Okay, here is chapter one! I hope it's better than the last one XD I typed that on my phone (aka my Cellular Device) so, anyway this is Alice's point of view, I was thinking at first; Should I do this in third person? Or first person? Or do both? And, if I do both, how am I going to pull it off? I decided, because I like both, I'll do both.. but, the story will tend to lean first person, instead of third person point of view. Oh! And the titles of the chapters will give you a clue on who's talking, and have any of you heard Estelle's "Conqueror"? It's the most beautiful song ever. I also forgot to mention, this story will be like a "mixed media" project, and what I mean by that is, it will have poetry and regular story telling, so, I hope you enjoy that! Anyway, on with the story!
"ALICE!"
My mother is the Red Queen who yells mean words at me,
words that hurt like stones,
that instead of breaking my bones,
they break my heart,
and tear me apart-
bit
by
bit
"COME HERE, YOU WORTHLESS CHILD!"
I can't take it.
But I do,
because hope blooms.
"RIGHT NOW!"
She never yells at sissy,
who's the most perfect pretty little missy-
but that isn't me.
"ALICE!"
Ever since father died, she's gotten worse.
But, at least I have my wonderland, that's the only place where I belong.
I go downstairs,
I want to run from the evil queen,
I want to run and never be seen again.
I stand in front of her, my shield in front of me-
"Can you explain this?"
She points as the paper, a big fat "F" is it's name,
I don't say anything, I am silent,
my shield,
is the silence.
"You think this is funny?" she walks over,
my weapon is my silence.
I am like the slaves,
who rebelled in unknown ways over their masters.
"Or- maybe your just stupid."
Words hurt me,
like whips
as she rips
my newly repaired heart,
that got fixed the day before-
should I even try to fix it anymore?
I feel her slap,
"ANSWER ME YOUNG LADY!"
Tears want to cry,
I want to kiss this world goodbye,
I want to die.
These emotions flooding me,
controlling me,
killing me,
why
won't
anyone
help
me?
This
girl
who
is falling
down
this
hole
deeper
and deeper
I feel
my
heart
b
r
e
a
k
i
n
g
n
I can't hear her words,
but then they come up again,
breaking through my shield of silence,
"You ungrateful little bitch, go to your room."
I walk away,
"With all I do for you, I still can't believe you can act like this."
Why does she hate me?
What did I do?
I go,
to my sanctuary,
the room she doesn't dare enter.
I close the door and cry,
tears falling down like rain,
as my tears and sobs echo in the room.
I hiccup,
and give up,
and go to Wonderland.
As I
F
a
l
l
d
o
w
n
t
h
e
r
a
b
b
i
t
h
o
l
e
that leads to happiness.
GUYS.
I meant to update yesterday, but that didn't happen.
Sorry, So I hope you like this, and yeah.
Next, is Peter's chapter.
I am so sorry, but this story is gonna be sad as fuck, I am just warning you guys in advance. So, if I really get your feels going, I'm sorry. Because, I am probably gonna make myself sad too, and get really attached to these characters, like I do with a lot of characters (*cough* Jack *cough* Frost *cough*) Anyway, but don't worry, this story will be like life itself, full of emotions.
But, if you guys wouldn't mind- could you review? *Puppy eyes* Please? Tell me what you think, your reviews really encourage me and help me keep moving on with the story, which is why I deleted it, because I wanted to make the story better for you guys! AND HAVE A WEEKLY UPDATE SCHEDULE! SO YEAH! I REALLY HATE YELLING- SO WHY AM I DOING IT?! Okay, I'm done. Thanks for reading!
