A Demon in my View Chap 2

V-Chan: Hey hey hey, I got a question for you!

BPY: What is it?

V-Chan: Do you own Yu Yu Hakusho?

BPY: No I sadly don't. Wee I'm Hyper! (Starts running towards the distance yelling "I'm coming Krad-Sama!")

V-Chan:(eyes roll) Zoe's too busy looking for Krad… I'll have Rama read the Disclaimer.

Kurama: Zoe does not own Yu Yu Hakusho or D.N.Angel.

V-Chan- (puts Zoe in Strait jacket and comes after her with needle) YOU'RE coming with me! Krad doesn't like insane girls!

BPY: NO! NOT THE NEEDLE AGAIN! Any way, enjoy the second chapter!.

Krad: Read and review for the crazy girl.

V-Chan: YOU'RE NOT IN THIS STORY! GET OUT!

Warning: This is Yoai, a.k.a Boy on Boy action. If you're homophobic don't read. If you don't care read on, but I won't pay the therapy bill…

The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,

Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore –

While I nodded nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,

As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.

"Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door –

Only this and nothing more."

Complete Tales & Poems By Edgar Allan Poe

Hiei has now been at Minamino Mansion for about a week and has learned quite a lot about his new brothers. Yoko, the eldest, was very much into botany and gardening; he enjoyed taking care of exotic plants. Hiei would often ask about them and Yoko would always cheerily answer. He would always trust Yoko to keep his secrets: One day when Hiei was walking through one of the mansion's many greenhouses, Hiei started to remember his friends that were adopted before him, such as Yusuke Urameshi and Yukina Kawaii. He started to cry. He was happy to be adopted by such nice people, but he was sad because he could not tell his friends where he was. Yusuke and Yukina would always come to visit him. They would buy him clothes so he would not have to wear the ones the orphanage provided, comfort him when he was sad, and always look after him. He loved them like family. No, they were his family, and he would probably never see them again. Yoko saw this and started to cry himself. This boy's crying reminded him of his brother crying when the Raven came. He could not stand crying, so he went over and gave him a bear hug and whispered, "Shh, it'll all be okay. I'm here, now tell me what's wrong?"

Hiei snuggled into the hug and said, "I'll tell you as long as you promise not to tell anyone." "I won't tell any one," he replied softly. The shadow said something only audible to the two of them. He told Yoko of Yusuke and Yukina, and that he was afraid he would not see them. The "fox" merely nodded. (Fox is a nickname Hiei gave him) Yoko then told him, "If there's anything on your mind tell me I'll listen." Hiei nodded. "Want to stay here with me for a while?" The fox questioned. Hiei nodded again. Hiei would usually spend his time with the eldest brother tending flowers. The reason for this was because Rama was finishing up his freshman year at the local private high school that Hiei would be attending in the fall.

After school, about 5:00pm, was the only time he would see him, and this would only be for a moment or two because he had to go up to his room to do his homework. Sometimes, Kurama would come into Hiei's room in the middle of the night and ask Hiei to hold him. Hiei knew his Onii-san was afraid of something because whenever Yukina was afraid of something she would ask Hiei or Yusuke to hold her. Hiei usually obliged when Kurama asked him to hold him because he to knew what it was like to be afraid. Whenever Hiei asked what he was afraid of he always got the same answer: "The Raven". Usually Kurama only came to Hiei's room in the dead of night. "The Witching Hour", was what Rama called it. He would always say in a ruff whisper, "In the Witching Hour the Raven Will Come." The only comfort Hiei could give him was soft singing of a song he had learned in his childhood at the orphanage called The Legend of the forbidden one. It went something like this:

In days of old when the world was young they sang tales of the forbidden one,

His eyes of red, his cloth of coal, his story that no one may know,

His body of fire, his heart of ice was born of ice maiden lore,

He fell from cliff for he was male but he survived so goes this tale

He had three eyes, two red one gold, he held the jagan from days of old,

He became a dragon and we are told he still lives today the forbidden one.

