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Max P.O.V.
Me Harry and Ron were talking about some wizarding stuff, like if the classes would be hard or not. Just then the door banged opened and in walked a kid with pale skin and platinum blonde hair. "Ahh, so it is true, that Harry Potter is coming to Hogwarts. Hello, Harry my name is Malfoy, Draco Malfoy." me and Ron started sniggering at his name. He looked at me and Ron "Think my name is funny do you? Red hair, freckles, and hazel eyes, I suspect your one of the Wesley's kids. My father warned me about your family with more children than they can afford. Who are you?" he said in a snarled "None Ya." I said in a sweet voice. "I would be nicer if I were you, my father practically runs the ministry." he said, "Now tell me your name."
"oh why not? Maximum Ride." I said and they sniggered and turned away. "So have you heard that there is a mutt in the school this year. You know the hafe shape shifter hafe witch." he said, "I heard it from my father and he says that I should stay away from that freakish mutt." he said before I got up and punched him in the gut. He doubled over, I picked him up and threw him out of the compartment. The glass on the other compartment door across from us shattered. I pulled out my wand and said "Reparo." yes I had went through the books and memorized some of the spells. I sat down. "Max, why did you stick up for me, Harry and who ever is the hafe and hafe?" asked Ron. I looked at him and was about to answer, and it was going to be the truth, when the compartment door banged open yet again. "Have…you guys…seen a …toad?" said a dirty blonde haired girl with brown eyes. We shook our heads. She sat down "Do you mind if I sit here?" she asked, and yet again, we shook our heads. She smiled at us and sat down. She started talking about how she was a muggle who was a witch, how Hogwarts classes would go, ect; I was ignoring her until she got to classes. See I may be a rule breaker but I was also very smart and had read almost all our books. "I think that they should hurry up and start teaching us everything."
"Yeah, me too. I would like to start as soon as possible." I said we soon were in a conversation about how hard the classes are. Finally the train came to a stop and when we unloaded, I heard a familiar voice. I turned to see Hagrid. I walked over. "Hi, Harry, Max, Iggy, Fang, Angle, Nudge, and Gazzy." I smiled and nodded a hello at him. We had to get on boats, so I ended up with Hermione, Harry, and Ron because there was only 4 per boat. I looked at the flock, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy and Angle in one boat, and Fang and Neville wit h2 girls in another boat. When the castle came into view, I heard a bunch of "oooh"s and "ahhh"s from all around me, even I did it, and I could feel myself smiling. When we finally got to the castle, I heard "Is this your toad?" Hagrid asked holding a toad, Neville leapt forward and said "Trevor!" and we all laughed and giggled. When we entered the school I saw that all the pictures on the wall moved in their frames, and from frame to frame. I looked in amazement at the pictures. The a teacher came in and said "Hello I am Professor McGonagall and you are about to be sorted in front of the school." she looked at Ron's robe, and Neville's toad. I smiles to myself. "what is wrong with my robe?" he asked, I started chuckling and I walked over to him and grabbed his collar and folded it down and smiled at him. "There, now you are good to go." I said and the others laughed and then It was time to go get sorted. Hermione was the first to get sorted and after about a minute the Hat screamed out "GRYFFINDOR!" and I cheered along with the others Fang, Harry, Angle, Gazzy, Nudge, and Iggy were put in Gryffindor as well. "Ride, Maximum" said Professor McGonagall. And I went up and sat on the stool and my nerves spiking through the roof.
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