Hey, guys! Wow, it's been a while. Well, I had laptop troubles, and when I tried to login last night to post this part, there was a glitch, so... Anyway, this part was written by my co-author Aklana (yeah, same name as the character. That was a typo on my part. Long story), so if there is craziness or something you don't understand, sorry. We were very unclear with stuff in the beginning, and I tried to fix that the best I could without changing the content of the story.
YAY! My two reviewers, you are Gods. I can now thank you properly. By the way, Dragongirl, you were right. It's more the Ohio-Indiana-Illinois area. That whole Northwest corner of the Midwest. My parents grew up around there.
Anyway, yeah. Keep on R&Ring! You wouldn't BELIEVE how appreciated it is! Enjoy!
P.S.: By the way, we never really say what all the original characters look like. You have to use your imagination, though I said a few times Lara has red hair.
Signed, your friend, sonorahugagi
DISCLAIMER: Since this IS a fanfiction site, and everyone understands that, I don't see why this is needed; I'll cover my basics anyway... I DO NOT, nor WILL I EVER, own Doctor Who or any of its spin-offs. If I did, you wouldn't see this here -- it'd be the show!
THE DOCTOR WHO EXPERIENCE
Chapter 2: Jack, the Doctor, Martha, the girls, and Maufuki go on a little trip...
Aklana and Lara had reached the cornfield when they saw something move in the dewy green corn. Aklana turned on the spot and ran toward the house.
"Where are you going Aklana?" Lara yelled after her.
"I'm getting my book and your camera. WE HAVE TO DOCUMENT!!" she answered. Aklana returned moments later with her book and Lara's disposal camera.
"Why do you need your book?"
"Uh, hello? Where have you been for the last two weeks?" Aklana waved the book, 'The Time Machine' by H.G. Wells, right up in her face. "This book is the Time Machine, and it has that one paper with the TARDIS on it. We might need it for future references."
Ah. Lara remembered. She'd found a picture on the Internet with the TARDIS on it, and it had something about a fan stealing it. 'The Time Machine' was appropriate because it was about a time machine.
As Aklana finished, a figure came out of the field. It was the Doctor! They were amazed because the wish came true.
"Hello there." The Doctor said with his cheeky grin. Lara took a picture and the Doctor looked surprised, and then did a quick pose. Lara started to wind the camera back up to take another picture when Aklana knocked it to ground. Lara gave her a look and Aklana shrugged.
Then out of the blue they started asking questions, more at each other than at the Doctor. The Doctor realized they were so flustered that they had introduced themselves to each other. Before he could think anything else, though, the two girls ran in the cornfield looking for the TARDIS.
When they found it, they ran inside, said a hurried "Hi!" to Martha, whose mouth dropped open, and ran into the first hallway they saw. They kept making right-hand turns, looking in every door, until they came to a door that was locked.
"What do we do, the door's locked. I know; do you have a screwdriver?" Aklana asked.
"What, why would I have a screwdriver?" Lara said, giving her friend a weird look.
As they were arguing, they heard the TARDIS door close, the Doctor asked Martha a question, and the girls got the door unlocked with a bobby pin Lara had in her pocket. As they rushed inside the room they turned on the light.
"Oh my God, is that a Dalek?" Lara asked in astonishment.
"Yeah, and that's a cyber man... and there's a Chelonian, a Foamasi, ooooooh, and there's a Giant Spider of Metebelis Three. Cool!!" Aklana squealed. At the look on Lara's face, Aklana shrugged. "They're old, you wouldn't know of most of them..."
"There you two stowaways are." Martha said from behind them. The girls jumped, and followed her to the deck where they saw Captain Jack Harkness and the Doctor arguing with each other. Jack saw them first and stopped.
"Hello there... and you two would be?"
"Jack... why don't you just SHUT UP. Gosh, haven't you ever noticed that my guests are never interested in you and that they are always interested in me. You egotistical maggot." The Doctor finished, giving the two girls one of his famous smiles. Aklana blushed.
"My name is Lara and this is Aklana. I'm 19 and she'll be 19 in a month." Lara said, smiling at Jack with a copy of the Doctor's smile.
"Well then, what are you doing here on the TARDIS?" The Doctor asked them.
Instead of answering his question, Aklana began to ramble about something else.
"Well, you're the Doctor, a Time Lord from the planet Galifrey, and until just recently thought you were the last one of your kind. She's Martha, the companion, who's studying to be a doctor and probably wouldn't be here if Rose wasn't sucked into that parallel universe. Then that means the guy you keep glaring at, Doctor, is Captain Jack Harkness, who you found before you changed into what you are now and... you secretly want to be ginger." Aklana finished, with her voice scratchy from being dry.
"How do you know all that?" Martha asked in amazement. Lara and Aklana quickly answered 2 different answers.
"T.V." "Internet!" They both said it almost exactly at the same time, though, so it sounded more like "Tinternet!" They looked at each other and shouted "Tinternet!" again.
"It's like the TARDIS and only we can control it." Lara concluded as they looked at each other in relief. Martha started to laugh.
"Right, well, I'll make you a deal... since you've both seen the TARDIS, I will take the both of you on one trip as a whole... which equals 1 trip, I think. Any place you want me to stop first?" the Doctor decided.
The girls looked at each other.
"Yeah... take us to our friend Maufuki's house; we want to take her with us." The two answered. When they picked her up, she was almost literally bouncing off the walls.
"Maufuki, did you even take your medicine today?" Aklana asked. Turning to the Doctor, she added, "Maufuki has A.D.H.D."
"Uhhhhhhhh, what medicine?" Maufuki said as they landed. The group got out and explored some. When they finally stopped, Jack and the Doctor started arguing again.
"Hey!!" Lara screamed, silencing them. "What's that?"
"Probably one of the inhabitants of the planet." Jack said, pointing out the obvious. As the Doctor and Jack continued arguing, a creature came up behind Aklana and bit her on the neck. She knew instantly what it was and began jumping for joy.
"YES, I WAS BITTEN BY A VAMPIRE! ... My neck hurts. I GET TO LIVE FOREVER! ... My neck really, REALLY hurts. I'm going to be a vampire, HOORAY! ... What are you standing there for, CALL AN AMBULANCE!!" She finished and shortly after passed out.
Jack quickly stopped arguing and picked Aklana up in his masculine arms. As he stood back up and tried to walk back to the TARDIS, the Doctor stopped him and pointed out that they were surrounded by vampires.