Thanks for the review and advice everyone
crow2008- i try to polished more around the edges but it seems like it didn't improve, i dont know how , please tell me if it improve please.
Disclaimer: i dont own akuma no riddle
Chapter 1
Tokaku POV
" tokaku- san" i look up and see haru running to me.
"what are does?" I ask as i see her carry a bag full of graduation certificates?
"Ohh, i have yours too" she said, her cheerful attitude is back.
"Dont need it" i say as i turn back and start to walk.
"Dont say that" she say as she run , she hook her arm to mine as we start to walk, i look down at her and smiled, she smiled back.
"I love you"
"I love you" i reply and gently kiss her forehead.
We start to walk towards our temporary house that we rent, haru and i are rich because we are the only one last in our respective family all the thing that can inherit is ours.
Its only 10 minutes walk from here. We just walk in silence, a comfortable silence.
We arrive at the house, the house is bungalow, it has 2 sleeping room, the master bedroom, which what we use and a guest room, each room has bathroom. The living room is very spacious, it has 2 couch, in the wall their is set of books, and one large flat screen tv. We also has bathroom next to the livingroom.
I walk straight to the couch and lie down, i close my eyes and sigh.
"Are you alright?" I open my eyes and see my queens worried gaze, i bought my hand to her cheek and bought her face down and kiss her. I pull away and pull her body into mine so she lay on top of me. Her body is fit with mine its like we are made together. I love her too much, i know i dont say it always because i dont usualy say how i feel, im used that way , im teach that way, dont show any reaction, but shes able to break it, she's able to break my wall, and made me fall in love with her. Made me smile and laugh. She made me feel.
"Come on" I push myself in sitting position. I follow her movement as she made her way to our bedroom and close the door.I got up from the couch and follow her, i open the door and see her taking off her clothes, i can see her scars. I go in front of her and trace the scar that i made.
"Im sorry" she just shook her head.
"Its alright, haru dont blame you" i just look at her and kiss her. She said it many times that she don't blame me, it slightly make my guilt ease, but i stil, feel its my fault.
"Okay, im going to bath" she say as she go to bathroom, but not before she kiss my cheek. I head to living room and sit in couch again and turn on the tv. Fifteen minutes later haru got out of our room and sit next to me, she look like she want to ask me something but douthful, i sigh and turn off the tv and face her.
"What is it?" She look unsure, i take her hand and gently squeeze it to assure her.
"Umm, it just, i want to ask you something" i nod and she look determine and continue.
"I want to go to college"
so what do you think?
R&R
