Yes I know Brackenfur Is Hollyleaf's mentor, but I wanted to give her a different one in this fanfiction. Ps. Tell me if I miss a cat that was supposed to be in the series, I will be doing a few fanfictions from the end of this one to the end of the Last Hope. So if I do miss a cat please tell me.
Thunderclan
Leader Firestar—ginger tom with green eyes
Deputy Brambleclaw—dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Berrypaw
Medicine Cat: Leafpool—light brown tabby she cat with amber eyes
Warriors
Dustpelt—dark brown tabby tom
Apprentice, Hazelpaw
Sandstorm—pale ginger she cat
Apprentice, Honeypaw
Cloudtail—long haired white tom
Apprentice, Cinderpaw
Brackenfur—golden brown tom
Apprentice, Barley
Thornclaw—golden brown tom
Apprentice, Poppypaw
Brightheart—white she cat with ginger patches
Apprentice, Ravenpaw
Ashfur—pale grey tom with dark blue eyes
Sorreltail—tortoishell and white she cat
Spiderleg—black tom with brown underbelly
Apprentice, Mousepaw
Brook—brown tabby she cat
Stormfur—dark grey tom with amber eyes
Whitewing—white she cat with green eyes
Birchfall—light brown tabby tom
Greystripe—grey tom with yellow eyes(formally of Thunderclan
Apprentice, Millie
Millie—small silver she cat(formally a kittypet)
Apprentices
Ravenpaw—black tom with a white tail tip(Formally a loner)
Barley—black and white tom(formally a loner)
Millie—small silver she cat(formally a kittypet)
Berrypaw—cream colored tom
Hazelpaw—grey and white she cat
Mousepaw—grey and white tom
Cinderpaw—grey tabby she cat
Honeypaw—light brown tabby she cat
Poppypaw—tortoishell she cat
Queens
Ferncloud—pale grey she cat(Foxkit and Icekit)Dustpelt
Daisy—cream furred she cat from horseplace
Squirrelflight—dark ginger she cat with green eyes(Hollykit, Lionkit and Jaykit)Brambleclaw
Elders
Longtail—pale tabby tom
Mousefur—dusky brown she cat
Chapter Two
"Are you ready?" Greystripe asked, they were standing on Windclan territory, at the border with Thunderclan; they hadn't been stopped by any patrols which made it a little easier to get home. Barely was beyond nervous about becoming a clan cat; but Ravenpaw was even more nevous and fearful than him, after all he had left the clan willingly; what would they say about him coming back home to Thunderclan.
"YES" Ravenpaw said, they leapt over the stream and began to walk through the forest.
"How do we find the camp?" Barley asked.
"Wherever there's plenty of Thunderclan scent, and I mean lots of it" Greystripe responded.
"There's lots of clan scent everywhere Greystripe" Millie pointed out mildly.
"I know, but still" Greystripe meowed.
"Smell that?" Ravenpaw asked, he scented recent cat scent.
"Yes, patrol stale" Greystripe said, "if we follow that, we should find the camp"
"Let's go" Barely said. They trotted off, following the scent trail. It was Greystripe who first spotted the cat.
"Spiderpaw!" Greystripe shot forward.
"Who" Barley asked confused.
"I don't know" Millie admitted.
"G-Greystripe" the black tom stammered. "you're alive" he suddenly noticed them, "and you brought friends"
"Oh, yeah this is Millie, Ravenpaw and Barley." Greystripe said, "you have no idea how happy I am to see you Spiderpaw."
"Actually it's Spiderleg now" Spiderleg puffed his chest out, "I'm a warrior now, I just wish Cinderpelt was still alive" he added softly.
"Cinderpelt's dead!" Greystripe exclaimed.
"I'll tell you the rest at camp, Firestar will be so happy to see you" Spiderleg waved his tail at them before turning and racing through the undergrowth, Greystripe and Ravenpaw on his heels, Barley and Millie followed more slowly.
"Firestar, Greystripe is back and he's brought friends" Spiderleg announced as they entered the camp.
"Greystripe?" Firestar leapt down from the highledge and raced over to them.
"Greystripe! Ravenpaw!" Firestar purred, "you're alive"
"Whose Greystripe mommy?" a little black she cat asked Squirrelflight.
"An old friend" she rmurmured.
"It's great to see you" Brambleclaw pushed his way through the crowd of cats to stand beside his leader.
"Oh. Greystripe, you remember Brambleclaw don't you; he's Thunderclan's new deputy" Firestar said awkwardly.
"It's ok Firestar. I understand" Greystripe said.
"Great to see you Barley, but you two doing here, little far from home" Firestar asked.
"We hought we might join Thunderclan" Ravenpaw said.
"If you'll have us" Barley added.
"Hey Firestar, this is Millie, a friend of mine" Grestripe introduced the she cat.
"Hi Millie" Firestar said politely. "Let me tell the clan that you're back, all of you; oh and Millie, Barley welcome to Thunderclan" Firestar bounded away and leapt onto the highledge.
"All cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the highledge for a clan meeting" Firestar motioned with his tail for them to stand under the highledge.
"Ravenpaw, Barley are you sure you will stay" Firestar asked.
"Too far to go back" Barley answered.
"You know you will have to become apprentices, as will Millie" Firestar said.
"We know" Ravenpaw said, "just don't give me too young of a mentor" he teased.
"He won't" Brambleclaw said, he sat down beside Greystripe.
Firestar turned his attention to the assembled clan, "As you all now know, Greystripe is back and has brought with him Ravenpaw, Barley and Millie; today they told me all of them wish to stay in Thunderclan; so I must choose a mentor for them except for Greystripe." Firestar pasued thinking, "I have decided that Brightheart will be Ravenpaw's mentor"
Brightheart stepped forward and touched noses awkwardly with Ravenpaw. It was very awkward, especially since Ravenpaw was slightly larger than Brightheart.
"Barley your mentor will be will be Brackenfur" Firestar continued as Brackenfur stepped forward to touch noses with the older tom.
"I promise I'll do my best to make this not as awkward" Ravenpaw heard Brackenfur say. Brightheart stifled a chuckle of amusement.
"What he said" She mewed softly to him.
"Millie, you're mentor will be Greystripe, since you two already know each other, that will make it easier" Firestar said. Greystripe turned and touched noses with Millie, who was quietly beaming.
"Hazelpaw, why don't you show our new apprentices around camp while I speak with Greystripe and my deputy" Firestar leapt down.
"Yes Firestar" Hazelpaw said eagerly, she flicked her tail at Ravenpaw, ''this way" she mewed.