Ello everyone!
After some work, I have completed the first chapter.
Oh, and i'll try working on the whole capitalizing issue, it's a bit of an..odd habit I have, but i'm working on fixing it.
Anyways, here's the first chapter!
(The story idea was adopted from 'Spirit of the Brook', and warriors belongs to Erin Hunter)
Echokit let out a loud squeak as Crowkit tackled her, quickly hearing her mother pull him off.
"Crowkit! What did I tell you about playing so roughly with your sisters, especially since Echokit hasn't opened her eyes!" Darkbreeze meowed in a semi-stern tone.
'Humph, I'm trying to open my eyes, it's just hasn't worked out for me yet,' Echokit thought, before attempting to open her eyes, as she had been doing at the start of each day.
And, it seemed as if luck was on her side today, as her eyes flew open, before she snapped them shut, in order to protect herself from the blinding lights.
Finally opening her eyes again, slowly this time, she noticed a black tom kit looking at her with a huge grin on his face.
"Mother! Mother! Echokit has opened her eyes!" The tom kit, who she decided must be Crowkit, meowed loudly.
Echokit turned her head to the side to see a large black and grey she-cat, who then warmly smiled down at her, before exclaiming, "Oh! Your eyes are...quite interesting!"
Echokit tilted her head slightly, her eyes were...interesting? What does that mean, is that good or bad?
Her mother watched her for another second before chuckling slightly, sitting down and beginning a lesson about talking.
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Echokit had opened her eyes two sunrises ago, from what she remembered, she had learned the names of her mother and siblings, and also learned that there were two other kits in the nursery, and that they were a whole moon older than her!
Suddenly, Echokit heard loud voices, one sounding similar to her mother, Darkbreeze.
Looking around, she also noticed that Darkbreeze was no longer in the nest.
Echokit rose from the nest, and nudged Crowkit with her nose.
"Huh? Echokit, why are you waking me up so early?" Crowkit questioned, tiredly looking up at Echokit.
"Mother is talking loudly with somebody outside," Echokit meowed, "I want to hear what they're talking about!"
"Huh? She must be talking to father, she does that a lot," Crowkit meowed, getting up and stretching.
'Father? Who's that?' Echokit thought, confused, as she had never heard of a cat called 'father' before.
Echokit quietly padded over to the entrance, Crowkit close behind.
As she made it to the entrance, she peeked out and saw her mother and a large orange-ish looking tabby tom, he glared down at Echokit's mother with an intensity that made Echokit shudder.
"I'm telling you, Darkbreeze! That thing you call a kit, isn't normal!" The tom meowed angrily.
"Just because her eyes look slightly different doesn't make her a freak!" Darkbreeze meowed back, claws digging into the ground.
"If you're going to let that thing stay near my kits! Then, you're no longer my mate!" The tom meowed, before turning around and stomping away.
With the conversation over, Echokit and Crowkit headed back to the nest so they wouldn't get caught.
But, as Echokit curled up, she could help but wonder, 'Who was that tom?...And, whats wrong with my eyes?'
Hope you enjoyed the first chapter!