Thanks to all of you that reviewed you have begged and begged so heres the next chapter get ready cause it is going to be epic!
Chapter 2
The threat
When I woke up it was toward evening. My room was filled with black sand! " aaaaaaacghhhhhhhv!" I say. My dad rushes upstairs and signs for me to head downstairs.
I head downstairs eyes full of fear and my mom turns around and asks whats wrong Lily?
"there is black stuff covering my room" I say
" what! they said that he couldn't find you here!" she said
"who!" I yell
"the boogeyman" she says
"why would the boogeyman be after me?" I ask
"Lily Hope Mansnoozie, your father the Sandman is pitch the boogeyman's worst enemy not to mention you have powers beyond comprehension!" she says in short yes
Just then my dad was slammed down the stairs by the boogeyman
Okay I have just about had it! Next thing I know I have made two dreamsand whips and am charging at pitch
" ah ah ah, no wrong moves or your mom gets it"pitch says
"help Lily" my mom says
I am stuck if I strike my mom gets killed but if I don't pitch wins….. what should I do?
" join me and together we can rule the world in fear!" pitch says
"Join you, join you , you just threatened to kill my mom and you expect me to join you!"
" the simple answer would be…" he never got to finish cause I was screaming " NO!"
" then your mom gets it!" pitch says and then kills my mom and disappears
"… mom, mommy are you nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !" I cry
The guardians look at me and say
"so sorry Sheila…" bunny says
" sob. Sniffle" jack says
"you still have us" north says
"it'll be okay sweetie' tooth says
I'll take care of you Lily my dad signs
Back in pitch's lair… " it's almost time until then enjoy your family and friends Lily cause soon they'll be all gone" pitch says while laughing maliciously
So critiques bring your worst. I am leaving you a cliffhanger…. Any Ideas any suggestions?