I Recieved some feedback from a friend, and I will try to indicate who is talking a little better. Also italicized font are internal monologues of Z3r0 if there was any confusion. Still looking for any feedback so let me know
freed lilith from the shackles of servitude defeated The Worrior, and ended Jack's tyranny. I thought that i had found a goal that would quench my bloodlust. His stupid face haunted my dreams. I am unsure of what to do next...
Just after the discovery of other planets vaults, Mordicai and Axton threw a celebration/remembrance party for Roland and jack Z3r0 felt it just a reason to get drunk for some. He had no real interest in drinking but he would show his support and condolences by staying for an hour or so. Moxxi, still reeling from rolands death, felt obligated to host the shindig at her barsent out an echo to every vault hunter in a 50 mile radius of sanctuary. The day before the festivities however, Z3r0 had experienced an interaction that shook him to the core.
Z3r0 was at the dark end of the bar discussing with Sir Hammerlock about some big hunt that didn't really interest him. He just wanted a new sniper rifle. Salvador was playing the machhines and yelling profanities. Z3r0 accepted the operation and went to attempt to pull Salvador away.
"We have recieved our new objective, my blade is thirsty, let us proceed."
Salvador screamed,"NOT UNTIL I WIN A GODDAMNED EXPLOSIVE SHOTGUN!"
It is best to wait until he runs out of money, beats on the machine and stomp off.
He sat down at a stool a few seets away. Trying to suppress his frustration, he turns to Moxxi, "One Rak Ale... please." Moxxi, who had been talking to someone that was out of his pariferal, turned and said, "Sure suger". She pours him a heady cup, places it in front of him and returned to the conversation.
He tries to sip and it spills down his mask. His frustration grew. A giggle came from the right of him. It was then he realized who she was talking to, it was the briliant yet insane Patricia Tannis. She chimed in, " Oh the price of anonymity. Remain completely solitary and reclusive inside or be able to drink a problem away in a semi social environment? Decisions decisions."
Z3r0 was stuned, which had rarely happened. His frostration was replaced by curiosity as well as fear. This concept baffled him.
How is she aware of my thoughts? Who is she and how did she come to possess this knowledge? I must interigate my friends and discover who is divulging my t houghts. We need to regroup, we must go.
He rushes up, moves hurriedly towards Salvador, puts a kunai to his back and whispers, "We're leaving... Now!"
Salvador nervously replies,"Ok, ok, ok, ok, ok..."
They hurry out the door almost knocking over Gaige and claptrap. His head was racing with thoughts of how he would put an end to her knowledge. If she knew what he felt like, did she know about the "insistent"? No one should have that knowledge, he made sure of it.
To be continued next chapter is the money shot I promise.