Hey welcome to chapter 2, hope you enjoy reading. Hehe just so you know, A Mary-Sue is an overly beautiful, powerful and nice person, basically something close to what Amy is like, you can't have someone similar to Amy, first thing, she's pretty, second thing, she's adorable, third thing, she's strong as all buggery, fourth thing, she can keep up with Sonic, that makes her fast. So anything close to Amy is basically a Mary-sue as far as I can tell, I wouldn't really know but I read a story that had a character I thought sounded adorable and lovable, but the people reviewing it hated her for being 'too strong'. So she could knock down a tree, big whoop. lol okay time to end my whining.
Disclaimer : Sonic and Co. don't belong to me. YAY!
(/'-.Amy's apartment.-')
The two girls and chao cowered on the couch at the sound of the lightning constantly cracking outside, "EEEK! AMY THE POWERS OUT! WHAT DO WE DO!" Cream yelped.
Amy gulped loudly, "I Don't know! L-let's hope it comes back on soon!"
Someone knocked on the door, "Wh-who is it?" Amy yelled over the noise. There was a muffled shout because of the storm noises and being behind the door. Amy stood up slowly and tiptoed towards the door, it suddenly flung open and Amy and Cream screamed loudly.
"HEY!" the creature shouted over the two, "Calm down will you?"
"S-Sonic?" Amy asked.
"Well duh" was the answer she got.
Amy sighed, "Well we can't see in here can you give us a break?" Sonic shook his head, as far as they could tell, "Can't, but I can give you someone to take care of for a bit" he said loud enough for them to hear over the noise, then walked over to the couch and laid her down. Amy ran into the kitchen and found a torch and some candles.
Amy flicked the switch and accidentally shined it right into Sonic's face, "AH! Hey watch that!" he complained. "S-sorry" Amy muttered and lit the candles, she then shined the torch on the girl, "Where'd she come from?"
Sonic frowned, "I was enjoying a delicious chilli dog when the store lady told me to leave because they wanted to close up. I went out and looked at the storm and saw her standing on a building nearby, so I went to make sure she wasn't going to do anything stupid, she said she wasn't and when I was just about to leave some lightning hit the building and she fell off, I rescued her but she passed out. Then I brang her here, after all, I don't know where else I would bring a girl that needs caring for."
Amy pat his shoulder, "Breath Sonic, Breath."
Sonic sighed, "Good thing I finished that chilli dog BEFORE I went to save her."
Cream was carefully moved the girls hair out of her face, "Why is she so pale?" Cream asked.
"It must just be the colour of her fur, and being out in that rain" Sonic said and looked around, having no luck in seeing a spot to sit he fell to the floor and got comfortable there. Cheese joined Sonic on the floor and stared at Cream, "Chao!" he said and pointed at the girl.
"Hm?" Cream looked and the girls finger was twitching, "I think she's waking up"
The mouses eyes opened slowly, but as soon as she saw the rabbit above her she screamed and jumped to her feet, standing on the couch, "STAY AWAY FROM ME!" she screamed and lost balance. She fell back and the couch went back with her.
"Whoa!" Sonic jumped up and walked around the toppled over couch and stared at the girl, more lightning stuck outside, "Hey? Calm down will you?"
She stared back at him with an icy glare, Sonic slapped his head, "Let me guess, you really wanted to fall off that building didn't you?" he asked while looking through his fingers. The girl shook her head and Sonic sighed with relief, "Well okay, then why are you so upset with me? Or well, us?" he said while glancing at the two girls curiously looking at her over the couch.
She pushed herself up so she was sitting and sighed, "I-I'm sorry, I'm not used of being around others..."
Sonic raised an eye ridge, "Oookay, so what's up?"
Cheese flew over and landed near the girl, "Chao!" he said and held out his hand, cute. The girl smiled slightly and pat the chao on the head, "Well she likes Cheese" Amy murmured to Cream, she nodded. The girl stood up and looked at the two hedgehogs and rabbit, "I have to go" she murmured and turned to leave.
"H-hey wait, are you sure you'll be okay out there? In that storm I mean" Amy stammered and ran round the couch now standing near the girl.
