First real chapter. WOOHOO! :) After the next chapter I'm going to wait until i get some reviews until I update any more chapters.
He cautiously walked down the steps. He was not sure if he should go to the door. He waited. Again he heard the doorknob turn. The door slowly opened slightly. Then a little more. Now he was terrified. Someone or something was slowly opening his door.
The door opened further. Now he could see the faint outline of something. He didn't know what it was but it wasn't human. He heard the creature growl. Now he was terrified than ever. A growling alien creature was at his door and he was paralyzed with fear.
The door opened halfway. The alien creature was not alone. There was a smaller bat like creature flying beside it. The alien put one foot inside. It opened the door all the way then stepped inside. It was too dark for him to see clearly. What he saw of the alien was that it was huge and it had long, sharp claws. It turned toward him. It turned toward him. He wanted to run away, to defend himself if it attacked, but he couldn't move. The creature let out a deafening screech and then lunged toward him. He felt searing pain and then fell to the floor unconscious.
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