Hi! So I wrote another chapter! I'm still a little new at this so please forgive me for any mistakes I made :). One request that I had was that I should go more into her family and write about them and their relationship. I will do that in one of the next few chapters. :) Tell me what you think :)


Chapter 2 - The Results Are In

I look Lindi awaiting my results but she just stares back at me staying utterly silent.

"What are my results?" I ask her trying to keep the impatientness in my voice to a minumin. The very last thing I wanted to do was to piss her off. I'm sure there's enough Erudites to do that for me.

"Just give me a moment," she said as she got up and hastily walked out the room. Had I done something wrong? No, I thought to myself reassuringly, the test was meant to figure out a suitable faction so you can't fail. Can you?

A few minutes later I hear voices outside the door. They were hushed like they didn't want anyone to listen but being from Erudite I was instantly curious. It was a man and a woman and they're voices sounded scared. Suddenly I hear one of them walking away then I hear my name and the door is opened.

"Hanna," says Lindi as she walks catiously towards me "We've had some worrying results back from your aptitude test." I immideatly stand up and start asking what I did wrong and could I do it again.

"No, Hanna you can't repeat the test. Please sit down," she says in a comforting voice. I sit down and just stare at her waiting for an explanation.

"Hanna, you must listen very carefully and anything I say from this point onwards must not be repeated. To anyone. Under any circumstances. Understand?"

I nod my head confused on why I couldn't just get my results back

"Your test results," she says sitting down on the chair next to me, "were inconclusive."

I begin to shake my head trying to explain how my faction designed these tests and there's no way that anyones results can come out inconclusive. No way.

"I told you to listen, and you agreed, so listen" Something about the amount of authority in her voice makes me slump back down in my chair and stare at my shaking hands waiting for her to continue.

"Your test results were inconclusive. It says that you are equally compatible with 3 of the factions. Abnegation, Dauntless and Erudite. There's a special word that describes the people who get inconclusive results. Divergent. Have you heard it mentioned before?"

I shake my head. Lindi chuckles to herself as if laughing at a private joke.

"Well you wouldn't have because if you did you wouldn't be here right now."she begins to lower her voice to a quiet whisper as if she thought someone might be listening. Maybe someone was I thought. I look around the room but no-one was there so I drove my attention back to her.

"Any divergent or suspected divergents would be killed on the spot, which is why I and a few others have been trying to... how do I put this. Save them? We put fake results into the system and make sure no-one ever finds out. But this is dangerous stuff. If anyone finds out this is happening we would get killed. And worst of all because you're a divergent you could get killed. Understand?"

"Yes," I say even though I didn't completely. "But can you at least explain how I got three?"

She gives me a warm-hearted smile and sighs.

"Look Hanna, the less you know the better."

I begin to fidget, annoyed that I couldn't know why this was happening to me. I mean it was my results and it was my life that's in danger.

"I only want to know." I whisper

Lindi looks at me with sympathetic smile.
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Ok, but none of this is to be repeated."

I immediately nod my head.

"You can only get multiple factions if you refuse to do something in the test. For you, it was that you refused to shoot your family. You stood up to the man and that shows bravery hence your compatability with Dauntless. Then when your sister was going to be shot, you threw yourself in front of her to provide protection, this was a selfless act so you're also compatible with Abnegation. I began to panic because of the dangerous results I was getting so I put you in the bus scenario. If you were suited to Candor you would have instantly told the truth, but you didn't. Instead you noticed the door at the other end of the bus. For the most part only the Erudites notice this so you are also suited with your own faction."
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But why am I in danger?" I ask getting more curious by the second.

"Divergents are one of the biggest threats to our community. They can see through the system and if they can do that then they can break it."

"Then why are you helping them? Don't you like the system?"

"It doesn't matter what I like," she replies. "People are getting murdered and killed because of what they are. A lot of us thinks its wrong, and we're doing what we can to help."

"So what am I supposed to do now?"

"Now you go out that door you don't mention any of this to anyone. Ever. And I'm sorry Hanna. I'm so sorry but for your best chance of survival you need to move faction."

Dazed by her instructions I start to repeatedly shake my head. This can't be happening I say to myself over and over again trying to make myself believe it. But its useless.

"Hanna I'm sorry but if you stay in your faction you are likely to get killed in a matter of days. I put your result as Erudite but I hesitated. There was a slight delay due to the shock. You see, we rarely get Erudite Divergents, we suspect its because of the way you were raised however we don't exactly know yet. But because of the delay there are already suspiciouns. Lots of them. And because Erudite is right in the centre of this they won't hesitate to kill you. No hesitation at all."

A single tear rolls down my face but I quickly wipe it off. I turn my hands into balls of fists as an attempt to stop them from shaking. I stand up and look at Lindi straight in the eye refusing to be scared.

"I'll do what I want." I say angrily. "And get this into your stupid head, no stiff tells me if I stay or if I go. If you really want to help someone then don't. No-one needs a stiffs help it'll only make things worse."

I then walk towards the door leaving a stunned face behind me. Once I was out of the building I let the tears come.