She looked at her and smiled, "What storm?" she said and continued to walk towards the door. Amy stared at her as if she was stupid but Cream called to her, "Amy! Amy look!" she said, standing near the window.
Amy walked to the window and stared out, the storm was gone, only a few white clouds were left in the sky, "Wh-what happened to the storm?" she asked, the lights flickered and came back on, "That was weird" Amy said as she stared around more making sure she wasn't hallucinating. She spotted the pale blue mouse leaving the building and watched her walk away, "She's weird, and rude, she didn't even thank you for saving her life"
Sonic nodded in agreement, "Yeah... there is something strange about her..."
The mouse continued down the street and smiled slightly to hide any pain inside, after she went around a corner and knew the creatures couldn't see her, she began to hum what seemed to be a lullaby, but it was sad and her smile faded, more clouds formed in the sky but only covering it in a blanket of white. She dug into her pocket and pulled out a necklace, a named made from the chain links, KAYLA.
She frowned more at the object and held it tightly in her hand, she then threw it hard on the ground. The name broke in half and she sighed and left it there, Kayla, the pale blue mouse.
Amy and Cream stared in wonder as the sky kept changing as if in someone else's favour, Sonic pushed the couch back up and sat on it. Amy thought for a moment, "You know, I definitely think there's something weird about her, I'm going to find out" she said and quickly ran out of the apartment.
"Uh Amy! W-wait don't leave me to baby-sit...." Sonic muttered and sighed, the blue chao climbed happily onto his lap "It's going to be a tough afternoon..."
Amy ran down the sidewalk and some wind picked up, she ducked round the corner and sighed, she noticed the wind wasn't letting up so she ran out into it, she ran around the corner where the mouse went and heard a crunch below her boot. "Huh?" she said and lifted her boot, the broken necklace lay there so she picked it up and looked at it.
"Kayla huh? Hmmm why'd she throw her necklace away?" Amy asked herself and looked around, the mouse was no where to be seen, no wet footprints either. Amy shrugged and headed back home, there was no way she could find the mouse now.
(/'-.Near the Edge of Town.-')
Kayla walked slowly along the street and sighed, she was lonely and knew it well, and her first impression on those others wasn't the best they could be. She noticed earlier while she was still inside the city that people and animals were coming out of their houses and marvelling at the clear sky, it was nothing new to her, she knew all the different shades and clouds she could see in the sky, after all, she controlled them.
Continuing her walk out of the town she heard someone shouting, she turned her head and saw a small blue hedgehog girl cowering from a larger orange male hedgehog wearing a bandana, Kayla frowned, the last she wanted to see was some guy picking on a helpless girl.
The hedgehog yelled and raised his hand, just about to slap the girl when a hand grabbed his arm, "HEY! eh?" the hedgehog looked confused at the mouse for a moment, "HEY GET OUT OF THIS, IT'S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!" he yelled at her, obviously trying to annoy her large ears.
Kayla pulled him back and he stumbled and fell into a pile of garbage bags, then she bent down to the girls height, "Hey you should stay near your home little girl, don't want to be tossed around by jerk like him" she pointed with her thumb to the hedgehog that was struggling to get out of the pile. "Th-thank you" she murmured and quickly ran off. Kayla stood up, feeling proud of herself she turned to leave, she met with the very angry orange hedgehog, "You stupid woman!! What'd you do that for!?" He yelled and grabbed her arm and twisted it.
Kayla glared at him, paying no attention to any pain in her arm, the colour of her eyes flickered, clouds of steam swirled around them and the boy panicked. Kayla grinned and tugged her arm from his grip, then pushed him into a large puddle, "Treat girls better or I'll come and get you!" she said and kicked his shin. "One other thing too" she smiled wider, putting her hands out in front of her, one hand in front of her head facing the other hand near her stomach. She muttered something and a cloud appeared in her hands, she smiled proudly, "Bother this boy every time her picks on a girl" she said and the cloud seemed to nod and then floated above the boy.
