Ok,first i'll awnser my only review

Paine3: I'm glad you liked it,I think its sucks myself,but a friend made me make one .Hope you enjoy Chapter 2!

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Chapter 2:race against time

"Ok,now what,your gonna have to cut your foot off,and i'm gonna have cut my leg off?"Yuna said,being sarcastic.

"Yuna,now is not the time for jokes"Paine replied.

"Who's joking?"

"Look,I've been thinking, if the airship crashed on the island,we would be inside it,dead,

but when I woke up,I was on the island,and only parts of the airship were around me."

"So?"

"So,the airship blew up or fell apart in the air,and since it was so high in the air when it blew up,

it scattered us everywhere!"

"Paine,we are poisoned,were dying,and all you can think of is how we got here?"

"Im just curious how-"

"WELL I'M CURIOUS ABOUT HOW MUCH TIME WE HAVE BEFORE WE DIE!"

"Yuna,what the hell has gotten in to you?"

"Well,whatever your problem is,your right,i'll look for some antidotes,because they could be anywhere,

and i'll keep an eye out for the others,and you---you just wait here."

"Haha,very funny!"

"Oh,Yuna,I made something for you for protection."

Paine walked around the large boulder Yuna was resting agianst and came back with a long,sharp-

"Stick?"

"It's a spear,you know,you stab people with it?"

"People?"

"Fiends,whatever."

"I like my guns better"

"Yuna,whats your problem?"

"Paine,i'm sorry,everything is happening so fast,the airship,my leg,that dream,the-"

"What dream?"

"Nothing."

"Yuna-"

"Really,it's nothing."

"Ok,i'll be back soon,I promise-"

"promises don't mean anything to me anymore,never have since Tidus promised to take me to his Zanarkand"

Yuna had lost all hope,she knew he wasn't coming back,

but why not?The fayth said they would do there best,

or was that there best?Yuna didn't know what to believe anymore.

"I'll be back soon,I promise,I know you'll doubt it,but I always keep my promises."

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"Its been an hour and Paine isn't back yet"

Yuna thought

Yuna felt useless,all she could do is lay against a rock and slowly die,so she dug through her pockets.

"You gotta be kidding me,two antidotes!"

Yuna quickly twisted off the cap and drank the antidote,and felt better almost instantly!

"Poor Paine,looking for antidotes and had some before she even left,well,I better see what else is in here."

Yuna searched her pockets again and found:a x-potion,a charm bangle,and her communicator!

Brother had given it to her so they could stay in constant contat with each other,

since Yuna,Rikku,and Paine travelled together,they only needed one.

Yuna turned on the communicator,it was on low battery,so she had to hurry,

she was about to speak,but heard two unfamilliar voices talking on the other line.

"What was his name?"

"It was "Brother",what a wierd name,huh?"

"What about the sister?"

"Rikku?No,we haven't found her body yet."

"The summoner?"

"No,we have only found him and the Hypello."

"Well,we have to find the rest before-"

"I KNOW LARXENE!We have to find the rest before the boss finds out."

Yuna then here's a wierd noise and then.

"Axel,it's about time."Larxene said

"Nice to see you too,anyways,aparently,Yuna and Paine are alive."

"YOU SAW THEM!"the unknown voice said.

"I saw Paine,she was muttering "I gotta save Yuna,while I still can"so,she is or was allive"

"So if Yuna is dying,just leave alone,Axel,find Paine,then KILL HER!"

"Larxene,just because your a suck up and is now incharge of this operation because of it doesn't mean-"

"DO AS I SAY OR YOU WILL WISH YOU WERE DEAD!"

"Fine...suck up"

Yuna then hears the wierd noise again.

"So Larxene,whats next?

"Ok,here's what were going to do,Zexi-."

"OH NO,the batteries died,wait a sec...did she call him "Sexy"?

What am I thinking?I gotta warn Paine...somehow."

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"I gotta save Yuna,while I still can."

Paine muttered while walking through the dessert-like island,

all she did was walk and walk as if thats all she could do until she fell over dead,

all of a sudden,she heard a wierd noise behind her,she quickly turned around and saw a man,

in a black trenchcoat,with red spiky hair.

"Who the hell are you?"Paine asked,nervously.

"Your death...but everyone else calls me Axel."

Axel spread his arms arms apart,and all of a sudden,a wheel thing appeared in each of his hands!

"OH SHIT!"

Axel threw one of his wheel things at Paine but she quickly dodged it and hid behind a tree.

"Oh come on,you can do better than that!"Axel taunted

Paine had no weapons,no defence,and no time.

"Hahaha,this is too easy!"Axel taunted again.

Paine saw something moving on the ground it's-.

"That damn hedgehog!"

Paine had a idea,she kicked the hedgehog on its back and picked it up by its fur on its stomach and waited.

All of a sudden,she heard the wierd noise again.

"He's moving."Paine thought.

In the blink of an eye,he apeared right in front of her!

Paine quickly plunged the back of the hedgehog into Axel's heart!

"You...stupid...bitch!"

Panie hit Axel in the face so hard it forced him to the ground.

"That was too easy!Ya know,considering the fact that I just

put over onehundred poisonous quills in your body,

it all went into your heart too!So that will probally give you twenty seconds to live!"Paine taunted

"you...may...have...beaten me...but...the organization...will suceed!"

"Whats there plans?"

"you...will know...soon...enough."

Axel died and slowly faded away.

Paine then heard a girl crying,she turned around and saw Rikku,freaking out and held Yuna's gun to her own head

"RIKKU NO!"

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Ok,I called Axel's weapons "Wheel Things" cause I have no idea of what the hell they are called!Hope you liked Chapter 2!