A/N: Kay, So I got 20 reviews for this, all asking for more, and many claiming that they have also seen the vid. That's really cool. I love you guys, you're all so supportive! I'm really happy, because this is my first femslash. I hope to continue until I finish. Also I'm not following the vid completely; I just got my idea for it. I'm sorry for taking so long, first I lost internet for 2 months…again. Then I got Married, So I've been busy. But here it is. Also this one is longer than the last one. I'm just glad that people are reading it. So here is the next chapter. It's in Mavis' POV
Night Out:
Chapter 2:
I couldn't believe it; my Dad actually let me go outside. It was going to be my 118th birthday tomorrow, I would finally be an adult. I could go fly free as much as I wanted. I sored through the sky, dancing on the wind. I saw a field, and couldn't help myself. I landed and changed back to human form, and dace gleefully through the field it was amazing. I never felt freer.
Suddenly, I heard a twig snap; and ran to hide behind a nearby tree. My heart raced, and I couldn't seem to catch my breath. I had to mentally calm myself down, as I thought what could possibly have made the sound. More importantly, I was a Vampire. So why was I hiding. I looked cautiously around the tree toward where the sound had come from.
I saw a girl with beautiful long blond hair, only her hair was stuck around almost all of the tree branches and twigs. I felt sorry for her. She must have known that hair that long would get caught somehow. I wondered how a girl could keep hair that long so beautiful, I also wondered if she ever had spilt ends. After a minute of watching her tangle herself even more, I walked over through the trees to where she was.
"Hey there. I'm Mavis. What's your name" I said, as I neared her. She turned quickly when I started speaking, with a scared look on her face. It seemed that she hadn't heard me coming. Understandable, I'm a vampire, we're naturally quiet. But then she opened her mouth, and let out a painfully loud scream.
I covered my ears until she finished. She had fallen backwards to the ground, and had gotten even more tangled. I slowly walked toward, which made her try to back up, but couldn't because she was too tangled. I sigh and kneeled down to try again.
"Hey, I'm Mavis. What's your name?" I said again. She seemed to be slightly over her shock. She took a few deep breaths before looking me in the eye. She smiled politely.
"I'm Rapunzel." She said sweetly. She had a beautiful voice; it was like honey mixed with lavender. It was sweet, light, and gentle. She still seemed a little frightened, but she was being friendly. She tried to stand up, but was pulled back down by her hair. I had to stifle a laugh.
"Here, let me help you out." I said, as I slowly began to untangle her hair. She soon started helping too. It took a while but we managed to finally untangle it all. I could have done it easily with my magic, but I didn't want to scare more than she already was.
"Thanks." She said, standing up. She started to ravel it up. It seemed so troublesome; I wondered why she had hair that long. Plus carrying it like that wouldn't be very good. I tried to think of a better way for her to move around.
"Hey, why don't we braid your hair? It might be easier to move around that way." I said as she tried to leave with the awkward bundle. At first she just froze, then she seemed to warm up to me.
"Well, that might be better. That way, I won't always have someone to help me untangle it, right?" She said, turning around. She sounded more confident than she looked. She seemed like she was terrified of me. Were humans really scared of monsters….I'd always been told that humans just hated and killed us. Could they possibly be scared of us?...
"I know of a fast way to braid it…But you'd have to promise not to freak out." I said slowly. She tilted her head, and gave a curious face. Then she seemed to remember something and laughed aloud. I was startled at first, till I noticed how beautiful her laugh was. Soon she began to calm down her laughter.
"Sorry" She said. "I'm usually the one that would say that." She smiled at me. I felt more comfortable being with her by the minute." I'll show you mine if you show me yours…The freak out thing I mean." She said, almost daring me.
"Okay, but don't freak." I replied. I waved my hands about, wildly and fast in a braid formation. Within minutes, all the hair had been braided into a big, bold braid; that ended at her heels. There was a bead of sweat on my forehead from exerting that much energy. I sighed and wiped it away.
"There done. But I feel like it's missing something." With another bit of energy, I managed to bring flowers from the ground, which had been ruined in the tangle; and put them into her braid. "Better." I Sighed. Then fainted
A/N: So here it is. Please R&R. I will post more frequently. I'll do a chapter a day until, I have finished the 5 ongoing stories I'm working on. Then I will Just post a chapter a week, and only have one story going at a time….Maybe…Hopefully….. Well Love you guys, Please continue to be supportive.