"See you never loser" Kayla smiled and ran off, it always made her feel good to ruin a mean persons fun. She heard the boy swear at her and then scream as cold water rained down from the cloud onto his head.
Well there's chapter two, and there's one of her special abilities, If you enjoy, please read more and review, If you don't like it, please stop reading. Hey Golbez, are you flaming me or just acting silly, you sound like a flame XD.
Disclaimer : Sonic and Co. don't belong to me. YAY!
(/'-.Amy's apartment.-')
The two girls and chao cowered on the couch at the sound of the lightning constantly cracking outside, "EEEK! AMY THE POWERS OUT! WHAT DO WE DO!" Cream yelped.
Amy gulped loudly, "I Don't know! L-let's hope it comes back on soon!"
Someone knocked on the door, "Wh-who is it?" Amy yelled over the noise. There was a muffled shout because of the storm noises and being behind the door. Amy stood up slowly and tiptoed towards the door, it suddenly flung open and Amy and Cream screamed loudly.
"HEY!" the creature shouted over the two, "Calm down will you?"
"S-Sonic?" Amy asked.
"Well duh" was the answer she got.
Amy sighed, "Well we can't see in here can you give us a break?" Sonic shook his head, as far as they could tell, "Can't, but I can give you someone to take care of for a bit" he said loud enough for them to hear over the noise, then walked over to the couch and laid her down. Amy ran into the kitchen and found a torch and some candles.
Amy flicked the switch and accidentally shined it right into Sonic's face, "AH! Hey watch that!" he complained. "S-sorry" Amy muttered and lit the candles, she then shined the torch on the girl, "Where'd she come from?"
Sonic frowned, "I was enjoying a delicious chilli dog when the store lady told me to leave because they wanted to close up. I went out and looked at the storm and saw her standing on a building nearby, so I went to make sure she wasn't going to do anything stupid, she said she wasn't and when I was just about to leave some lightning hit the building and she fell off, I rescued her but she passed out. Then I brang her here, after all, I don't know where else I would bring a girl that needs caring for."
Amy pat his shoulder, "Breath Sonic, Breath."
Sonic sighed, "Good thing I finished that chilli dog BEFORE I went to save her."
Cream was carefully moved the girls hair out of her face, "Why is she so pale?" Cream asked.
"It must just be the colour of her fur, and being out in that rain" Sonic said and looked around, having no luck in seeing a spot to sit he fell to the floor and got comfortable there. Cheese joined Sonic on the floor and stared at Cream, "Chao!" he said and pointed at the girl.
"Hm?" Cream looked and the girls finger was twitching, "I think she's waking up"
The mouses eyes opened slowly, but as soon as she saw the rabbit above her she screamed and jumped to her feet, standing on the couch, "STAY AWAY FROM ME!" she screamed and lost balance. She fell back and the couch went back with her.
"Whoa!" Sonic jumped up and walked around the toppled over couch and stared at the girl, more lightning stuck outside, "Hey? Calm down will you?"
She stared back at him with an icy glare, Sonic slapped his head, "Let me guess, you really wanted to fall off that building didn't you?" he asked while looking through his fingers. The girl shook her head and Sonic sighed with relief, "Well okay, then why are you so upset with me? Or well, us?" he said while glancing at the two girls curiously looking at her over the couch.
She pushed herself up so she was sitting and sighed, "I-I'm sorry, I'm not used of being around others..."
Sonic raised an eye ridge, "Oookay, so what's up?"
Cheese flew over and landed near the girl, "Chao!" he said and held out his hand, cute. The girl smiled slightly and pat the chao on the head, "Well she likes Cheese" Amy murmured to Cream, she nodded. The girl stood up and looked at the two hedgehogs and rabbit, "I have to go" she murmured and turned to leave.
"H-hey wait, are you sure you'll be okay out there? In that storm I mean" Amy stammered and ran round the couch now standing near the girl.
She looked at her and smiled, "What storm?" she said and continued to walk towards the door. Amy stared at her as if she was stupid but Cream called to her, "Amy! Amy look!" she said, standing near the window.
