for the new mysterious student that the hokage told him about. All the students stare at the door waiting. In the middle of the class a swirl appears swirling someone into existence. The whole class looked at this persons arrival in amazement.
XXXAuthors NoteXXX
Man this is difficult i tried my best guys tell me what you think. Did anybody figure who it is yet that saved Naruto. I told ya but did ya listen.