This is the second chapter, lets see if I do as good a job as I did the last shall we?
Naruto doesn't let me own him, actually the law doesn't…. so what would happen if the law wasn't there anymore ¬¬ hehe?
Fallen LeavesChapter 2
Orochimaru spun around and found himself facing naruto, but this naruto was unharmed, he had no scratches or holes where the Chidori had struck him. Except for the blood on his orange and black jacket he was completely healed, the one thing that showed Orochimaru that he wasn't naruto, were the small crimson red eyes that replaced the bright blue ones.
"I'm Kyuubi, not the human. So why do you call him Kyuubi brat?" He asked in an evil raspy voice that was definitely not naruto's. Orochimaru could only stare as the Kyuubi threw a powerful punch at his head sending him flying backwards.
"This will be more interesting then I thought." Orochimaru said to himself and they both started to fight.
"Shikamaru don't fallow us!" Ino cried as he followed her and Choji towards a white door.
"Why not? Your going there so why cant I?" he asked alittle annoyed that she was trying to stop him were he wanted to go.
"You idiot! You don't have to go!" she replied as she was engulped in a bright warm light
"What does she mean I don't have to go?" He thought and stopped walking as he watched Choji smile and walk in to the white warm gates. Suddenly he was thrown back and found himself in a suffocating position. Dead bugs were on him and he could feel Shino's hair in his face. When he climbed out of this harsh position he found that he had been under a dead and sliced up Shino, Kiba, and Hinata. He had blood all over himself and he could feel his left arm was broken. The blow that had killed Shino and the others had missed him because they had been in front of him when it happened, which saved his life. He saw so many dead bodies it wasn't funny, not that it would ever be funny but this was amazing, one person had done all this without a problem, Orochimaru. Who was currently in Sasuke's form. "Man, now what?" He whined. "This is so, so, sooooo troublesome!" He cried. "This is the most troublesome thing that's ever happened to me! I want to crawl into a damn corner!" just when he thought he should actually do that he heard a clash of shuriken (did I spell that right) and a loud roar. "Somebody's still alive!" He asked himself hopefully and ran over the dead bodies of his late friends to see what it was.
"Heh, your actually pretty good for a human!" A bleeding Kyuubi naruto said to an Orochimaru Sasuke who was also covered in his own blood.
"I can say the same to you." He replied panting and holding a wound on his right arm. Kyuubi ran at him with his read chakura shaped fox that was floating around his body, he took a large punch at Orochimaru who had used substitution Jutsu and appeared behind him throwing his own kind of snake swing. Smacking Kyuubi in the back of the head making him go flying into the ground with a large crunch. While on the ground Kyuubi swung his leg out Lee style and tripped Orochimaru causing him to fall to the ground hard. Kyuubi took this opportunity to punch Orochimaru in the stomach with terrible force and watch joyfully as the bastard coughed up blood.
"Hmm, it looks like I'm going to have to finish this off another day." Orochimaru thought to himself and he did a couple of fast hand signs and jutsu'd away for another day(hey that rhymed again) in front of a triumphing Kyuubi
"That was fun, I want to do more!" Kyuubi said playfully. "There seem to be only two left alive in the village, except one of them isn't human. Oh well I guess I'll make do with what I have and then move on to another village." He said to himself as he face in the direction a shivering Shikamaru was hiding.
"Holy shit! Is that naruto? No, It cant be, uh oh he's looking were I am, this is totally not my day… actually its not anyone's day! I so got to get out of here!" Shikamaru thought desperately, and was about to run off when he found himself facing naruto who had red silted eyes!
"YEAAHHHHHH!" Shikamaru screamed in surprised and fell backwards onto the ground shaking all over. This was NOT naruto in anyway! It kinda looked like…. A fox! The Kyuubi was out! Man it really, really wasn't his day. Just as Kyuubi was about to finish off Shikamaru for good, a small white object flew through the air and bit kyuubi's hand so hard that it started bleeding.
"YYYEEEAAAOOOOWWWW!" Kyuubi roared and started swinging Akamaru, who was still clinging to his hand, around. Shikamaru thanked that poor little dog that was probably going to die and started running as fast as a ninja could possibly run. His ponytail had come undone and his hair was now waving all over his face as he bolted over thousands of dead bodies with a fuming Kyuubi at his heals.
Sweat ran down Shikamaru's face and he only wished he would wake up. Yes, he would wake up and then go down stairs to his parents room and give his mom a great big hug, even if it felt so troublesome to him, he would then go all the way to the sand village and give Temari a nice sloppy kiss, and then to top it off he would just sit on the roof of choji's house and watch the clouds and eat chips all day with him without a care in the world. Yes that's what he wanted. He definitely didn't want it to end this way though. He was inches away from the forest of death, if he could just get in there he would lose Kyuubi and find away out of this village with out being seen. Just then Kyuubi grabbed his broken arm and pulled him back with such force that he heard a pop in his already dislocated arm, which wasn't good. With kyuubi's other arm he went for a punch to Shikamaru's head but stopped when he was a centimeter away from hitting between his eyes. Shikamaru, who had closed his eyes ready for the death hit opened one eye, and saw 2 blue orbs staring back at him with his fist so close to Shikamaru's head that he could actually feel what it might have felt like, that's when he fainted….
Chapter EndOI! I want reviews! They help me survive! Do you like my Kyuubi by the way? He's going to stay evil ok. I'm not to fond of stories where the author turns Kyuubi goodie two shoes. I think that just ruins the story damn it!
