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-BREE
Chapter 2
Lets back up a second
My name is lulu-chizz youku I'm a soul reaper without a captain to respond too. I guess my powers showed when I was little, my hair was white and white tattoos spread all over my body ever since I was born.
When I turned 8 something started to whisper in my ear all night and every night.
Soon every day anytime, anywhere. Then my tattoos came off my skin and became a human being. It was a young boy around my age with white hair and white tattoos just like me. I was surprised to know that someone else looked like me, but when I looked in the mirror my hair and tattoos were black as night. I turned around in shock and backed up"who are you?!What is your name?" I asked the stranger . "please don't fret" he said calmly " My name is toshiro-maki miss. lulu-chizz" he handed out his hand "you may not know me but i certintley know you" he said. hesitantly i reached my hand out and placed it in his "god now lets start" he grinned and that's how I met toshiro-maki.
as soon as we met we trained and trained. "your mean toshiro-maki!" i would yell whenever he beat me "don't worry you'll win soon i promise" he would say with a caring smile and looking deep in my eyes with his eyes blue beutys, "you promise" i would whimper " i promise" he said calmly. i looked up at him "YEA! lets go again again!" i would say getting up 'you shouldn't fight with him play with me' something said in my head "SHUT UP BREE!" I yelled. "are you ok?" he asked with a serious face, i looked down and kicked the floor "of course i am!Stupid head! i'm tough!" but i always knew that me, her and toshiro-maki are going to be together.
soon I mastered toshiro-maki and treated him as if I would want to be treated along with help from a friend...
Soon the thirteen court guard squads found out and took me into custody. They offered me high spots and I would refuse all of them. For five years this went on and soon every one gave up but not Captain Kuchki and now he's asking again.
but they didn't only take my freedom but my best friend.
Chapter 3
Now back to this time
"Shhhhhiiiiitttt!" I yelled angrily "WHERE THE FUCK AM I?!"
I looked franticly from side to side.
"Stop yelling you'll scare people"
"HUH! Why the fuck are you out of my body!?" I asked toshiro-maki as he stretched his legs.
"Cause I want too"
"THAT AINT A REASON!" I yelled at him "whatever since your out be useful (cough (for once)) and tell me where squad six barracks are" I told him "I don't know little chizz" he said mockingly "shut up I'm 23!" I yelled "And yet you look 18" he said walking ahead.
Pong!
"Shut the hell up!" I yelled while throwing the frying pan to the side and walking over him. "Stupid soul society thing making me look five years younger" I muttered.
"Just help me find it!" I yelled as he got up.
Glareeee
"huh please toshiro-maki" I said he looked away and crossed his arms. \
Walking over to him
Sqquishhh
"Pleaseee toshiro-maki" I said while squishing my boobs up on him.
"GAH!" he immediately turned around and covered his nose. "pervert" I muttered. that's another thing i hate about him he always is such a pervert but i cant complain hehe as he is one so am i.
"ok ok" he said while giving in
"YEA!" i said while squishing him a big hug.
"Your (cough) Ch-CHOCKING ME!" He said frantically "oops!" i said while dropping him.
'you guys never changed' i turned around as the voice disapered "is something wrong?" toshiro-maki asked. distress cross my face " no nothing at all" i said sullenly and walked ahead.
'that voice sounded so familiar'
5 HOURS LATER
"WE'RE HERE!" I said in enjoyment at the gates "you know you suck at directions its already nighttime!" i complained.
"shut the fuck up we're here and that's what matters" he said rubbing his temples and looking up.
"whatever" i looked around and walked up to the door.
BANG BANG!
I knocked and waited
And waited
And waited i was pretty calm and all was silent until...
"AHHHHH! WHAT THE FUCKS TAKING SO LONG!" toshiro-maki screamed. "toshiro-maki calm down!" I said "screw this!" he said fixing himself in fighting stance. 'oh shit! not this again!' i thought preparing myself.
"TOSHIRO-MAKI NO-!" i tried to shout the words out...
"LIGHT DEATH!"
Too late.
BOOOMMM!
I stood there with ash on my face and my hair a mess
Pong!
"WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT FOR?! I MEAN LOOK WHAT YOU-"
AAHHHHHHHHH!
I didn't get to finish my sentence as i heard a blood curteling scream. i turned around to see the front yard a mess with blood splattered all on the floor and patches of sand. i looked on the floor where guards lay dead.
AAAHHHHHHHH!
"The screaming's coming from inside! Toshiro-maki, return!" i commanded holding out my arm.
"Yes maim!" he said while placing himself on my body. i looked down on my skin to see my tattoos white and when my bangs fell on my face i saw no black'snap out of it' i thought and ran inside. i ran through doors and reached a room where the screaming was. I opened the door and saw the screaming woman before i could do anything she turned to sand.
i stared at the pile of sand and remembered outside "What the-?"
'DUCK!' toshiro-maki screamed in my head. Following the order I ducked, as I did a yellow ribbon shot over my head and hit the wall instantly turning to sand."shit!" i muttered while Rolling over and standing up. i looked in the direction the ribbon came from. standing there was a girl i could think of as 13 with long blond hair tan skin and yellow tattoos 'wow shes hot' toshiro-maki said 'not the time!' i scolded.
She was denim wearing booty shorts and a yellow tank-top. " another bother damn these soul reapers" she said rolling her eyes at me. "who are you" i asked instead of answering she pointed her finger at me "shot for dissinigration Sagen" 5 yellow ribbons shot towards me. "toshiro-maki!" i ordered in a rush. as our ribbons collided i felt extreamly hot and dry.
"hmm so your like me?" she slurred "in that case retract Sagen" she ordered the ribbons came off her body and became a handsome boy with blond hair and yellow tattoos. "toshiro-maki retract" i ordered toshiro-maki became his physical form. "keep your guard up" he murmured to me "i know" i replied.
"my name is cleo-ni" she bowed "and this is my ribbonist Sagen" she gestured toward the boy
"ribbonist what do you mean?" i questioned
"oh so you don't know"
"afraid not" i sneered
"that's what we call ourselves"
"We ? so you mean there's more of you?"
"2 more 4 to be exact including you"
"including ME?!" i asked in anoyed tone. "oh yes i forgot to mention" she paused holding out the palm of her hand "wont you join us lulu-chizz youku?"
last thought of the day
'oh shit'
so hey i just fixed it up a little bit i hated sand rock in english but it was good anyway im puttin up chapter 4 so hang in there! sagen= sand rock
so what happens next does she except or does she denie? And who is this bree?so many questions "oh my,oh my!". So i published it i have to thank midnight tiger lily i really do. so thank you! please review and tell me how to do better try to be nice! :)
Your friend
-bree