Hey guys This is the new reformed chapter one please reveiw. And thanks to all the people who have reveiwed.
Clary
I'm alive. Only because of him. I hate him, Jace, but I love him. Death, it sounds creepy, but it happens. I wanted it to happen. He saved me. Me, the popular mean girl. The user. I hate her. The person who made me this way. It would have been nice, floating in the water, not caring because she would be dead. Blank
I never wanted to become who I was. I still have to go to school, become the popular girl. He is at school, the dumb jock lump of a boyfriend. But Jace is at school too. Maybe there is something to look forward to.
Jace
I regret her. Saving her. What a waste. I hate her, but I want the old Clary back. The one who I loved, my girlfriend that I loved, not the popular broken person she is now. I want her back. She really is broken, She almost drowned herself. Her new boyfriend is annoying. But she is still there but in a different way. She is gone but she is there. Hate. I have never hated anything, I have disliked things, but never hated. I hate the new her.
I still have to say back and stay away. I don't want to hurt her like I did. I should have never done it. I still love her, crave her, need her. School is the only time see her, she never calls, she doesn't talk to me..
Clary
It stung. His hit. It was still a year ago but it still hurts. He knew what my father had done to me and he still slapped me. I had changed into a 'popular' for him. To show that I didn't need him to be there, to help me. But I did need him. He was alway there for me. Two weeks. He had been there at my window for two weeks trying to get me to forgive him. I can't believe he had gave up trying to get me back. Now I sound like the snob that i've became. I don't know why I couldn't let him in. Something jolts me out of my emotional thought.
I silently thank the force that had conjured me to go back to life
. Jace. I needed to make it up to him.
As I sit I realise it is almost midnight. And as my head hit the pillow, my eyes fell shut and pulled me into the blackness.
When I wake up the next day. I ponder on what I had done to my life. (By the Way. Clary is Rich)
I have spoiled myself upon hurt with clothes, popularity and boys.
I was selfish enough to let Jace go.
I killed who I really was.
I'm not myself anymore.
I had ruined the best part of my life (Jace).
My thought drift out of me to the clock. 7:35. I had been hating my life for thirty minutes. I take a quick shower throw on a white crop and a black pencil skirt. I race outside jump into my convertible. When I reach my lunch table I can not be more shocked. Keelie was sitting at my bench outside with my friends and my boyfriend. Seriously. I walk up to my brother, Jonathan and ask him if his friend, Josh could walk me into school. Josh is the most sought out person in the school. Revenge is mine.
Of course Jon says yes after I threaten to tell his worst secret. (once I had been walking past Jon's bedroom and I heard something so I creep closer and opened the door slightly and there was Jonathan singing to the My Little Pony show theme song.)
"C, Hello." A voice calls out. I spin around and there stands Josh in basketball shorts and a pink under armour shirt.
"Hey, Josh. Can you help me with a little something called revenge." I state. Josh will never say no, he loves pranks and hates Keelie as much as I do. Everybody knows Keelie is into Josh except Josh.
"Sweetheart, revenge is like my condom, I can never leave home without it."He says coolly leaning against his car. (Clary is standing right next to him)
I turn and whisper my secret plan to Josh and as I pull away he grins evilly.
"You ready to be led in by this hunk, I can get you sunglasses if you want?" He asks I sock him in the arm and he grabs my arm and loop arms and walk towards the bench.
"Hey guys" I say brightly looking right at Keelie."and bitch." I sit down and Michael moves so Josh can fit in.
Today is going to be awesome
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Sara