For those that have wondered about Jane being Max..... no she isn't Max. sorry...but everyone comes in soon!!! So go on now I know your curious about what happens ^-^

The colored contacts thing bugged me for the rest of the period. I mean who has gold eyes? Seriously, if I had gold eyes naturally, I would be showing them to the world. Having gold eyes would be soooooo awesome!!!

Brinnnggg, the bell rang to change classes. I ran up to the front of the classroom to get a ticket to the Awesome Room (aka ISS). It seemed like it took forever for Mr. frank/Eggplant to give me my freaking slip. Finally, after he slowly handed me my slip, I tried not to make it look like I was in a hurry because he would probably think something was weird. I had about 2 minutes of the five to find Jasper. I quickly looked around muttering to myself, "Where the heck is he?"

A sudden deep voice surprised the cracker-snacks outta me. "Who ya looking for?," the owner of the voice just happened to be Emmett Cullen, Jasper's half brother. i would've never known if the school gossip told me on their first day of school here. They look as bout as much alike as a frog and a twig do.

I just kinda stood there starring for a second then finally snapped out of my dreamy daze. Emmett was a REALLY hot guy, but I don't like to make lovey-dovey faces at the local hotties, so I snapped out of my daze real quick when I realized what i was doing. "Your bro, Jasper," I said answering his question hoping he didn't notice that I committed his hot frame to memory for later uses.

Apparently this caught his attention real quick. "Why'd you wanna do that? He's a geek. I'm the cool one," he stepped a step closer. That's when I thought that even though he looked sweeter than chocolate, he was kinda creeping me out so... I took a step back. This amused him, I think cause he was used to having every girl after him, which I wouldn't blame them. "Come on," he said in a too seductive voice which made me think that he practiced it a little too much, "Why'd you want to see him?"

I glanced nervously around for any excuse to leave but sadly everyone was probably in their classrooms which is where in the first time in my life i wanted to be right now. "Umm... I just have a question for him," I said hoping he would buy it, but apparently he was either really nosy or saw right through my bluff.

"About what?" he said taking another step closer pushing me back with it.

"Homework?" it sounded like a question even to me. Man, I need to work on my bluffing. Sarcasm was my strong point, not bluffing.

"Come on, the truth," he chuckled a sexy deep chuckle, "I can see right through liars." the look in his eyes told me he was telling the truth.

Crap was my amazing first thought. "Fine, about his eyes." I crossed my arms finally noticing that he had me up against the lockers.

Brinnnggg, there the bell went again. He laughed nervously, yes nervously, and said, "No, really, what do you want to see him for?''

"Well, that's just great," I said getting a little ticked off, "When I actually tell you the truth, you don't believe me." I threw my arms up which apparently the wrong move to make, cause he pinned arms against the locker so fast I didn't know what happened. My jaw dropped a little... OK maybe as far down as it would go without cracking but still.

"Why do you want to talk to him about his eyes?" his voice suddenly deepened without malice and a bunch of other hate words I would know if i actually listened to my English teacher. which if you haven't noticed I was already creep-ed out so my first instinct was to just blabber away like an idiot.

"Well, I was having a fight with my math teacher,which was actually..."

"Get to the point, Jane!" he said louder and pushed against my arms harder which made me flinch.

"OK OK already. I was wondering why his eyes were gold," I all but yelled at him. then I pressed myself against the lockers to get as far I could from him and closed my eyes expecting to get a hit in the face.

After a couple of minutes, i finally figured that he wasn't going to hit me i opened my eyes. he looked like he was listening to something... then he randomly laughed.

He turned to the right side of the hallway and looked down it and said, "Come on out. I know you're there." At this point i actually believed that he was crazy to a capital c.

Then a girl came walking down the hallway like she was in the most comfortable place in the world, which wouldn't have been me even if it was a normal day.

"Well, well, well," she said smugly, "Do we have a raper or a hitter here on school grounds?" I could tell right then and there that we were going to be friends from that day on. I like her style.

"Nice one," i said giggling.

Emmett just glared at her in a glare that would of out done Mr. eggplant! "Please, just leave us alone. I wont hit her or rape her. I am just holding her still so she wont run away from some questions I have for her," his voice literally dripped with venom.

"How about you take on someone your own size," she said taking off her blue jean jacket. how in the heck was she his size?!?

"I have my ways," she said smoothly. It took me a minute to figure out that i said my thought out loud.

"Fierce, brave, and a saver," Emmett said in a chuckle, "so who are you any way?"

"Max... Maximum Ride aka your worst nightmare!" with that last word, brown spotted wings grew from her back.

so did i suck or did i totally take down the house?

anyway, talk to me!!! review!!! if you dont want to talk about the story then just randomly say hi!!! come on you know you want to. ^-^