Amy walked to the window and stared out, the storm was gone, only a few white clouds were left in the sky, "Wh-what happened to the storm?" she asked, the lights flickered and came back on, "That was weird" Amy said as she stared around more making sure she wasn't hallucinating. She spotted the pale blue mouse leaving the building and watched her walk away, "She's weird, and rude, she didn't even thank you for saving her life"
Sonic nodded in agreement, "Yeah... there is something strange about her..."
The mouse continued down the street and smiled slightly to hide any pain inside, after she went around a corner and knew the creatures couldn't see her, she began to hum what seemed to be a lullaby, but it was sad and her smile faded, more clouds formed in the sky but only covering it in a blanket of white. She dug into her pocket and pulled out a necklace, a named made from the chain links, KAYLA.
She frowned more at the object and held it tightly in her hand, she then threw it hard on the ground. The name broke in half and she sighed and left it there, Kayla, the pale blue mouse.
Amy and Cream stared in wonder as the sky kept changing as if in someone else's favour, Sonic pushed the couch back up and sat on it. Amy thought for a moment, "You know, I definitely think there's something weird about her, I'm going to find out" she said and quickly ran out of the apartment.
"Uh Amy! W-wait don't leave me to baby-sit...." Sonic muttered and sighed, the blue chao climbed happily onto his lap "It's going to be a tough afternoon..."
Amy ran down the sidewalk and some wind picked up, she ducked round the corner and sighed, she noticed the wind wasn't letting up so she ran out into it, she ran around the corner where the mouse went and heard a crunch below her boot. "Huh?" she said and lifted her boot, the broken necklace lay there so she picked it up and looked at it.
"Kayla huh? Hmmm why'd she throw her necklace away?" Amy asked herself and looked around, the mouse was no where to be seen, no wet footprints either. Amy shrugged and headed back home, there was no way she could find the mouse now.
(/'-.Near the Edge of Town.-')
Kayla walked slowly along the street and sighed, she was lonely and knew it well, and her first impression on those others wasn't the best they could be. She noticed earlier while she was still inside the city that people and animals were coming out of their houses and marvelling at the clear sky, it was nothing new to her, she knew all the different shades and clouds she could see in the sky, after all, she controlled them.
Continuing her walk out of the town she heard someone shouting, she turned her head and saw a small blue hedgehog girl cowering from a larger orange male hedgehog wearing a bandana, Kayla frowned, the last she wanted to see was some guy picking on a helpless girl.
The hedgehog yelled and raised his hand, just about to slap the girl when a hand grabbed his arm, "HEY! eh?" the hedgehog looked confused at the mouse for a moment, "HEY GET OUT OF THIS, IT'S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!" he yelled at her, obviously trying to annoy her large ears.
Kayla pulled him back and he stumbled and fell into a pile of garbage bags, then she bent down to the girls height, "Hey you should stay near your home little girl, don't want to be tossed around by jerk like him" she pointed with her thumb to the hedgehog that was struggling to get out of the pile. "Th-thank you" she murmured and quickly ran off. Kayla stood up, feeling proud of herself she turned to leave, she met with the very angry orange hedgehog, "You stupid woman!! What'd you do that for!?" He yelled and grabbed her arm and twisted it.
Kayla glared at him, paying no attention to any pain in her arm, the colour of her eyes flickered, clouds of steam swirled around them and the boy panicked. Kayla grinned and tugged her arm from his grip, then pushed him into a large puddle, "Treat girls better or I'll come and get you!" she said and kicked his shin. "One other thing too" she smiled wider, putting her hands out in front of her, one hand in front of her head facing the other hand near her stomach. She muttered something and a cloud appeared in her hands, she smiled proudly, "Bother this boy every time her picks on a girl" she said and the cloud seemed to nod and then floated above the boy.
"See you never loser" Kayla smiled and ran off, it always made her feel good to ruin a mean persons fun. She heard the boy swear at her and then scream as cold water rained down from the cloud onto his head.
Well there's chapter two, and there's one of her special abilities, If you enjoy, please read more and review, If you don't like it, please stop reading. Hey Golbez, are you flaming me or just acting silly, you sound like a flame XD.