Hiei became very worried with his Onii-san's recent visits, and he decided to tell the fox about them. "Fox, I was wondering, who is The Raven?" said Hiei. Yoko stopped what he was doing right there. "What did you say?" he replied barely audible. "Who is The Raven Rama keeps coming up to my room saying he's afraid that The Raven will get him?" said the shadow. Yoko suddenly pulled Hiei into an embrace, so that only he and Hiei could hear the conversation. He said only one word, "Karasu", then he pulled him in tighter and kissed the nape of his neck and continued, "Karasu is Kurama's ex boyfriend. He seemed like such a gentlemen at first, but that was just a cover up…. he…he…abused my brother till he was at the breaking point. He used to lock him in the basement of his apartment and torture him for his own pleasure." Hiei could not believe what the Fox had just said. "How did you find out? Does Shiori know?" the young man stuttered. Yoko replied, "He came home one night, and was horribly injured. He was shattered emotionally, and no, Mother does not know. This is a secret between you, me and Rama", he paused a moment before continuing, "Please do not tell mother about this…she has enough to worry about." He kissed Hiei once more on his cheek and went back to tending his plants. At this point, poor Hiei was in a state of shock. He felt horrible that he had not realized that Rama's cheerful disposition was just there to cover up his concern and sadness. He was also in shock by the way the fox had treated him. He had kissed him on the neck in several places, and his cheek the way a lover would tenderly kiss his partner. Little did the shadow know things would get much weirder.

The next morning Hiei woke up to the sound of a car beeping and the yelling of his name. Hiei looked out the window, and two seconds later he was running down the stairs, and out the door. The ones making the ruckus were Hiei's old friends, Yusuke Urameshi and Yukina Kawaii. Now, Yusuke was the same age as Hiei. He had big amber eyes, raven hair that was slicked back with palmate, and he was a little taller than Hiei. (Hiei was about 4'11. Yusuke was 5'3.) Yukina, on the other hand, was a little shorter then Hiei and had long blue hair and eyes similar to Hiei's. Both Hiei and Yukina's eyes were blood red. She was very fair and wore a simple light blue kimono. Yusuke wore a pair of tight fitting blue jeans, a white dress shirt and a jean jacket. Hiei was about to hug the two, when Kurama came running out yelling, "No, don't take Hiei away! We love him!" At that moment, the feminine man punched Yusuke, and almost ran Hiei back inside when the shadow explained that they were his old friends. "Hiei-San, it's so good to see you again!" said Yukina. "Yeah, we missed ya, shrimp!" added Yusuke. Hiei then introduced Rama and Yoko. "These are my adoptive brothers, Yoko and Kurama Minamino." Yukina started blushing. She had never seen any two people that had matched Hiei's beauty. These two nearly surpassed it. She was also surprised by the chemistry between the two. They acted like they had known each other for years, but she knew offhand that they had only known each other for a week or two. And the way Hiei would look at the two he looked at them with bright trusting eyes, not the usual cold hard ones. The pack would watch movies all night, but little did they know that there would be terror at the witching hour.

BPY: Read and review Please! Yay!

Krad: Review for the crazy girl or you will die!

V-Chan: Krad, time for your medication!

Krad: Noooooooooo! (Super long Shinji Evangelion "no")

Dark: Please review and I'll give all you lovely girls and guys kisses!

BPY, Krad, V-Chan: NO! DARK, I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY BOYFRIEND! (Everyone chases Dark into the distance.)

BPY: Wait, where the hell did Dark come from?

V-Chan: I wonder…O.o

BPY: I thank all of you who reviewed: Ladyviolathornhaven, Ariesgirl, Shadowphoenix, and all of the other beautiful reviewers. I am terribly sorry if I forgot your names! Oh, yeah, and a special thanks to Casey and Katie for giving me the inspiration for chapter three. And let's not forget DemonGladiator for her awesome review. Don't worry, I'll update soon for you, my lovely readers sake. And, to my first ever reviewers, you get Dark and Krad making out plushies! 

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V-Chan: Konnichi wa! I'm Zo-Chan's beta reader and psychiatric nurse, V-Chan, a.k.a: ladyviolathornhaven. So, now, I can't review…TT-TT. Zo would talk more, but after realizing that Krad was cheating on her with Dark, and Dark was cheating on her with Krad and me, she's ready to jump off the nearest cliff she can find. (Turns to Zoe) Don't do it, Zoe! You still have to finish this story! Jeez, that girl…

Anyways, to save the crazy-turned-suicidal girl, please Review. Oh, wait! I think she has a rope…crap…she just cut it…I think she needs another shot…

Please review for the crazy girl, and to keep me in business. Seriously, this girl needs therapy…Yo! Dark! Krad! Save the poor girl, would ya? Go make out or something to change her mind!