people Please review what you think of the book. I really would like some ideas and some critisism. So please revieaw. So I was Listen ing to a song and I want know what songs YOU think I should put in the story. You see I think books should have some real life in them. so please tell me what you think would be a good song and what you thought about the book.
First Day of Collage and I can't wait. (There is sarcasim in that.)
"Why can't you go out with someone like me? You don't even know me." I just kept walking. Edward was walking right behind me yelling the same thing over and over again. Finaly I couldn't handle it. " I know plenty enugh about you to not want to go out with you. I will give you ten reasons. 1: You ignored me the whole time I was at school. 2: You have slept with every girl in forks washington. 3: YOu don't care about any one but your self. 4: You are a selfcentered ass. 5: You are just going to leave anygirl you date after you have one date. 6: You only go for people who will sleep with you.
7: then you dump them after you have sex with them. 8: you are ignorent. 9: your a man whore. 10: you are a disgusting piece of cow shit. there are ten reasons. Oh and one more just for the road. You smell like beer and look like shit. You are a drugie and you stink like cow shit. Did you role in it or something?" He just stood there dumbstruck. So I found that as a chance to escape. I was in the middle of turning when he said something bearly coharent. " You are right." Did he just say that? " You are right about all of that except for the part about roling in cow shit. I am all of
thoughs thing,I do all of thoughs thing. How could I never relize my life is falling apart. I am so sorry bella but I have to go." With that he turned around and walked away.Well that was a surprize. I wzalked back to the receptionist. She looked up smileing but when she saw me her face droped. 'What do you want Miss swan?" Well isn't she just a cup of tea." Actually I was wondering If there are any other rooms avalible?" She looked in her computer." Yes there are but It is in the boys and girls dorm rooms and your roommates would be boys." Yes.
" I don't mind." " Alrighty then. Please give me your dorm key and here is your new dorm key, Your new room number is 666." "Thank you." I walked off to the door and opened it. When I went into the lawn I could feel a deffinet change of tempiture. It was all the suden freezing. I couldn't put a jacket on because it was still in my pack. so I walked all the way to the other side of the campus without a jacket freezing cold. As I closed in to the ferternity I saw a bunch of people and guess who else. Edward.
Does that surprize me? no not really but I felt kind bad. I walked into the place and went to room 666. I was abou to open it up when Someone I reconized walked out. "Bella? Whata re you doing here?" "Emmitt? Um this is my new room because I was roomed with that bitch jessica so I asked for a transfer and here I am." "Wow its good to see you Bella." "You to emmitt. So who else is roomed here. Even for you this place is to big of a mess." he punched my arm litely because of how fragile I am.
" Well I bet you can guess one of them and the other is Jasper. I hope you like it here." Oh no. "Please tell me it is not Edward." he laughed and said this. " Yes bella I am afraid it is. Oh and by they way nice job on what you told Edward." " God damn it. I am so dead." "Awe Its okay he will forgive you. You know he does really like you." What? "I highly doubt that. and any ways I don't like him like that. I like him as a friend and he nows that."
"That is always how it starts Bella. first just friends then you feel a little something for eachother then you become best friends end up moving away from eachother and he will get married and you will get stuck being envited to the wedding still feeling somethin for him without him ever knowing. So don't say it will never happen." How does he now this stuff. " I think you read to many romance novels." He started laughing. " I think your right." Right then edward and jasper came in laughing there heads off. " Wow Em that was pretty tuching." Emmitt just sat down and looked sad.
" Hey . You guys need to just elave him alone alright. He was just trying to help alright. You guys under treat him so much. YOu never actually look after him like brothers should. You are all brothers even if you are adoptide. You guys grew up togather." Edward glared at and jasper just stared at like i was somthing to eat. wich was very creepy let me tell you. " How would you know what we are like?" Asked Edward. "Well if you werent' so oblivious to what is around you, ou would relize that I am the only real friend of emmitts. I was always at your guys's house.
" I was the only one that is like a sibling to him because you guys just bother him and don't care about him. He needs someone in his life that will actually be there for him, like a brother but you two are alwasy to busy fuck other people that you have failed to notice that." they just stood there. "Come on Emmitt lets go get a cup of coffee." "On one condition. I drive." He said with A smile. " Awe hells no. You will not be driving me any were. you are the crazyist driver in town. I will be driving." "fine but I get to pay. you always pay for everything." " Fine lets get out of this hell hole."
When we got in the car the radio was playing Hotel song By Regina Specktor. Emmitt andI used to listen to this song all the time so we started to sing along with the lyrics.
Come in
Come in
Come into my world
I've got to show, show, show you
Come into my bed
I've got to know, know, know you
I have dreams of orca whales and owls
But I wake up in fear
You will never be my, you will never be my fool
Will never be my fool
Floaters in my eyes
Wake up in the hotel room
Cigarettes and lies
I am a child, it's too soon
I have dreams of orca whales and owls
But I wake up in fear
You will never be my, you will never be my fool
Will never be my fool
A little bag of cocaine
A little bag of cocaine
So who's the girl wearing my dress
I figured out her number
It's on a paper napkin
But I don't know her address
I wait downstairs
The porter smiles to me
A smile I've bought
With a couple of gold coins
A sign that I've been caught
I have dreams of orca whales and owls
But I wake up in fear
You will never be my, you will never be my dear
Will never be my dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum-um, dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum-um, dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum-um, dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum
A little bag of cocaine
A little bag of cocaine
So who's the girl wearing my dress
I figured out her number
It's on a paper napkin
But I don't know her address
Come into my world
I've got to show, show, show you
Come into my bed
I've got to know, know, know you
I have dreams of orca whales and owls
But I wake up in fear
You will never be my, you will never be my dear
Will never be my dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum-um, dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum-um, dear, dear friend
Ba-da-da-dum-um, dear, dear friend
By the time we finished the song we were cracking up laughing and singing at the top our lungs. We got to the coffee shop right before the song ended so when we ordered we were still laughing. we got our coffees and sat out side under the trees. Emmitt all the suden got stiff. "Bella I have to tell you something. I Love you."