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Chapter 1
When they arrived at their destination, they were not welcomed by either a high end shop or a delicious-smelling shop of foods. Instead, they were surrounded by the wilderness of the forest. "This isn't the mall,"Marie pointed out.
"Far from it, actually,"Trunks added, still holding Marie's hand.
"What kind of place did you think of, Marie?"Gohan asked, a slight hint of worry being carried in his voice.
"I thought of Victoria's Secret, if you must know."She said, matter-of-factly. All the males sighed wearingly, knowing they blew the chance to see her try on some skimpy lengerie for some food. "What did you think of, Goku?"
Goku groped her ass softly, earning him a slap and causing Marie to notice where the others had their hands. "DON'T YOU GUYS KNOW HOW TO TREAT A LADY?!"
"You'll be glad to know,"Trunks retorted,"that I had my hand clasped in yours, which is not disrespectful at all"
Marie sighed and mumbled a thank you towards the Capsule Corporation president. "Well,"she spoke up "what were you thinking of, Goku?"
Goku rubbed the darkening red imprint of her hand that made its place on his cheek before answering her "I thought of Old Country Buffet..."
"THAT'S NOT EVEN A FOOD COURT!!"Marie yelled, getting more irritated about the fact that she didn't get the shopping she intended to get.
"Shh...it's still a place to eat, though...calm down, sweetie; even though you look sexy no matter what you do, I don't want you to get stressed out, ok?"Goku said, trying to subdue her anger before it got the best of her.
"...There's no use in getting upset, you guys.."Gohan chimed in, not wanting to listen to another pointless arguement.
Goten groaned aloud, his empty stomach giving him excruciating pain. "I told you that we needed to eat, you guys...now we're stuck in the middle of nowhere and hungry!!"
"Maybe.." Trunks thought aloud, not noticing that he did so.
"Maybe what, Trunk?"Gohan inquired, while looking at his youngest brother who was now laying on the ground in the fetal position, rocking back and forth in an effort to ease his pain.
"I think I know what happened,"Trunks continued, now speaking to everyone.
"Thinks he's so smart..."Goku mummered under his breath, seeing that Trunks stole Marie's attention.
"I think that the truth is that you two didn't really think of the wrong place,"Trunks elaborated,"you two probably thought of the right places, but you both did Instant Transmission at the same time. Instant Transmission defies science, and can travel between dimensions, right Goku?"
"Yea,"he replied, being reminded of the time he transferred between the world of the living and the world of the dead when he searched for a place for Cell to detonate.
"And Instant Transmission has to pass through dimensions anyway even when you are simply transporting on Earth. So, the combined power of your Instant Transmissions caused it to come up short and stop in one of the dimensions you must pass through when one person does it."
"So if we do it again, we might be able to get back to our dimension?"Marie asked, ready to escape the wilderness for the city life she was accustomed to.
"If I am correct"
"Then let's do it again, Goku!"Marie said enthusiastically
All of them got back into their positions(which was a little difficult on Goten's part), and Goku and Marie thought of the same places they thought of at first. "INSTANT TRANSMISSION!!"They disappeared, but reappeared in the same spot.
Goku had an idea,"Marie, what if we thing of the same place?"
"...let's think of...outside the Capsule Corp building!"
'Always has something to do with Trunks..."Goku thought, jealousy taking over his mind. "Fine"he said aloud, not noticing that his voice became a little harsh.
"INSTANT TRANSMISSION!!"
They reappeared in the same spot.
Marie screamed loudly "WE'RE STUCK!!! NO!!!"Gohan took her into his arms in an attempt to calm her down, noticing that she was shaking. Goku glared, seeing his older brother enjoy having her so close to him.
"Maybe your suggestion was wrong, Trunks,"Goku pointed out, still looking at his brother and the woman he lusted after together.
"My thesis was incorrect...what if what I thought wasn't really what is going on?"Trunks thought aloud, not caring whether or not anyone heard him.
"NO, DUH!!!"Goten said "Even Goku could have figured that out by now!!"
"Yea--hey, what does that mean?!"The older Saiyen exclaimed, catching on to his brother's insult.
"Hey, you guys!!"A familiar nasally voice called out in all of their heads. "How're ya doin'?"
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